@orielle21
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
If the stakes are low, that means there’s not much at stake.
Thanks for explaining. I probably should have used common sense but just wanted to make sure.
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
Glad you enjoyed it! 😃😃 I like Joel’s pic too. 😍 What did you mean by low stakes? Is that a term?
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
Lydia
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
Joel
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
Here is a picture of Jessica.
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
So, I noticed that the kids are going to school. But it’s Christmastime. So that would be weird if they were going to school that close to Christmas Day.
Wow. I don’t know how I missed that….thanks for pointing it out. *thumbs up*
I suggest reading it aloud
I’ll try that. I do a lot of dialogue in my writing as you will see and so m…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn
Enjoy the story if you care to read it….and please critique it as honestly as possible!! &…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
YES WAY!!!! XD Yes, It is!! Lol, yeah! Well, how can you not? They’re cute, sweet, and have great voices! XD That’s cool too!!
XD XD XD
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Orielle2023 started the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
Snowy Christmas Greetings to everybody! I have a little something for you to read….I wrote this short story several years ago. It is in my “Journey to the Past” series that I started. (FYI, stories in this series start out in the present and then the characters get taken back in time to some event in History. If they ever return to the present…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
heh…why am I always on my laptop when you look up?
*pauses, looks up, scratches head, looks back at laptop*
*grins*
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
My brother likes ravens and crows because they’re really smart.
Did you or your brother ever read Jean Craighead George’s book Charlie’s Raven? I LOVE that book and it actually was an inspiration for my book.
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
*waits nervously for @orien21 to get home from work and check KP* 😀
I was so nervous I miss-tagged my own sister.
LOL 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
have you heard hills and valleys?) (And sorry to invade your start here topic, she had to hear one right?) XD
No worries….a wonderful invasion!!! Great song!! And absolutely yes, this was a good pick for @lightoverdarkness6 to listen to. I love his Joy In the Morning album, specifically the songs Fake It, Use a Friend, and…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
I love For King and Country!! I went to their concert when I was 8, and I got to meet them!! Luke picked up a rock from the ground and signed it for me and my brother, bc we had forgotten to bring paper 😍❤️😊!! (I’ve had a crush on those two ever since 😂).
NOOOOO WAY!!!! XD XD XD I am so jealous right now!!!!! That is so cool a…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
Me gusta mucho la música de J. S. Bach, especialmente las Sonatas y las Partitas. ¿Y tu?
I don’t know how to read music very well unless I’m singing so I usually just play whatever I hear and like. I would say I like playing hymns. When I was in school I practiced a lot more. I took online lessons and got to play some nice classical s…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
Where we live (Ohio) we typically get snow in November, barely any in December, then more in January and February.
Similar story here, although we have already gotten a good amount of snow this month. We are finally getting a white Christmas this year…I think. Unless all the rain that is coming down decides to melt everything. *feeling…[Read more]
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