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whaley started the topic Summer Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@power (first and foremost) @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @esther-c @trailblazer @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @highscribeofaetherium @rae @smiley @keilah-h (when you get back!) @anyone
Heyo! I have a new project in the works over the summer; it is a fantasy romance inspired by the likes of The Princess Bride and Jane Austen. I have written…[Read more]
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Liberty started the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@esther
Hi everyone!
I’ve not been on KP in a while…I kind of forgot about it during life, but recently I’ve steadily worked on my first-ever printed book! I didn’t say published, because I’m not publishing it. At least, not yet. Currently,…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
@folith-feolin @theducktator @rae @koshka
Thank y’all for all of your thoughts! They were IMMENSELY helpful!! (and I realized something about Frida {the stepmother} today that I didn’t realize before…let’s just say she deserves the nickname “Evil Lady” even more now😭😡 poor Felix *sobs*)
and with that, I will be changing Felix a bit (mostly…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @theducktator @rae @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @smiley @godlyfantasy12 @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-pls-helpppppppp-XD
Ok, so I have a bit of a plot hole.
For those of y’all who don’t know, I have five characters (all of whom are MC’s in their own novel) who I have…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
@theducktator *offers tissues* I teared up too😭
@koshka Uhmmmmm SPOILERS XD
@keilah-h and still koshka
I’m so glad y’all like it so far!!
I make no promises that any specific person will survive, although I don’t think I could kill Matthias…I have become too attached already😂 It happened so fast💖
nor do I think I could part with…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
I have more of Matthias (and others!!)
A scene (although there may be more at the beginning of it) and a snippet of the next scene (although there would be a POV scene from the 2nd MC between these two scenes, of course) that I wanted to share!!!
here it is!!!
and I officially love Moishe even more❤️😭💖
“I was v…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @esther-c (Hmm, he’s probably been playing since he was…mmm 10 probably. His mother taught him how to play, hehe. Although he stopped for several years…so he’s probably played for around…7 years or so?? He stopped after he married Iris, but still remembers how to play. (he even plays it in Freedom’s Fire once <3)) @rae @koshka @e…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @rae @koshka @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD
Ok, soooooo I’ve been trying to brainstorm for another novel idea of mine that I’ve had for a while and would like to hear some inputs/thoughts
So, thanks to my Mom’s creativity, I finally figured out why Erich, a side character (and…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@esther-c @whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @rae @joy-calle @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lol
Sooooo I’m currently working on a scene for one of my novels…and I need some advice😅
The two MCs of this novel have both been imprisoned by Soviet Forces (this is 1950s East Germany, btw) for being involved in the underground church.
It’s…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@grcr @whalekeeper @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @smiley @rae @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @gracie-j @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
who wants to read more Leon and Riker???
perhaps no one, but I want to share anyhow😂
anywhoooo, here we gooooooooooo
Klaus…Louisa…everyone sai…
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freedom replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @koshka @rae @esther-c @anyone-else-help-meeeeeee
SOOOOOOO i’m currently working on Book 2 (Broken Shackles) of my main Trilogy (the trilogy that only features Leon/Riker as the MCs/POVs throughout all three novels)
but I’m really struggling with the middle of it 😩
I’m currently on…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@loopylin @koshka @whalekeeper @rae @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else-lol
Sooooooo, knowing how sad that chapter was…I give to y’all the following chapter!!!
The first half is kinda bittersweet (ok, ok, it’s still kinda sad…I’M SORRY, OK???😭💖) but the second half of the chapter…..eeeeeee, I love it sm and it is soooo…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Random tagssss @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @rae @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @acancello @grcr @anyone-else-cuz-i-can’t-think-of-anyone-else-right-now
Ignore tag or read on!
Just wanted to share a cute scene from a WIP that I’ve been working on a little too much. 😉
I seriously should be working on my main WIP rn, but whatever.It’s not p…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @esther-c @smiley @rae @anyone-else
ok, ok, I know I’m supposed to be gone but I really want some feedback on this chapter…I like how it turned out but I just REALLYYYYY need some feedback, haha, so I may still pop on and off on occasion but don’t expect…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Headaches in the Form of Characters. Help! in the forum Characters 10 months ago
Are you having problems with his younger self?
