MineralizedWritings

@mineralizedwritings

@loopylin

Thanks for critiquing.

Yes the spacing is kinda off, I posted that from my phone so it came out kinda weird.

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 u gals on?

@felicity @mineralizedwritings @books-and-beakers @godlyfantasy12 @sarafini @gwyndalf-the-wise

I joined too!!! My name is LightoverDarkness 6 just like on here. Can’t wait to go find u guys!!

@mineralizedwritings

Um, yeah I think I knew that. It’s one of my favorites too. 😀

@loopylin @princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings

Corvina

The blue-skinned woman immediately adjusted her stance, fists clenching, preparing to fight.

Corvina’s muscles tensed. This woman wouldn’t go down easily, should she have to defend herself. Her eyes flitted to the broken window once again, weighing her option of esc…[Read more]

@felicity @sarafini @gwyndalf-the-wise @mineralizedwritings

I HAVE JOINED!!! My name is V.L Smith, and I’ve made an introductory post! I’m in Reindeers MINERAL!!!! EEEEEEE!!!

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Yeah sounds good!!

@mineralizedwritings

Remember, “I’m cheering you on” (4K&C song) 😀

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @godlyfantasy12

SERIN

They walked down the hallway and Serin noticed that it was lit by torches. She frowned, it seemed primitive. She’d thought that like in Pelgar, the other races on Ohven used waterlamps and Lightstones when there wasn’t enough sunlight.

Where exactly was she?

A flicker of light bounced b…[Read more]

@felicity

I have homework to do before I start chatting, but I’ll try to find you later. =)

@mineralizedwritings

Aww, too bad we’re not on the same team. XD I’ll still cheer for you, though.

@mineralizedwritings

Aw that’s too bad we’re on different teams! 🙁 🙁 Oh well. Love how you used Lesli’s name!!

@sarafini @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @lewilliams @gwyndalf-the-wise @booksandbeakers @devastate-lasting

Hey, did ya’ll get on CWW? Maybe we can find each other and see if we’re on the same teams!!!

@mineralizedwritings @esther-c @felcity

Thank Y’all!! Yeah, bc of your critiques and tips, I can already tell that I’m improving!! Thank you all again 😀

@godlyfantasy12

 ahhhh AWESOME!!!! That’s so much like my twist too!!!

Thank you!! Yeah, I had the idea, but I wanted to tell you about it, just in case you want me to change it if it’s too similar to yours, or you just want me to change it. Whatever you want me to do! 😀

also it’s a writing thing happening from the 8th-16th of this month. Sara…

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@gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @sarafini

Here y’all go! I found this article and these are five forms of stress/PTSD that can occur. And u can find out which u believe ur character has and research it individually!

No warnings needed except there’s one mention of something but I don’t even know if it’s anythin…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yes actually, that is what Corvina has a bit of, DIS, except its not exactly diagnosed because it’s fantasy and there’s other things involved, and she can be healed by the Lord.

Same, my story is also a fantasy and they don’t have specific terms/labels to diagnose people with.

Some of them do have PTSD, and that’s not a term to…

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@mineralizedwritings that’s understandable, I probably won’t be reading/watching it either.

I do appreciate the article from historian however

and thank u both, Folith and Historian!

(hope u don’t take offense Folith!)

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks!!! I’m super excited about it myself, It’s like a dream character arc for me to work on!

You’re welcome! I just love character arcs that leave you with hope and your characters’ arcs seem very hopeful so yay.

I like getting to relate to the characters issues, but also I’m super excited to write Kaine coming throu…

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@mineralizedwritings

Hm idk. Layson is very carefree… to the extent it gets himself in trouble sometimes. I mean not many people would leave their home into a dangerous place because they heard somebody they don’t know needs help. Most people would just be like ‘that’s not my problem’. It becomes more important later, he just kinda does what he w…

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@mineralizedwritings @sarafini @lightoverdarkness6 @gwyndalf-the-wise @godlyfantasy12

I would highly recommend reading slaughterhouse 5 by Kurt Vonnegut for helping with understanding PTSD if you have the time. (I will mention here that the book is probably for like 16+ for language violence and some references to inappropriate things so If you…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Good idea to put their marriage in the epilogue. That would keep it out of the main plot and would be sort of like a last cherry on top to end the story. Ok, honestly do whatever, but I think that would be perfect. 😀