Molly

@kathleenramm I’m working on a short story by myself right now. I’m thinking it might just be one POV, but it might require me to write two. I’ve been practicing one POV for a while now so I hope I’ll be able to accomplish it effectively XD

@elfwing Oh cool! That’s so interesting that you do that too! It does work really well when you need…[Read more]

Mirabelle crossed her arms “Wait, let me get this straight; your double ganger was blackmailing you and you were appeasing him with Chipotle?”

Milo’s double ganger’s smile widened “Yo, your sister is smart lol.”

“She’s ten, of course she’s smart; have you never met a ten year old before?”

“Did you really think that you could keep this from Mirabelle forever? When we met that night-”

“WHY ARE YOU HERE You were never suppose to come back, you had all the chipotle you could ask for!

@devastate-lasting

Yeah, I really like how adding multiple POV you can explore different avenues of the story while adding a new flavor to the narrative.

What the most POV you’ve ever had in one story?

@jodi-maile

It’s really cool how you split up POV with your sister like that! My siblings and I might do that in the future, but right now…[Read more]

@kathleenramm I have written stories with multiple POVs. When I write alone, I usually only have one or two. My first book that will never be read by anyone had two or three, and the books I wrote with my sister had up to five, I think. I read a lot of fantasy with lots of POV shifts back then, so I figured I needed more POVs. Truthfully, I…[Read more]

Fear rippled through my body and I grabbed the closest thing in reach (which happened to be a mostly empty domino’s pizza box) and chucked it at the figure.

The pizza box bounced harmlessly off the figure’s back, and it spun around Poptart box still in hand.

My heart dropped to my feet; that figure… that person… that thing, was me.

Munch munch munch.

Mirabelle and I whirled towards the pantry in the corner of the kitchen.

Standing in the pantry was a figure feasting the last raspberry Poptart.

@scripter-of-kingdoms

I’m super late, but I just wanted to say that I love your most recent character sketch!! You can really get an idea of what kind of character he is by looking at it.

How long have you been doing character illustrations? And did you learn from anyone?

@elfwing

Oh, I didn’t mean it as a requirement or something, haha. Was just genuinely curious.

But yeah, taking good biblical people and making them evil does sound like twisting things too far.

@anatra23

Ah, I get what you mean.

“Wait, what is it? A monster!”

“pphhtt, it’s you” Mirabelle said standing up.

@devastate-lasting

Oof. I know what that’s like. It’s so rare for a series to be good the whole way through.

@elfwing

That sounds like a really interesting series! But yeah, I get what you mean by it getting tricky with Christian Theology and stuff. Like you don’t want people to have the wrong idea of the biblical characters in the story, but…[Read more]

@elfwing Congratulations! That’s so exciting, and it looks really good!

Mirabelle stepped back and crossed her arms.

“Fine by me; you’d make a better first course for whatever is in there anyway.”

I grinned back at her and opened the kitchen door.

 The jenga tower collapsed and blocks tumbled across the coffee table and blasted me in the face (which had a very demoralized expression on it).

“What, I won? I WON!” My sister jumped up and pumped her fists in the air, acting like she wasn’t the one who had cheated.