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WarrenLuther04 posted an update 8 years, 1 month ago
@catwing @dekreel @dragon-snapper @jenwriter17 @ariella-newheart @skredder @notawriter
Hi all! Remember that Norse Mythology short story thingymabob I was talking about like last week or so? Well, I figured out how to share it and was wondering if you guys could beta-read it for me? Thanks!
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
(Sorry! As I said, I haven’t been on lately, unfortunately. There’s this horrible thing from the depths of Mordor called “schoolwork…” *shreds homework by accident* *stares at homework* *looks back at the Kingdom of Pen*)
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Joy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 1 month ago
@notawriter Sure, thanks!! Go ahead! 😉
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Alia replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 1 month ago
@notawriter, have a go at him. I don’t care how you draw him
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Joy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 1 month ago
@jenwriter17 @ariella-newheart @notawriter @itisastarrynight @introvert_girl @sage-g @sarah-anson @gabbyj @artists
Today, I have several characters that need to be drawn!
- Lauryne: 11-13 years old. Long, straight, thick golden blond hair that’s usually tied up in a high ponytail, with a bit more hair framing her face. Blue eyes, freckle…
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Joy replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@jenwriter17 @epicaddie2 @rochellaine @gh24682468999 @ingridrd @notawriter Oh, and thank you all for the replies on the last one X’D
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Joy replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine He’s talking about Josiah X’D
@notawriter Thanks! Everyone says that XD
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SlyLilHuntress replied to the topic Hello, Fellow KeePers! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@notawriter That’s funny, because I may be able to draw animals, but I can NOT draw people. Trust me, I’ve tried. So I guess we both need to practice!
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Joy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 1 month ago
@jenwriter17 @notawriter ARE YOU KIDDING? I HAVEN’T COMMENTED ON Y’ALL’S PICTURES OF JENNA?! *facepalms*
Great job, both of you! I really love them! <3 You’re both so talented!
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Get ready, guys, this part contains one of my favorite scenes ever. Mwahahaaaaa…
The Gif-Hiders: An Easter Story
Part Four: The Young Man with the Extension Cord
“Two… thousand… GIFs?!”
“But of course! There are nearly six hundred Kapeefers on this island.”
Jenna stammered, “I-I can’t hide two thousand GIFs all over the island in o…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Strong Christian Women in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years, 1 month ago
@pickupyourpenandwrite @skredder @notawriter y’all had good observations. I have commentary in my Bible too, which is really nice.
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Joy started the topic Literary Elements in Movies in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
This is where you can post literary elements of movies. Because I know they’re out there
Warning: May contain spoiler alerts, LIKE THIS ONE
For example, in Finding Dory, when Dory thinks her parents are dead, she ends up falling back into the ocean from the aquariums, and then starts to forget everything. It’s kind of a backshadowing (if that’s…[Read more]
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SlyLilHuntress replied to the topic Hello, Fellow KeePers! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@notawriter I’m glad, and sort of not glad, to hear there are others who have the same problems I have. I am very shy as well, but when I get to know someone, I could drive them crazy!
I would say Crafters make up about 10% of the population. I’m not firm on that percentage, though. What do you think? There is a small amount who have moved int…[Read more]
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SlyLilHuntress replied to the topic Hello, Fellow KeePers! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@notawriter It’s nice to meet someone with whom I have something in common! Friends are something I have been lacking in lately…
Anywho, I found an awesome drawing book and discovered I could draw about a year ago. I guess I’ve been drawing things (besides stick figures, that is) since then. I’m still having a difficult time drawing things out…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Strong Christian Women in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years, 1 month ago
@waterlily sure, welcome!
@notawriter I guess we can just carry the discussion through today and tomorrow if that’s okay with everyone
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Kaya Young replied to the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Also @notawriter I really love the word “Nextly” 😉
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Kaya Young replied to the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@dekreel @jenwriter17 @notawriter @daeus Ok, so here goes… I honestly am not sure what exactly is wrong with my dialogue, it just seems off. Without further hesitation, I present to you some of my conversations:
“You did a really good job with your prayer! Who wrote it again? Daisy paused, her hand hovering over a box of tea boasting a choc…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Strong Christian Women in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years, 1 month ago
@kaya-young @dekreel @notawriter @skredder *squeals into pillow* This is pretty exciting!
*draws sword and points ahead* Tomorrow we read Ruth chapter 1, fellow readers!
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Kaya Young started the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
My dialogue… has much to be desired. The more dialogue I write, the more I loathe what I’m writing, and I have no clue how to fix it!
So what is your best advice for writing dialogue? Any and all advice, insights, tips and what-not are greatly appreciated!
@jenwriter17 @rochellaine @notawriter @ingridrd @that_writer_girl_99 @any-one…..
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@warrenluther04 Yay! can’t wait to read it! 😀
@jenwriter17 Thanks! 😀 If you can comment, feel free to comment, or if you can’t you can probably just do the request edit access thingy and I can figure it out. 🙂 Thanks again!
@warrenluther04 It would be easiest to be able to request edit access, but if that’s too much trouble, then I can just tell you what I think after reading it.
@jenwriter17 Either would be fine, whatever works best for you! 🙂
@warrenluther04 okay, well i went ahead and requested it 🙂
@jenwriter17 Hmm…. The request hasn’t shown up in my inbox yet…sorry. Could you retry sending the request? Sorry! 😅
@jenwriter17 @catwing @dekreel @dragon-snapper @ariella-newheart @notawriter @skredder
Well, guys, sorry. Since that document was technically owned by my school email account and it wouldn’t allow me to transfer ownership to my actual email, I had to create a new email link so edit/comment access requests would actually go into the inbox I…[Read more]
@warrenluther04 okay, no problem. do you still want me to send the request for comment access?
@jenwriter17 Yes, as long as it’s on the new link. Thanks for reading!
@warrenluther04 okay, I went ahead and requested 🙂
@jenwriter17 Okay! Again, thanks a lot for reading! 😀
@warrenluther04 your welcome! 🙂
What a cool story! Great job, @warrenluther04 😀
I don’t have a Google Docs account, so I can’t request access, but I will draw attention to one thing that I noticed. It is a good thing that the magic in the story has limitations, but when Ualair uses too much and cannot heal his arm, it just seemed as though you dwelt too much on that fact. I…[Read more]
@ariella-newheart Thanks!
Oh, okay. Hmm….that does make sense. I’ll see what I can do! 😀 🙂
I just requested edit access.
@skredder Thanks! 😀 I’ll give you access! Thanks for reading! 😀 😀
Wow! Okay, so I finally commented on the story. I had read it very soon after you posted the link. I just got a wee bit busy and couldn’t go through it a little more thorough until now. It was a really fun and interesting read! Thank you for letting me read it!
@skredder Thanks! That’s fine, I’m generally really busy. But I’m on spring break now!!! 😀 😀 😀 Thanks! And thank you for beta-reading!!!! 😀 😀