@nova21
Active 3 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Jodi Maile replied to the topic Hey y'all, I'm new! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Hi Ella! Thank you so much for the welcome! I love smoothies too 🙂 I also like writing about sisters and their problems, or girls who become like sisters and then help each other with their problems haha
I’m majoring in English! It’s a lot of essays but I actually think the academic writing has helped my fiction writing to improve, so…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Oops, I was soooo caught up in how amazing the story was, I forgot to answer your questions. *facepalm* Well, here we go…
Girl, this is sooooo engaging!!! I am hooked beyond measure!!!!!!
YESS!!!! The MC is VERY interesting!!! It’s hard to truly know a lot about her from the first chapter, but I can already tell, she’ll grow into…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
ELLAAAAAAA!!!!!!! I ADORE THIS STORY SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!! It’s AH-MAY-ZHING!!!!! That opening chapter was PERFECT!!! This is a book I’d read in one sitting. I’ve just gotta know more about EVERYONE!!!! I N C R E D I B L E!!!!!!! <33 I’m just sooo proud of you, girl!!! <33
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 Ooh, YA futuristic spec-fic? Sounds like my thing. 😉 I’ll definitely be reading it; thanks for letting us!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Sounds good, I’ll leave the grammar edits on the suggestions bar:)
Lioness’s first chapter is just SO intriguing, I’d love to read more if you decide to post the second chapter! -
ella replied to the topic Hey y'all, I'm new! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Hey Jodi!!! I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!!!!!!!!!!
A few things about me:
1)Â I write fantasy, thriller/suspense, and speculative fiction.
2)Â I love smoothies ❤
3)Â I’m play basketball and I’m super into running and working out 🏀
My current WIP #1 is a fantasy about an outcast girl trying to save her sister from a horrible eng…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
In answer to all four questions: yes!
It was excellent! I’m so curious about Nova Terra and the MC. I was hooked all the way through and I love Emiyn’s sarcasm! It’s an amazing piece 😀 The only edits I’d make have to do with grammar:) -
Kayleigh Idea replied to the topic YA Fantasy Retelling Alpha Readers Needed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 @scoutfinch180 @gracie-j @e-k-seaver
Hey guys! It’s Sunday, so that means I’m here to share with you the first five chapters of Project Gorgon! If you could read the chapters and submit this form by next Sunday that’d be great, but if you need a little extra time, that’s okay too! The word count for today is 8937 words. If you have an…[Read more]
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Kayleigh Idea replied to the topic YA Fantasy Retelling Alpha Readers Needed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 yep! I’m about to send it! Thank you for your patience. 🙂
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!!!! IT WAS FANTASTIC!!!!! Where do I even begin??? Oh yes!!! The SUSPENSE!!!!!! It was brilliant!!! Totally hooked the whole time!!! You did a great job!!! I was very interested in Emiyn too! Which is such a cool name BTW! Assuming I spelled it correctly . . . 🙂 I would definitely keep reading! LIKE I WANT MORE!!!!!…[Read more]
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
OHMYGOSH girl this was so good!! You have exceptional talent 😉 The suspense, the questions (which I NEED answered by the way!), and the characters were all written very well! If you ever want to share more (pleasepleaseplease do), I’d happily read it!
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Awww, girl, you’re TOO SWEET!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!! *blushes* <33
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
OOOOOOHHHH!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAY!!!!!!! *jumps up and down and gets super excited* I’d ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOVE to read this story!!!!! THANK YOU SOOO MUCH for thinking of me!!! I’ll try to read it tomorrow, if schoolwork chooses to play nicely!! 😉 I already know I’m soooooo gonna love this!!! <33
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
This sounds awesome! I’d be glad to read and critique:) Warning: I am a pretty slow reader:)
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Awwwww, you have no idea how much that warms my heart to read!! I’m very happy you liked it 🙂 And thank you for reading it! I’m SO GLAD you were hooked!!! And I put so much effort into descriptions that I’m glad they sounded good! I appreciate it, and if I decide to share more, you’re more than welcome to read it!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My Dream: High/Epic Fantasy in the forum Fantasy 5 years, 2 months ago
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Kathleen replied to the topic What is the first sentence (or first three sentences) of your current WIP? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 2 months ago
Although I have yet to read Howl’s Moving Castle, it’s been on my “to read” list quite sometime now.
Whoa, your hook is really intriguing. It really makes me curious and want to continue reading on.
If the first couple lines of your story are the weakest, then you must have an incredibly strong story! They both make…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic What is the first sentence (or first three sentences) of your current WIP? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 2 months ago
That’d be awesome! 🙂
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Lin replied to the topic What is the first sentence (or first three sentences) of your current WIP? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 2 months ago
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic What is the first sentence (or first three sentences) of your current WIP? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 2 months ago
I absolutely love those:D The first one was especially good and that’d be so awesome if you shared the first chapter! 😀 I’d love to read it!
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