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Bringing this topic back towards the front

@oriele21

That was good! I liked it. Phew… coulda used a warning about that leg amputation XD little rough but I guess that’s just war

@otherworldly-historian

 

yea its not ur average “death” she turns to “shadow” and it’s done by a shadow creature so the character sorta assume she’s dead as does everyone else, and her “crystal” goes grey. Which means she’s dead….

 

but in the second series it begins sparking…. And two of the MCs suddenly latch onto the hope that, perhaps, s…[Read more]

@sarafini

Y’know funnily enough… I hardly share any of my creative endaevers with my parents. if I have a piece of art that is particularly good and no route for questions that could become personal (why does that character go through this thing) I’ll share it with caution. Both of my parents know I am writing a dystopian ya, my mom knows the…[Read more]

@felicity

Yeah! I love that soundtrack! Do you have a favorite song? I like sticks and stones, and where no one goes. (Ack have I already asked you this question? Lol)

@felicitiy PLEEEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE *begs on hands in knees. Sobs.*

@otherworldly-historian I getcha.

 

Every character I kill stays dead.

 

 

 

except one. I’m bringing her back because I can’t keep her dead. I just can’t. I don’t want her death to be cheapened because of it but I just legit cannot keep her dead.

@freedomwriter76 WAIT….does….does Hans kill Jezyk…..

 

 

i….I forgot that….

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NOOOOOOOOO *sobs*

@freedomwriter76

 

Wow, that was so good! I love the brothers, and there struggles are so relatable and well portrayed! Poor Leo 😭😭😭 I love him and he better get some rest at some point 😭 ( I may or may not have to call the protection squad soon)

“Trust God…he will heal Wolfgang.” She whispered softly.

Not sure how to feel about this scene…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

 

AHH I KUST DO DISHES BUT I CANT WAIT TO READ IT!!!

Except for one scenario I didn’t like when they did cuz it felt cheapened in one series….

@otherworldly-historian

 

I agree with @gwyndalf-the-wise EXCEPT I do like when characters come back to life because I am too attached and cannot be without them for too long XD XD so I am constantly holding to the hope of “PLZ DON’T ACTUALLY BE DEAD XD”

HOWEVER I do feel that is often overused and in some situations shouldn’t be used or can…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 hmm I don’t have any other characters to enter. We can definitely explore more conflict with Hans, also with Erich cuz we haven’t really explored much with him ya know?

Maybe a fight or argument breaks out but it actually escalates this time and doesn’t get handled? (And it doesn’t escalate to November breaking out in flames…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Arabella

Ara turned to Frida, eyes hard.

“Adolphus, your son, is right.” She stated. Soon, she found herself standing in front of the woman, their eyes meeting. Despite their age difference, Ara found they were similar in height, (idk how tall Frida is…XD) and continued to glare at the woman.

Frida snarled…[Read more]

@otherworldlyhistorian

It stands for the young writers workshop, it’s a paid course for young writers.

@godlyfantasy12

Aww November has dimples? I forgot! 😂

 

I used to have a crush on a guy with dimples XD

@freedomwriter76

You haven’t heard of capitol kings? I love there music! I mean it’s kinda a older band and they don’t make music anymore that I’m aware of, but they used to play them on the christian radio back when I was like 4th grade. There music isn’t really like worship music, but it’s clean and has christian elements. Living for the other…[Read more]

@esther-c

 

*twitches*

 

 

NUUUUUUUU U WILL NOT KILL MY BABY LUKAS!!!!! *hugs him and steals him*

 

#PROTECTIONSQUAAAAAAD XD

@freedomwriter76

November

November gave a small smile. He nodded, “Th-thanks…” He lowered his head slightly, trying to avoid the glances Hans kept giving him.

“It’s true! You’re not a bother at all!” Jezyk grinned, making November’s smile widen slightly, his dimples showing.

 

 

 

hey any ideas on what to do next with this group? Maybe so…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

 

FRIDA….oh boy….

Arabella

 

Slapped….her brother…

After everything he’d already been through…

Trying to force him to go back…to…to the abuse…the torment he’d just escaped.

Ara couldn’t imagine the fear he must’ve felt, being in that situation…

Her blood boiled, heart raging. She wanted nothing more in that moment then…[Read more]