Precious Y

Hello,

im sorry that you’re going through so much stress.

1. It’s definitely okay to be worried and stressed especially after recovering from COVID. Make sure to do things that prioritize your mental and physical  health above all else.

2. First of all don’t feel bad that you’re not writing right now. You seem to be juggling a lot of stuff…[Read more]

@ribbonash,

It’s really nice to meet you to

1. I’ve recently started reading fantasy and I love the magic systems. And I plan for there to be a magic system in my own story. But it’s disguised as a science competition so maybe there is a little sci-fi twist in there to!

2. I would like to write some short stories and other stuff (maybe…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting @gracie-j @scripter-of-kingdoms @faith-q and @godlyfantasy12 @mkfairygirl

Guys this is great. I can’t wait for the anthology to come out so we witness your hardwork!

@elfwing

I’m probably later at answering in this thread than Kaunon in returning home. But I love this scene so much! First Kaunon makes the rounds among his different family members. And him reuniting with his parents is really heartwarming. But the kiss that he shared with Alinna is literally the best! Hope you have more heartwarming moments…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Sorry for answering up so late. I’m recently been in a stint where I’ve been stressting…um studying for the SAT. Now I’ve decided to come out of my hole and hopefully my days will be more balanced.

I completely understand the fact that you’ve struggled with. I mean Paul is just a great messenger for God when it comes to spreading…[Read more]

@elfwing

Hey. I’m glad you like my name. Precious is a great name for a character in your story and you could make it indicate a lot about their personality

That sounds great! I love the mischeivous character with a heart of gold

Oh that makes so much more sense. It is merciful for them to die when their spouses die. Because immortality isnt as…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

This is such a great discussion topic. The truth is that I’ve never fallen out of love with writing because I haven’t written consistently enough. I think the reason why is that I put so much pressure on myself that I gave up before giving myself a good start. What’s your advice for this issue? So I think that now this summer that…[Read more]

Hey @joy-caroline

First of all, can I say that I love all of your discussion topics. Looking through this thread and reading other people’s responses has given me so much inspiration!

I think that Peter’s misbelief makes so much sense because he was once a persecutor of followers of Christ. And after being saved he feels so overwhelmed by…[Read more]

@abigail-m

1.That sounds great. It’s so cool that you’re taking initiative with your writing and trying to get more work out.

2.  I’m currently still outlining and discovery writing for my novel idea; I haven’t officially began my first draft yet. I think your short story project will give you more of an opportunity to develop and learn more…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Ooh! That sounds great.  Is your story told from the perspective of your villain? Or is your villain more of a antagonist? My work in progress involves main characters who are morally ambiguous because of their worldviews. But I haven’t gotten beyond “stereotypically evil and wants to destroy the world and hurt people” for my…[Read more]

@elfwing,

Thank you so much for that excerpt. I really enjoyed it because you got to learn more about Kaunon. In the last one you only understood that Alinna is a brave and selfless person. But here Kaunon was also great and you could really feel his bravery as he fought the dragons and panic about how Alinna was doing.

It totally makes sense…[Read more]

@elfwing

your welcome. ooh thanks, I definitely want to know what happened to Alinna!

@elfwing

Your scene is really interesting. And I could feel the tension between them as Kaunon tried to make Alinna leave without him. And you could also clearly see the love between them. And I love how in this scene girl saves boy. I hope you put out more:)

@devastate-lasting

I think that your scene is super heartbreaking. It makes me feel the same way I feel about historical retellings of the Holocaust. Or if it’s not I’m guessing you’re writing about war.

My favorite quote in your entire scene is

“It’s okay to cry.” The old woman’s voice was soft. “I just thought that bad people didn’t cry.”

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@ben-dykes

Hey Ben! I’m Precious and I’m also kind of new here. I’m also interested in writing science fiction and fantasy and I’ve read some cool adventure fiction. I think that Brandon Sanderson brings the best of these worlds together. I’d recommend The Reckoners series (I read the first one and it’s great). I’ve also heard that Mistborn is a…[Read more]