@power
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Ruth replied to the topic One More Chance – A Story by R.A.E. in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 8 months ago
I shall change that part! Thank you!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Awakening of Halfpaw Protector in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I like it! very intriguing!
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@grcr @spinner4him @jonas @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @hanako @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @devastate-lasting @power
Hey, Veterans Day is this upcoming Saturday.
Honestly, before Veterans Day was nothing more than a name, I never put a date to it, never thought about it. My homeschooled co-op did a small ceremony, but it meant…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@grcr @spinner4him @jonas @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @hanako @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @devastate-lasting @power @anyone randomly looking at my profile.
I would like some serious criticizing on this scene. I don’t want to hear anything like “It’s good” I want to hear stuff like, “It needs help here…” “It’s fine here…” I don’t…[Read more]
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I think the second part flows pretty well!
This paragraph, “Something impacted Nahim’s armor about six inches above where his plate ended at the bottom of the rib cage. There was a boom and a flash from the object. Nahim drew his gun and aimed into the fog. His helmet searched for some signature from the person who had shot at him, but it could d…[Read more]-
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic I SHOULD have been named EDGER!!!! in the forum Poetry 2 years, 9 months ago
@power 😁👍
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @spinner4him @freedomwriter76 @power @euodia-vision @hybridlore Hey, could you guys all pray for my family and I? My entire family is going through some hard times, and I’ve been…*sigh*…living in a fog. That’s the easiest way to explain it. Thanks, guys.
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I’m sorry. I’ll definitely be praying.
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@rae
Me too!!
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Praying for you girl!
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Kads replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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Aranel started the topic Killing Characters in the forum Plotting 2 years, 9 months ago
@euodia-vision @trailblazer @hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom @acancello @esther-c @jonas @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @power @rae and anyone else:
What are some good reasons to kill MCs? I have to kill two of them in this one scene because if I don’t, the only option is to use a Deus ex machina, or throw out the scene.
Basically, two characters are…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I didn’t say they couldn’t have personality and coolness. It’s personal preference, but I think swords are cooler.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
What are those pictures supposed to mean?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Uh… I’m just going to go… *backs away slowly*
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Ruth replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Okay, I was figuring it had something to do with war… But that sounds interesting. To still tie it back to this topic What is the choice/spirit weapon of the country?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@everyone @power
Ok, next sword! You make an excellent point Power, but what if the sword is something like this? This one is unnamed, and may or may not be unique:
It is a blade with a physical gap half way through. It is constructed through a 4 dimensional bridge, so the space in-between, any 3 dimensional object can pass through. So it…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ooh, @power, what’s your current WIP called?
You’re making me laugh again! I agree, and I would rather keep my enemy at a spear’s distance than in my face, but Yeah, @jonas is right. Though, I have a rising feeling now to be my weird self and go against norm. Hmmm…
Second quote of the day, Normality is overrated.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Swords are overrated.
Bows and pole weapons are much better.
In real life? Yes, because range is a huge advantage. Swords were historically a sidearm.
But swords are cooler, and have more personality than other weapons.
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Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest
CHAPTER 6-ON BOARD THE NIGHTMARE
Nahim was alone and unbothered for the first time in a while. He ran his right hand over his sling for his left arm but didn’t try to move the shoulder. He was different… -
Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest
Next chapter…I’m just going to post most of my chapters now since I plan to change some of them soo, but want some feedback.
CHAPTER 5-MASTER PAUL
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Ruth replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@power @hanako @thearcaneaxiom
CRYSTAL SWORDS, The weapon of Thurston.
Twelve-year-old Nahim cast little bits of metal and crystal across a rough floor in disgust. He hung his head, every minute of free time he had gone to his little private hiding hole and labored over this project for months, and yet he had no progress to show it. He figured a…
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Ruth started the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
This is an idea spurred by @power, I greatly thank you for it.
I noticed there seemed be nothing recent of the sort and since I have an interest in war stories (and therefore stuff war related slightly) and would like to learn more about this recent hobby of mine, here’s suddenly a new topic.
The only rules I can think of are just the KP…[Read more]
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That’s very interesting. I never really thought much of the day, but this is something to think about. I will pray for the Veterans and our country this Saturday. ❤️ 🇺🇸
@grcr
*A large smile creeps across my face*
My grandpa is a Vietnam veteran actually. He didn’t see any combat, but he did sleep through a hurricane.
I just played the flute and sang in our school Veteran’s Day Concert. It’s amazing how many served our country, and how real the war was to them.
@rae
Thanks for sharing. We definitely need to respect our veterans. I will pray for them too. 🇺🇸
Thanks for sharing!! In America, we definitely take for granted our veterans and all they went through. This is a great reminder!