@rae
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@esther-c Tysm for your advice!! 💖 @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @smiley @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyone-else
Another Riker scene!! And, finally, a Leon scene😂💖 Because apparently Leon/Riker are still running free in my mind even tho I thought I would take a break from them. XD
(and I apologize for…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Any tips for writing serious characters? in the forum Characters 8 months, 3 weeks ago
This might be more of a side thread, but it also helps to know how aware the character is of their own seriousness, and how aware they allow others to be when that seriousness pops up.
For example, the chewing-lip-denial @rae just mentioned suggests the character doesn’t know they are expressive in the first place, or it suggests the character…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@rae @koshka @smiley @esther-c @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-lol
Now I have the full Riker scene 🥰👀✨
anyone wanna read??? 👀👀
His arms ached beneath the weight of the hefty wooden box; his fingers strained to keep a steady grip on the material.
Riker lifted the container onto a sturdy metal shelf; he pushed the large box back,…
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Loopy replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
Finally doing some actual writing outside of role plays lol
This is the first time Lois and Felicity meet. I’m still figuring out backstories, plot line, and world building. Also, I’m not done, I’m just impatient to show people. I’ll post more once I finish. :]
Felicity’s shoes rubbed and pinched at her ankles as she walked down the empty…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @smiley @koshka @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else-lol-XD
Recent writing snippet!!
(this is the scene I’ve been working on, and thought I’d share a snippet here!!)
Would Isaiah, Fin, and Jennie lie? Would Isaiah lie about the fact that God was merciful? Would Fin lie about his past and how…
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
(Reposting, because the original was long to the infinite abyss of moderation.)
This is a novella that I wrote over the last eight weeks for my creative writing class. I am quite pleased with how it came out. If anyone would like to give me feedback, or just read it for fun, here is the link (in reply.) Feel free to give me a chapter-by-chapter…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 1 week ago
@esther-c @acancello @grcr (you’re gonna love this scene….lol) @freed_and_redeemed @anyone-else-i-forgot
Here’s another scene I wrote while revising…
Note: I’m changing it so that Sef has a crush on Cassian (Lilitu’s older brother) BEFORE she falls for Lilitu. So don’t freak out, Lefse is most DEFINITELY still a thing! <3
Sef cowered…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 1 week ago
@esther-c @koshka @rae Thank y’all so much for reading and being so kind! 🥰🥰 Oh, and *offers tissues to all*…there we go XD
Honestly, rn the only one who is a struggle is Riker.
I know where Leon’s story is going…I know how Leon will finally come back to God…I know how he will come to the end of himself…
but Riker is another…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 1 week ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @rae @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD
Anyone want a Leon/Riker update??👀
welp, you’re getting one anyways XD
TRIGGER WARNING: GUILT/SHAME. MENTIONS OF SIN. ALCOHOL. BAR FIGHT. BLOOD.Â
(but…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 9 months, 1 week ago
Hmmm…. Idk maybe:
- Reed or Reid
- Itzak
- Mekhi
- Iokua (yo-koo-ah)
- Nasir
- Arturo
- Vihaan
- Yahir
Well… if those are too “rough sounding”, I can try to come up with “softer/sweeter” ones, if you want. 😊
why do I feel like I’m ordering a custom leather belt or something?!LOL
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whaley started the topic Summer Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@power (first and foremost) @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @esther-c @trailblazer @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @highscribeofaetherium @rae @smiley @keilah-h (when you get back!) @anyone
Heyo! I have a new project in the works over the summer; it is a fantasy romance inspired by the likes of The Princess Bride and Jane Austen. I have written…[Read more]
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Liberty started the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 1 week ago
@esther
Hi everyone!
I’ve not been on KP in a while…I kind of forgot about it during life, but recently I’ve steadily worked on my first-ever printed book! I didn’t say published, because I’m not publishing it. At least, not yet. Currently,…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
@folith-feolin @theducktator @rae @koshka
Thank y’all for all of your thoughts! They were IMMENSELY helpful!! (and I realized something about Frida {the stepmother} today that I didn’t realize before…let’s just say she deserves the nickname “Evil Lady” even more now😭😡 poor Felix *sobs*)
and with that, I will be changing Felix a bit (mostly…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @theducktator @rae @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @smiley @godlyfantasy12 @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-pls-helpppppppp-XD
Ok, so I have a bit of a plot hole.
For those of y’all who don’t know, I have five characters (all of whom are MC’s in their own novel) who I have…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
@theducktator *offers tissues* I teared up too😭
@koshka Uhmmmmm SPOILERS XD
@keilah-h and still koshka
I’m so glad y’all like it so far!!
I make no promises that any specific person will survive, although I don’t think I could kill Matthias…I have become too attached already😂 It happened so fast💖
nor do I think I could part with…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
I have more of Matthias (and others!!)
A scene (although there may be more at the beginning of it) and a snippet of the next scene (although there would be a POV scene from the 2nd MC between these two scenes, of course) that I wanted to share!!!
here it is!!!
and I officially love Moishe even more❤️😭💖
“I was v…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @esther-c (Hmm, he’s probably been playing since he was…mmm 10 probably. His mother taught him how to play, hehe. Although he stopped for several years…so he’s probably played for around…7 years or so?? He stopped after he married Iris, but still remembers how to play. (he even plays it in Freedom’s Fire once <3)) @rae @koshka @e…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @rae @koshka @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD
Ok, soooooo I’ve been trying to brainstorm for another novel idea of mine that I’ve had for a while and would like to hear some inputs/thoughts
So, thanks to my Mom’s creativity, I finally figured out why Erich, a side character (and…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@esther-c @whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @rae @joy-calle @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lol
Sooooo I’m currently working on a scene for one of my novels…and I need some advice😅
The two MCs of this novel have both been imprisoned by Soviet Forces (this is 1950s East Germany, btw) for being involved in the underground church.
It’s…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 4 weeks ago
@grcr @whalekeeper @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @smiley @rae @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @gracie-j @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
who wants to read more Leon and Riker???
perhaps no one, but I want to share anyhow😂
anywhoooo, here we gooooooooooo
Klaus…Louisa…everyone sai…
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