Otherworldly Historian

@fernweh_grace

Hmm, so my worldbuilding is pretty solid, and very real for me, because I literally have places based off of real things. For example, I have an underground trade city in the Nevari Desert that is directly based off of Derinkuyu, Cappadocia. I have a whole tribe that has ties to the Basotho, geographically, and culturally, and I…

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@fernweh_grace

Hello! Welcome to KP!

I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy and am currently working on a universe with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (Hard meaning concrete rules for the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

*Does happy dance*

Whooo!! that is SOO EXCITING!! I’m so happy for you!!!

@jonas

Hmmm, that’s hard, because you can tell it’s a bit derivative from a lot of preexisting ideas. To change that would be to radically change the system as a whole, which is fine, just annoying, but often necessary.

One issue I immediately have is with the name and the first element. If it is called “essence burning” does that not show an…[Read more]

savannah_grace2009

The language would be not their main language, but most would grow up bilingual. Most speak only English but some do speak Erstonian (the other universal language), so like I said they would learn both languages. I’m not sure where the magic words come from/what gave them power, but they are only used by the Pythonos when they c…

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@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

XD my brain must be tired because instead of putting Light’s name I put @Ezrian, like who tries to tag their own charrie 😂🤪

EZRIAN

Eyebrows raised, Ezrian blinked down at the youth who had just fallen face forward onto the floor and then promptly introduced himself. Though he did look foreign…maybe falling…[Read more]

@savannah_grace20009

Interesting, so in that case, what would have allowed a universal language to come about? A grand unification? Maybe just a tongue similar to what is happing with English that simply became more important to know for politics and trade? Also, where do magic words come from? What makes them inherently different from other…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah, how I think of it is by their fruits you shall know them. But to know the fruits of something, you either have to judge by the spirit beforehand, or you have to put it into practice to know whether it be good or evil. The problem is that while good trees produce good fruit, and bad trees produce bad fruit, there are some things…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

This seems fun, a masquerade would be cool because we won’t show the character’s face, allowing us to show them in an either more hidden light, where their true character is behind the mask, vs a more open light, where when there face is hidden, their true colors and personality can come out. I might add a character here…[Read more]

@jonas

Fun idea! And nice strategy!

(Note on time bubbles: the bubbles cannot move. The person who created the bubble cannot leave without popping it. Objects entering or leaving the bubble are deflected wildly off course. For a person, having any part of your body in side the bubble is enough to be affected by it.)

(Extra note: the bubbles can…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Sorry, i’m not good at explaining things, especially my stories! All I know is that Earth is the same Earth, and I think that Adam and Eve don’t exist either in “stories” or anything. I think that I’m trying to make this story for the secular world to speak truth (i think sometimes if the world knows that somethings from the…

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@freedomwriter76

@princesachronicle22 and he looks great too XD his story is so SADDDDD. poor boi 😭

Thanks! And yesss, I feel so bad to hurt him so😭

@lightoverdarkness6

XD XD

Hahaha! Poor Tyler the poor adorable boy 😂❤️

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009

Yeah, as you said Whale, it definitely works, I’m just trying to figure out what the actual structure is in relation to reality, as real places such as earth are mentioned. Your answers Sara are still throwing me off because “I think that Rishona is literally Eve in my story, and Earth is the same earth we know…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, Rishona does represent Eve in the prologue.

Right, she represents Eve, but is she literally Eve? Is Earth here the same Earth we know, and therefore the story of Adam and Eve is really just a translation of Rishona’s story?

And I do agree that I use flowery language excessively. I love your ideas, because you have helped…

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@loopylin

Oh those look so cute!!

I think I’ll give Light the chance to rp before I go again if that’s ok.

Okay! Yeah that sounds good!

@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

Sure!

EZRIAN

The room was dark, leaving him disoriented. Where am I? Some kind of hallway maybe. He thought, then tripped with a muffled cry. Something clattered as he fell downward, and he got caught in something as a heavy material tangled itself around him. Ezrian thrashed, trying to escape whatever it…[Read more]

@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

Ha! It works this time!

@whalekeeper

Great topic as always! I agree with Trailblazer’s comment, because when it comes to sci-fi/fantasy, really anything goes, you can have one God, or you could have many, or you could have none. So when it comes to that sort of thing, the question should be less of whether or not you have “God” in your world, and more of what is…[Read more]

@smiley

Interesting. So for the question of whether or not you want Christianity in it, all I can honestly say is that’s entirely up to you. If this were me, I would put in all sorts of Christian themes, and perhaps even correlations to the atonement, but I wouldn’t get into it deliberately. It simply depends on what you want as a writer, and who…[Read more]