@mineralizedwritings
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
For anyone who’s interested, here’s chapter 1 of my WIP, Healer. It’s sort of long lol
I’ll tag some people just in case you want to read it: @freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise @thearcaneaxiom @artsy-dragon @mineralizedwritings
Sorry if I forgot to tag anyone who was interested! I’m fairly sure I got most of you 😅
Chapter 1
I can still…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
Thanks!
Turns out I’m back early, so I’ll go ahead and answer your questions!
1.I’m not sure on favorite dessert, but I’m chips over sweets anyday (yeah, I’m weird, I know)
2. Spanish because we’re getting a lot more Spanish-speaking people in our area, and Hebrew so I could study the Bible more easily.
3. Random fact? I play…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
Hoping that tag worked haha.
Anyway, nice to meet you!
1. Snakes are absolutely cool!
2. Favorite theme? Trying to figure out this question. I don’t know if you meant genre or something else, sorry.
3. Rina was a prisoner most of her life until, near the start of the book, she escaped. She’s wary of the race that…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
Hi Ava! Imma tag a bunch of people first, then I’ll respond properly:
@gwyndalf-the-wise, @mineralizedwritings, @loopylin, @esther, @lightoverdarkness6, @godlyfantasy12, @whalekeeper, @acancello, @princesschronicle22, @freedomwriter76, @80strish, @otherworldlyhistorian, @others-I-likely-forgot
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Esther started the topic No Boring Scenes?? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @sarafini @keilah-h @loopylin @felicity @elishavet-pidyon @gwyndalf-the-wise @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper
Ok… So I’ve heard that you aren’t supposed to put in your book what you were bored writing.
I don’t think this is exactly true… For example, I just finished writing a…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic My Book needs some help 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings
Thank you! Ill make that change and keep working on this one!
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Light posted a new activity comment 3 years, 3 months ago
XDXD You’re hilarious girl.
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Yeah I get that XD but I’m glad you liked the style!
Thanks, I’m not sure how to help me either so I understand XD. And yeah I get what your saying about the rock and light thing. It’s definitley good to know that from an outside perspective it doesn’t make sense XD because I know exactly what is happening…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Looks like you have to get at least three works of that type published (three short stories, three articles, three poems). So it’s like an elite club! I am 100% writing articles or short stories this summer.
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Esther started the topic Worldbuilding Topic Suggestion! in the forum Questions and Support 3 years, 3 months ago
I’ve noticed that there are lots of writers on here who worldbuild. We’ve discussed worldbuilding things a lot, but it’s always been under “General Writing Discussions.” I think it would be helpful if we had a topic for worldbuilding. 🙂
Let’s see here… KP’s world builders…
@thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 [Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
I think the first one is pretty good, but I think they all need to be more parallel. (This is something I’ve struggled with in naming the books in my trilogy) It always depends on the series in how your naming them. For example, the titles from WFS are exactly parallel. On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness, North! Or Be Ea…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
I love those 😍😍!! Yes, I think it can work. It sounds good! 🙂
Aww I love the sunrise part! And sweet Ami…and Ev!!
Slowly, the sky grew lighter, and the edge of the sun began to peek over the horizon. The dew glistened in its light. It illuminated the sky with hues of rose, peach, and daffodil. The sunlight…
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Okay so if anyone is interested I have a snipit of a chapter I’ve been stuck on for a while, honestly it’s probably the unconcious guilt of making my characters suffer XD
So some of you may know Anwyn from the KP Library. But anyway, if anyone is interested in reading it (though it’ll be a little out of context) and could give me some ideas on…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
I like it. However I think the second two could be shortened somehow. At least the second could be turned into Afterthoughts of the Abandoned or something, unless the Left Behind is a particular reference to a group by that name. Either way, they’re good titles for the series!
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Love it!!!!
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Allison replied to the topic My Book needs some help 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings
Heres a new beginning to my book! Just let me know how you like it and if you see any errors. Thank you!
I ran down a row of almond trees. Their pink and white blossoms were open and each flower contributed to the sweet, woody perfumed air that was luxurious to breath in. Bark and sticks crunched under my bare…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
oh, just finished it!
Woo-hoo!! 😄 XD
XDXD This is literally my oc’s Tauren and Lesli. She’s been doing that to him since he was little and won’t stop now that he’s a foot taller than her lol. ( I mean if he asked her to she probably would)
That’s awesome!! 🤣
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings Either of you going to RP yet? (Unless you already have and I didn’t see it) I’m waiting until one of you has a turn.
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Allison replied to the topic My Book needs some help 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
Thanks! I will defiantly tag you! As I told@mineralizedwritings , I might do another few scenes and compare them, the scene above might be to busy for the beginning. 😀
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