MineralizedWritings

@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6

I write best when I’m tired and writing fast. Don’t ask me why. It’s weird, but *shrug* it works. 😀

@mineralizedwritings

Don’t worry about it! 😁 Different opinions are fine XD Better to be honest about how you feel!

Yeah, that’s true. Thanks for understanding!

@godlyfantasy12

This is all dependent on you and what you want your book to be. Everyone’s going to have differing opinions, and it also comes down the tone of the book 😊

Agreed. Sometim…[Read more]

@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings

I’m not gonna be able to RP much for the next few days, (I’m helping my mom get ready for Christmas!!) so, y’all can make Matthew and Lyla just do whatever. I trust y’all. Or you could pretend that they disappeared, or maybe you could have your charries  get separated from Matt and Lyla. Whatever…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

How about Liberator? I just looked up synonyms of release (thanks @felicity )

Afterthoughts of a Liberator. I don’t know if that’s what you’re going for. It sounds a little like something in The City of Ember. XD

@orielle21

Hello! Nice to meet you and I appreciate the welcome. You would love my yard…there’s a creek running through it and I have to cross a bridge to get to my garden.😍 Now for the questions

Whoa!! 😍 That sounds Heavenly!

Ooo…favorite song changes a lot for me but right now it is Stand by Newsboys. Besides them, I like listening to For King…

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@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @koshka anyone on?

@godlyfantasy12 @folith-feolin @starofthenorth @lewilliams @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @theloonyone

So yeah, the intense mind powers and extremely broken people was a turn-off for me, but I think an even bigger thing was how the kids were breaking rules (important rules!) and getting away with it/encouraged to keep doing it BY THE ADULTS IN…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

oooof…I usually don’t give critiques much just cuz I don’t really care too except for when they ask for like a CERTAIN thing, or if I just see something story wise if that makes sense XD….

I just don’t really like critiquing ppl unless they ask for a certain thing and then Ik what to critique, or if I see a certain story eleme…

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@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lughtoverdarkness6

Luna

“Do you know who did the magic?” The one named Carter asked, fist digging into his pocket, eyes focused intensely.

Luna’s lips pursed as she thought. Her mind wandered to the laughter of the dragon from before…

Dragons were known to be connected to the lands…to be able to sense shifts in…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12

Ya’ll can do what you want with Easton

Carter

Magic? Who did it? Was it the dragon? If it was a human, where did they get their dragon stone? I thought I had the last bit. Carter wanted to pour out all the questions popping up inside him onto Luna, but he knew he would just seem a…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings k! I think @lightoverdarkness6 and @loopylin is in bed rn so we’ll have to wait till tomorrow

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 up to y’all! Tho Easton provoking would definitely scare Paxton so that would be interesting.

ma poor traumatized baby (and don’t worry mineral if there’s going to be any flashbacks I’ll give warnings 😊)

@felicity @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6

ahh now I can give advice!!!

so for the chili/hot sauce scenes and the difference of opinion between ppls, no view is wrong!

This actually is dependent on Light and the tone of her book!

So, before you go and change anything Light, you first just need to ask what the tone of your b…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings friends to lovers later down the road 😊 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

Luna

She absentmindedly touched her hair, giving a small laugh. “It’s more of a…ombré I guess…I was born with it! Glad you like it,” she giggled, smiling from ear to ear. She’d never been around others similar to her until recently, having been raised…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6

I just read what Mineralized said, and *chuckles nervously*, what I said totally contradicted it. I hadn’t even read her post yet, and wasn’t purposely trying to disagree.

However…

I appreciated the hot sauce part, because it makes me as the reader feel good that they paid Walter back. But I haven’t…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Ok! Sounds good!

maybe it’s ramen stew. 😂

@mineralizedwritings

Hmmm…maybe Releaser?

I looked up opposites of “trap”.

I don’t know if that would sound right though. Afterthoughts of a Releaser.

“Layson became a Releaser.”

Do you want it to be a real word, or a totally made up one? Because if you combine the words bunker and release/liberated/freed, you might get some ideas.

@mineralizedwritings First question, what does bunkers mean? Then i can probably get a general idea of what he does.