My immediate reaction was a mischievous giggle which I think came straight from Alpha himself.
Most of the hard Alpha is from after Emmie died, which is his thirties. His latter twenties were his years of bliss, and before that …
BTW, these ages are not set in stone yet. I just have…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Headaches in the Form of Characters. Help! in the forum Characters 10 months ago
Honestly, I think I forgot about this…
Anyways…
What are the main characteristics in Alpha that you want to keep?
Mainly his warrior mindset. For instance:
Grief is a weakness.
Watch your six o’clock.
Never give up until you die.
Personality is a result of purpose. We have a purpose for every character in a story,…
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Ruee Hamster Huey posted an update 10 months ago
Krogen: “Batten down the hatches, reef the main sail, shiver me timbers, here comes the mother of all typhoons! But we…”
“Krogen, Krogen, we’re in a rowboat, and that typhoon is a ripple.”
“Shut up. Or I’ll find a pool noodle.”
“What’s a pool noodle?”
“Shut up your mouth.” -
The Most Esteemed Feathered One posted an update 10 months ago
🎵When the sunlight has gone, and the green hills turn gray,
And the day turns to evening somehow,
Then I’m thinking of you, though you’re so far away,
And I’m wanting you close to me now.Oh chocolate chip cookies, so high on the shelf, hiding inside of a jar.
I’m not tall enough, to reach you myself, so near, and yet so very far…🎵-
@theducktator
OH MY GOSH I KNOW THAT SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
We used to get the Philadelphia Chickens book ALL THE TIME from the library and I love that song!!!!!!!-
@savannah_grace2009
I want a cookie! XD We own Philadelphia Chickens and several others. One of my sisters plays them all the time. 😆They are so fun!-
@theducktator
Have you ever listened to the “Blue Moon” book?
It is another one, similar to Philadelphia Chickens!
Is it Philadelphia Chickens that has the Aardvarks do the “intermission” show?? I always loved that part!!-
@savannah_grace2009
Yes! We have Blue Moo, Philadelphia Chickens, and Rhinoceros Tap. The others we get from the library.
Yes! I love the Intermission Show! Every time I go anywhere with an intermission, my siblings and I always sing that! “Technically, we’re not cows. We’re aardvarks!”-
I love those songs sooo much…I played them on YouTube after our conversation and it brings back so many memories!
OH MY GOSH and I love the Speed Turtle one…and the Singing in the Shower one….I love them all!
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@savannah_grace2009
For some reason it won’t let me reply to your comment. I memorized Singing in the Shower, and for a while I would sing it every time I showered! One of my sisters still does. And Be Like a Duck is probably my favorite! And Dance it Off, and Personal Penguin, and Ducks in a Row!
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I was thinking it was a love poem as I read the beginning.
Chocolate chip cookies.
I died laughing.-
@stephie
It’s called Faraway Cookies. I highly recommend you listen to the rest of it. It’s hilarious.
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freedom posted a new activity comment 10 months, 1 week ago
@rae I don’t really know what to say other than to say that you are not alone. I’ve been in really dark places before…places I hope to never return to.
I’ve had a lot on my mind lately, and Tho
I haven’t been in a dark place at all, I’ve also been just really thinking about where I need to get my life in check.I know you feel alone and I know…[Read more]
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I have been talking to my best friend recently. But not my parents. My Dad knows I’m having a rough time, but he only knows a fraction. My mom knows nothing. I don’t want her to worry.
Maybe that’s the entire reason I’ve mostly closed the door to my emotions. I’m afraid if I let them spill, everyone will worried, not just you and my friend, and…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @rae @whoever
Y’all GUESS WHAT. Marcel has a best friend now and I am in love with this character concept. Like I actually cannot. It’s so good. I can’t talk about it because I like to leave new characters to simmer for a week or so before I mess with them… but he needed a best friend and NOW HE HAS ONE
I will say she…[Read more]
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#WondiansnotknowingEarthlingtermsagain
#PirateKrogen
#imaginaryadultfairytales
@theducktator @keilah-h you two probably would want to see this… Cgecko helped me out.
I think this is my favorite Krogen thing ever XD
@rae
🤣🤣🤣 That’s hilarious! “We’re in a rowboat and that typhoon is a ripple.” 🤣
LOL Krogen is hilarious.