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Power replied to the topic 1st Chapter Critique for The Inventor’s Daughter in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 years, 7 months ago
Just set up another Gmail account, and use it when you don’t people knowing your information. It will ask for your birthday and name, but just don’t put in you real birthday date and use an alias. It can come in handy when a store asks for your email, but you don’t want them flooding your inbox with advertisements.
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Power replied to the topic 1st Chapter Critique for The Inventor’s Daughter in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 years, 7 months ago
@keilah-h and @devastate-lasting, y’all could make a junker gmail account and use that for any transferral of stories.
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Power replied to the topic 1st Chapter Critique for The Inventor’s Daughter in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 years, 7 months ago
It may be to late, but if not I would like to read your chapter. powerofthemongoose@gmail.com
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Power replied to the topic A Rather Belated Introduction in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 7 months ago
A rather belated response, to a rather belated introduction. (4 days… Perhaps not belated enough. Maybe I should wait a little longer to post this post, so it has more belatedness??) Greetings! It’s nice to meet another Nielsen fan! I’m Power, but you can just call me Power! Or the Magnificent Mangy Marooned Mud Mouse if you feel the need to.…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Just a Story Idea in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 years, 8 months ago
You have a group of agents (not sure which branch, possibly FIGs) they are looking into a company (Hurricane, Tornado, or something like that.) that’s is working for Vortex. They infiltrate the business, but get caught. In the end they eradicate the threat.
I also had some thoughts about put a little kid in the story. He was given the device that…[Read more]
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Power started the topic Just a Story Idea in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 years, 8 months ago
An idea popped into my head a while ago, so I decided to write the climax of the story.
“I am unstoppable!” The crazed man gestured to the army of robots behind him then let out an insane cackle. “The world will bow to James Alexander Herring . I’ll kill those who oppose me, and keep the rest as pets and slaves.”
Addison looked over at Kirk. How…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Poems by Power in the forum Poetry 4 years, 8 months ago
A Friendly Reminder to Wear a Coat
the Blustery wind
Chills the bones
Freezes the nose
turns toes Stone
Rips off the ears
makes cheeks Glow
Grips the back
Blinding snow
the arctic Blast
Cools the head
Don’t stay out
or you’ll be Dead!
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Power started the topic in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 8 months ago
So here’s just some stuff on the Miska Chronicles
Prologue
Back, and forth, back, and forth paced the lion. His long tail twitched ever so slightly. Lord Rawson’s golden mane kept on shrouding in darkness the papers his accomplice was reading. But this did not bother the leopard. He was used to the darkness.
There was a knock on the thick cedar…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Hey guys! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 8 months ago
I’m working on a series called the Miska Chronicles.
Sure, I’ll create a post called the Miska Chronicles, and put some stuff on there so I don’t blow this page up.
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Power replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art 4 years, 8 months ago
Another amazing book series. They are a little weird, but ring true. I was a little wary of reading them because of their covers and some of the things in them, but once I finally did peak under the first books cover, the vortex sucked me in, and now I love the series.
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Power replied to the topic Hey guys! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 8 months ago
Yes, most of the time.
Same here. I plan out stories, but find it hard to put on paper. I make maps and have made a massive family tree. 😆
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Power replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art 4 years, 8 months ago
It may sound childish, but it pretty amazing, well written. The Green Embers series in short is about rabbits with sword trying to reconquer their land from wolves and birds of prey . The first book is kinda slow in the middle, but besides that, they’re one of the best series I’ve ever read. For me it’s up there with the Wingfeather Saga and the…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art 4 years, 8 months ago
The one before this one. (I cleaned it up and didn’t save the original copy.)

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Power replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art 4 years, 8 months ago
Fan art, FUN!!!
This is a human version of Weezer, from the Green Embers series, that I drew then put through a face changing app.

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Power replied to the topic Hey guys! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 8 months ago
Hello, Bonjour, Hola, Goedendag, and Anyoung haseyo! (And yes I did just look those up 😉) Glad to make my acquaintance… errr your acquaintance 🤔. I’m new here and don’t know much about scratchen with the old quill pen, so if you need sage advice I recommend conversing with one of the more learned individuals! By the way, did I introduce…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Good morning, afternoon, or evening in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 8 months ago
Greetings and salutations, I am Power or The Black Mongoose for short! I’m me, but since you don’t know who me is I’ll give a short description of him. Five foot, nine inches, and some fraction or other. Great planner, but not so great doer of plans planned. Enjoyer of old and odd weaponry. Oh, and I like Geometry! But now I needs fly from the…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Poems by Power in the forum Poetry 4 years, 9 months ago
@abigail-m Maybe A Warriors Heart or Goofhack the Blabber.
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Power replied to the topic Introduction to Power number 2 in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres Technically all socks have holes, if they didn’t you couldn’t get your feet in them (so perhaps hoping for everyone’s socks to be holeless isn’t as good an idea as first I thought. Or maybe it’s better! *evil snicker*)
@ariel-f If you would like to look into military b strategy you might want to look at The Art of War by Sun Tzu. If…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Poems by Power in the forum Poetry 4 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres Yay, glad of that I could make y’all laugh!
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Power started the topic Introduction to Power number 2 in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
So since my first try at this got mark as spam (I didn’t taste it to find out if it were true) I’m trying again,
Greetings, I am Power (a.k.a. The Black Mongoose). I was homeschool all my life and am going to be attending a community college in the fall. I enjoy studying old weapons, how they work, and the strategies behind how they were used in…[Read more] - Load More
