Orielle2023

@whalekeeper

until you read the last book

Ok now I’m confused.

And libby doesn’t have book three. And the roads are bad. Lol I might just end up getting a audible free trial.

I must know.

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks for your response!

I pretty much got everything you said 😅

Don’t worry about a long response, those are the best ones.  🙂

I haven’t read Harry Potter either. I don’t know a lot about it and why I never read it, but I trust my parents discernment to tell us not too.

I’ve been talking with my sister, she writes too. We…[Read more]

@esther-c @folith-feolin @koshka @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @starofthenorth

Thank  you all for your replies! I enjoyed reading them.

@koshka

Take a look at how the Bible portrays evil. Does this book do the same?

That’s such a great way to sum it up!

@lightoverdarkness6

A song that describes a lot of my teenage characters is My Place In This World by Micheal W. Smith. I would recommend this song to ALL TEENS and young adults everywhere because it is so true and so relatable.

@lightoverdarkness6

I love this!! Each chapter gets better and better! You did really good showing the sibling dynamic.

Thank you so much! I’m glad you like it. Yes, I have seven siblings so writing about sibling dynamics comes somewhat naturally. 😀

That sounds like our house 😂. I love to draw, and my little brother is always drawing on my…

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@godlyfantasy12

AHH SO CUTEEEE

I love it! 🙂

@esther-c

Lol ok I was just checking because you said you liked thriller (perhaps I’m mixing people up too, we’ve had a lot of new people) and generally I don’t read that genre.

Curious to see what happens next!

🙂

@whalekeeper

Oh no ☹

but I love Janner! 😭😭😭

@folith-feolin

Np! Curious what your take is 🙂

@elishavet-pidyon

Realized I might want to tag you too 🙂

@mineralizedwritings

This is an interesting topic that I’ve been thinking a lot about recently, too.

I’ve never written anything that I would call dark or explicitly creepy (though of course all books have some tension and maybe scary moments).

However I do write fantasy, and I know that some people wouldn’t agree that that is morally okay. I…[Read more]

@koshka

Yes, it was fun to read! Sometimes it’s hard to read a book with an old writing style, but I liked this one!

@esther-c

I’ve only written a little his-fic, but your idea sounds super interesting!

I’m glad you’re planning on writing a Confederate soldier and not making him a bad guy. I think our world needs to learn that not all people related to a cause are automatically evil even if the cause itself is.

I think I already like your characters! It would…[Read more]

@koshka

When I was little I was super introverted (like I didn’t want to walk around church by myself, I was that shy). Now I do like having people around and getting a weekly dose of society lol 🤣

@koshka

Those two are my absolute favorite favorite characters of LotR. Admittedly I’ve only read the books, but that means I have a closer appreciation for what the author intended, right?

Yup. Technically you’re right. 😀

Sam is so wonderful, and I believe he’s the main character.

Wait, you really think Tolkien wrote Sam as the main cha…[Read more]

@sarafini

Personally I think implants of any kind are super creepy, but that’s just me. Maybe that’s what you’re going for 😂 But if it was going to be a headband, there would have to be a way that the villain could make people wear them. Maybe the headbands can’t be removed or something. But do whatever you want!

I don’t think people would…[Read more]

@kathleenramm @sarafini @koshka @godlyfantasy12

Let’s see . . .

My characters Christopher, Elena, Alexander, Cara, and maybe Briana are extroverts. Andrea, Michael, and Jade are introverts.

But sometimes a character changes throughout the book, you know? I’m more of an introvert myself, so it’s funny more of my characters are extroverts . . .

@felicity

Yep, @arien and I are sisters!

I’m sure you two have loads of fun talking WIPs!!!!!

Haha, we sure do! And stay up into the wee hours of the morning (okay, maybe not that long) thoroughly discussing them 🤣😁

@esther-c

Oh! More chapters! 🙂

You plot seems really interesting so far!

A couple things I noticed:

He smiled again and said, “You’re the best.” Ami blushed slightly. They sat in silence until Ami said, “You know the riddle that Bayron Len told me, I may have it figured out… So, he said that he knows there’s a cure. He wants me to find it. I…

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