Otherworldly Historian

@kyronthearcanin

There was a war, in which the Lupinari and the Serpenree nearly wiped each other out. It was before Dragor became king of the Serpenree, so he himself never actually agreed to it, and probably never would have. The council, anticipating that someday another ruler would try to take over, made the four-planet rule.

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@kyronthearcanin

Ok, sweet, so in that case I’ll get into mostly Omialian cultures (Omialia is the 3rd of 7 eras of my world) because it’s the most developed, then I’ll get into some of my favorite characters separately.

Before we get into what the cultures are like, we must get into what Omialia actually is. Imagen a space of closely clustered…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Alright, so for the legal system, there is what they call the Orythian Council (Orythia is most likely going to be their solar system). It is made up of two representatives from each kingdom on every planet. They usually decide the laws, though they have to be approved by at least four planets to go through. I can try to answer…

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@kyronthearcanin

Also, wish me luck! I’ll be gone from one to three playing music for the school I used to go to. 🙂

Good Luck!

@thearcaneaxiom

Ok, so on my WIP. It always feels kinda hard for me to know where to start, because it is a multiverse. So what would you like to hear about? Some lore, languages, cultures, races, the seven eras of my world, stories, characters the math, ect?

Hi @light-warrior-pen !

Nice to meet you! I’m theArcaneAxiom. I love math, and searching for divine fundamental truth. I like to explore these concepts in creating sci fi/fantasy stories and worlds.

Questions:

Do you enjoy worldbuilding? If so, hard or soft? (Hard meaning concrete rules to follow, and soft meaning more open possibility.)

What…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin
Hey I also write songs for my charries too!

@kyronthearcanin

There is a group that decides what is and isn’t legal. I’ll get back to you later, because I have some schoolwork to get done lol. I agree that it is very optimistic, and I’m probably going to work on a better system, too.

Sounds good! Good luck on your school work!

@kyronthearcanin

For your first point, that makes a lot of sense, and I’ll look into it.

Sounds good!

Second, yes, there are earth-like creatures in my world, but I think I’m going to add twists to some of them (not quite sure what that means yet lol). Rina, though she can’t remember the name, used to live in a town called Winterknoll, on her h…

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@godlyfantasy12

Awwww, *sobs quietly*

@esther-c

Is that the group where I had Mayvee, Laylil and Everi? I think so but I’m not sure what happened to that group after Gwyn left XD

@light-warrior-pen

Hello! I’m Princesa! Pleasure to meet you!

Your writing style sounds fabulous, by the way 😉 Even the best writers get clumsy with it! As long as you like what you write

I like writing romance too and mostly fantasy/sci-fi, but I’ve had some contemporary romance ideas that I’ve wantet to try out, so we’ll see how that…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, so a few things.

It felt a little hand holdy at moments, like the beginning for example: “What if you didn’t know the answer to that secret, the one that was supposed to be yours? It made the situation incredibly difficult.” What is the point of mentioning that this made the situation incredibly difficult? You make a good e…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, that all makes sense, thanks for explaining!

@kyronthearcanin

Interesting. Your characters are fun, and I like the plot you got going. How does Rina discover her power? Does she maybe heal a solider, or herself? Would you like any critiques?

@kyronthearcanin

Also, what’s with the ranks? How does that work? I feel all shady as the Bumbling Henchman lol

It’s based off of the number of posts you’ve made total. I don’t know the different milestone numbers though XD

@kyronthearcanin

While I am still getting the final touches figured out, it is a mainly verbal language. If you’re wondering which race, it’s the Felisaro (they’re probably the most innovative out of the five). The main idea was that they teach it to all the Felisaro they can at a young age, keeping it as secret as possible, and don’t use it unti…

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@kyronthearcanin

Secret as in, only that race is supposed to know about it, so they can speak in secret if they ever need to, but the secret is found out after a while.

Right, but is it an encrypted version of another language? Because if they’re speaking in private, then there’s no point in having it (unless you do have a reason) and if they…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I like it, it’s always fun writing from the perspective of a child! I’ve only read a little bit of your writing before, so I don’t have full context, but it’s good. I don’t think I really have any criticisms, but the pull back to reality felt kinda sudden to me, but just something like a single line in between the flashback and…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah I get what you mean! The Shaded are kind of natzi germany types, though their leader is kind of brainwashed in a sense?

And yeah the rock thing I definitletly need to explain better I think, even in context I feel like it would be too confusing for my readers XD

AND I LOVE THE SCENE YOU WROTE!! They are all so cute!!…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

First of all love the profile! And that character portrait looks really cool!! I also write fantasy and some sci-fi, sometimes blended. Like my brother said we’re working on a multiverse together, which has been super fun!

Mind if I ask what Healer is about?