The fledgling Artist

@jenwriter17 @seekjustice Heyo! Here’s part 12. It’s shorter than the other parts.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P1xxxCXLFZG_M70KCAVB7WxJ_kZQdHtqojQrZIbPNmk/edit?usp=sharing

Woah, no idea what happened to that first picture.  *scratches head*

And here are the pics…

So I found this the other day…

I wrote it when I was seven and the spelling is just horrible.  *facepalm*

I’ll write out the story since it’s hardly legible (and I’ll fix the spelling and grammar mistakes):

Once upon a time there lived a cat.  Now this cat was not an ordinary cat.  The cat has lost a leg.  The cat’s name was Pretty. 

There w…[Read more]

@catwing  I’m still developing her superpower but she can camouflage herself to blend in with anything.  🙂

@seekjustice Sorry! 🙂  (But I’ve left suddenly in the past.  Especially when it gets really late.  If I leave suddenly it’s usually because I just crash and fall asleep. 😛 )

Oh yes.  That will make you feel better!  …did you find a cupcake?

Sorry, but I still haven’t thought of anything.  I’m going to leave completely now, I think.  But I’…[Read more]

@seekjustice I don’t know if you got my post saying I was leaving, but I’m back now for a very little bit.

Oh yes, now I remember.  That wouldn’t be as easy a fix as some edits, but I don’t think it would be too hard to make it a semi-accident.

Shakespeare said “love is blind, and lovers cannot see/the pretty follies that themselves commit.”  E…[Read more]

@seekjustice Does she intentionally try to catch the bullet herself, or is she trying to push him out of harm’s way when she gets struck?  In the case of the latter I think it would be perfectly reasonable, since she wouldn’t be actually trying to give her life for him.  What do you think?

I’m going to disappear for about an hour to watch s…[Read more]

@seekjustice I’m upset because I want to use a certain picture for my blog post, but don’t know how to use it without being afraid of copyright stuff, so I’m trying to find a private picture that will be boring, but which at least I will own myself.

Sure, *brings bag of dirt* plot hole did you say?  Let’s fill it up.  I’ve got some special s…[Read more]

@seekjustice I’m back. 😉

@seekjustice I must go to bed now. Good night.
Hopefully you can patch up those plot holes.

@jenwriter17 Alright! Just requested access! I can’t wait to read it! 😀

@seekjustice I’m not deleting them… Just moving them to be more of side characters for this book. They each have their perspectives and stories. But all the POVs got muddled and confused readers when I was swapping between six different people. 0.0

@seekjustice So, so. I’m not liked editing to much and I’m having to get back into the swing of things.
But Jack is behaving. Just having trouble Showing, not Telling,
Also dealing with the hard truth that I have to change POVs in places and make a few MCs into side characters. :*(
(It will only be Alex, Jack, and Cele. Mostly…)

@seekjustice It’s Finding Secrets. The one I did all those collages for. 😀

@alia Yikes… Hope you feel better soon.
Good night then.

@seekjustice Welcome.

@ingridrd what is her power? I really like it.
@daughteroftheking oooooh… I like it.

@alia @seekjustice @rochellaine @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @ingridrd @daughteroftheking
I’m actually sitting down and editing my book tonight! No distractions this time! Yay! (Boo…)

@jenwriter17 Kay would jump into Niagara Falls. Not much air up there where the plane is flying.
Alex says the same.
what about your characters?