Otherworldly Historian

@jonas

So I’ve been really bad at following up on this thread for quite a while now, as well as KP in general lately. I’ve sort of skimmed through, but you’ve probably done a lot since you last posted. Is there still anything specific you would like my thoughts on still?

@jonas

Yeah those theories definitely make sense!

I agree on the fact that the Dawnshard was the most interesting aspect. I also thought it was interesting seeing how the Sleepless communicated, and more of what their goals are.

The rest was more simply entertaining in the Lopen-is-great sense

@jonas

I’ve read them both, and enjoyed both, what were your other thoughts?

@rae

The writing you shared was a little depressing, but the characters weren’t melodramatic at least. I don’t pay much attention to punctuation as a writing problem. The art of melodrama is at an all time high here though. Like “He grabbed Nejin by the collar of his shirt, his eyes radiating hate, and rage.” After Nejin, a little boy he never…[Read more]

Oh, and this garbage:

“Shele” he said, turning around, immediately bumping into a tall, yet frail man.

 

He grabbed Nejin by the collar of his shirt, his eyes radiating hate, and rage.

Adrenaline rushed through Nejin’s system, but it gave no resolve to run or fight. Guards charged in, clearing the area, tackling the Man to the ground, losin…

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@savannah_grace2009

This is some of my writing I want to burn, bury the remnants in a dark cave, then collapse the cave to never see the light of day again, but here it is for you to enjoy…

“Mailes?… Do you think me a good Jan?” Laijas asked. Surprise stunned Mailes, what kind of question was that? It didn’t sound like something Laijas would…

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13 does have fun properties though, like the fact that it is a prime number alone is already cool.

So… now what?

Though that’s not “smashing” the record, do we think we can do better?

Yeah, we did it by one person!

Half an hour!

@jonas

Ahhh man, I was excited to wake up at 4 in the morning😂

We’re shooting for tomorrow? I can probably make it.

@jonas

Sorry for my apparent inactivity. The last few weeks have been really busy because of Christmas stuff. So I’ve seen this idea before, but only really as a Joke, for example:

h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aGL1vlVLSY4 (delete the space after the h)

However, there is going to be some unique narratives you could use this for, funny or…[Read more]

Cool! I’ll do it!

@vinagirl

Ahh, I see. So it’s not two kinds of stone, but two pieces of a once whole object. That makes sense now!

I don’t really think about what my characters look like as much as I should. When I do, I usually think what their culture/ethnicity looks like, but then I have to think about the physical characteristics of the different cultures and ethnicities I’ve made, lol! My sister who drew N’nesha for me had to pry out hair and eye color from my tongue,…[Read more]

@vinagirl

So the significance of the stones.
the stones are in two different necklaces. (And MAN am I struggling with the plot for this book. 😩🤣)

The stones were the most valuable assets to a certain country for war, because the medicine made from them not only cures sickness and disease, but can also seal wounds and heal broken bones. So they…

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@loopylin

Aww Ellie

@vinagirl

Totally fine!

Cool! What’s the significance about it being two stones? Are they both needed? Can they be fused into a mineral or alloy to keep it to one object?