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oh, just finished it!
He let her lead him to the circle the group had made. Ev stood next to Lukas. He ruffled his hair and smiled down at his little brother. Lukas looked up and frowned.
“What?” Ev whispered.
“I’m a teenager,” Lukas replied.
Ev grinned. “I know. I’m supposed to embarrass my teenage little brother. Right?”
XDXD This is literally my oc’s Tauren and Lesli. She’s been doing that to him since he was little and won’t stop now that he’s a foot taller than her lol. ( I mean if he asked her to she probably would)
"Past or future... let them be."
oh, just finished it!
Woo-hoo!! ? XD
XDXD This is literally my oc’s Tauren and Lesli. She’s been doing that to him since he was little and won’t stop now that he’s a foot taller than her lol. ( I mean if he asked her to she probably would)
That’s awesome!! ?
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
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