Power

Joining at :33. Or just sprinting, apparently. XD

Getting this WIP officially underway, hopefully. It looks so nice with a fresh start.

@loopylin

Ah. Ok. That makes more sense. My imagination was getting very excited.

@hybridlore

Actually yes, thx for asking.

I haven’t had beef in a while, but my Lymes has been bothering me in other ways since then. We talked to the doctor yesterday (that was when we could make the appointment) and she ordered some blood tests, so we need to schedule and do that. Hopefully that clears up exactly what’s happening, as she only…[Read more]

@loopylin

Alrighty. *rubs hands together*

Looks fine to me! XD

Although, now I’m curious about the note from Felicity.

Also, Lois’s question reminded me of a part of Viktor’s character I completely forgot. XD

Viktor

This mineral left a husky, gray streak on the plate. Viktor passed the plate to Lois and reached for the second mineral.

It…[Read more]

@keilah-h

wow, Huntress looks cool

And he does too!

@hybridlore

Glad you like the chapters!

*withholds all answers to any and all questions*

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

23-24!!!

@hybridlore

but what if I did?

🫢

@hybridlore

hmm. yeah, I suppose.

Did you see what Abby said at the end of the last chapter? Cracks me up every time I read the comment.

@hybridlore

Oh that. hehe.

Yeah, well he was a little bit over the edge.

Did you expect the boy to fight him, or to try and run away with him?

@hybridlore

what are you mad about now?

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

22-23!!!

@jonas @everyone else

So, I’m sorry, I thought i could do this, but so far it looks like I can’t. Not for lack of time atm, but from lack of inspiration. I’ve been wracking my brain, I have tons of story ideas, but none of them are stories I want to tell right now. From either the plot, the character or the message, none of them are hitting me. I…[Read more]

@keilah-h

lol! So Sniper

@whalekeeper

Ok! I understand. Brain Blah happens to the best of us. I hope you feel better soon.

@hybridlore

Haha. I wish.

Oh, so you want a body, do you? I can go dig it up. Maybe. Government probably burned it through.

@hybridlore

Ugh. I want to shake that kid. Or get Jim.Why do my character gotta do dumb things!!! *sob*

Wait what? Huh. I guess. idk, I feel like I made it pretty clear….

Yes!! I love that chapter!!!

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

20-21!!!

@liberty

Ok, critiques/comments to come later, but I was able to sit down and read through it for now. I love it! I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD

There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those, but…[Read more]