@mineralizedwritings
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 19 hours ago
Lucille
Lucy took a deep breath of the flowers, and passed some of them to Mel. This sniff test required a two-person court.
While the adults talked, Lucy watched Gabriel quietly, then glanced around the room. She wandered around, analyzing everything, from the table to the many skins.
Something had spilled on another…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 20 hours ago
He’d bled on the floor more times than he cared to tell her. He hoped she wouldn’t notice more faint stains.
Bruh
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whaley replied to the topic Burnout/Struggling with this Draft in the forum Plotting 5 days, 20 hours ago
So you’re trying to present Ara’s world to the reader before the inciting incident happens, and you don’t know how to translate the inner world to the outer world?
If so, wait a minute. We have the same problem. I’m trying to write the same thing. XDThe best I can say is to come up with a meaningful, but normal situation that re…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Burnout/Struggling with this Draft in the forum Plotting 6 days ago
@koshka @whalekeeper thank yall so much for the advice!!
I’m already feeling better. 😊
I don’t wanna procrastinate but I do feel like I need some parts more fleshed out-maybe I can get some advice/ideas there…
right now I’m really struggling with the beginning. I know those are always the hardest, and is apt to change (and mine has man…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 2 hours ago
@whalekeeper @rae @loopylin ok i’m back
Sniper
Gabriel walked around like he knew the place.
Sorta reminded me of, well, me during the war, when I was wanderin’ the old halls of my dad’s lab back on Staten, my earliest memories reactivated.
“Is this where you lived with that old man? Your master?” Lucy asked.
“This is where he found me.…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 3 hours ago
I was just reminded that I have an old Ellis drawing that I never shared (I don’t think?)@anyonewhowantstosee
the outfit isn’t really accurate but it’s close enough. Also the skin color and background colors are kinda weird but it’s fine

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whaley replied to the topic Burnout/Struggling with this Draft in the forum Plotting 6 days, 5 hours ago
Also yeah, like @elishavet-pidyon said! Writing calls! I’m not sure how to make it accessible to everyone because not everyone uses Google chat. Which is what I normally use for calls. But we can figure it out.
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whaley replied to the topic Burnout/Struggling with this Draft in the forum Plotting 6 days, 5 hours ago
You wrote more than 50k words, which is a lot of emotional effort when writing the series of your dreams. So first off, that’s awesome. You’ll have plenty of material to edit. You’re definitely burnt out from that. That sounds normal to me.
I’m currently at an ADORABLE bookshop/cafe and slowly wanting and feeling the nudge to g…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Burnout/Struggling with this Draft in the forum Plotting 6 days, 6 hours ago
@elishavet-pidyon that’s a good idea! and yea I’ll probably find myself on here more often. I’m just struggling to get words out period…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Burnout/Struggling with this Draft in the forum Plotting 6 days, 7 hours ago
I’m also…just struggling sometimes with this book. The concept, plot, characters, etc are good. I like it…but at the same time at points it feels flat…It needs more, I already have notes for things I need to add but its a little overwhelming…
I really wanna get it to the point I feel comfortable letting someone else read it and critique…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Burnout/Struggling with this Draft in the forum Plotting 6 days, 7 hours ago
Hello gang it’s me again!!
Wasn’t sure where to post this so put it in plotting lol-I wish we had a Drafting section…kinda weird we don’t lol!
So as the title states…I’m struggling a bit and just wanted to chat with some fellow writers I know. This month I had MAJOR burnout in every area of my life. Work, spiritual, mental, physical, and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 7 hours ago
@whalekeeper @rae remind me to write an rp later today (I have something I have to do but I also wanna do this)
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 7 hours ago
Callum
The Stormwatcher legacy was impressive. Scary, even. Callum could imagine having visions, since he already knew half of the experience. Ellis had something to contribute to his family – something helpful. Maybe it didn’t require much ingenuity, which was something Callum needed because he had no born powers. But it sounded…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 8 hours ago
Ellis
“Yes.” Ellis paused, thinking of how to explain. He had never had to before. He lightly touched his forehead where the blue diamond-shaped mark was. “I have a sort of extra eye. When it opens, I can see important moments in time. Many of my ancestors had the same ability, and they were able to use it to defend our kingd…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 8 hours ago
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week ago
Let your crew know. You shouldn’t be concerned about how strong or weak you look. That’s a minor issue. Falling over is a major issue. I’m not trying to wildly speculate, but isn’t there a possibility that you lose balance on a boat and pitch over? If you don’t tell anyone, there’s a risk of hitting your head or worse.
Many, many people…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
Callum
Somewhere in Callum’s echoing headspace, Ellis’ voice rose to the surface. It took a minute to process everything he said. He was friendly. Understanding, even.
It was rather dark outside, and crickets had begun their evening song, but lamps lit up the bench from either side. The lights were like splotches of butter-colored pai…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Huntress
“Great, lead the way!” Trevor handed me the torch, and I began searching the maze.
Eventually, light began appearing, shining through racks in the wall. I extinguished the torch and studied the light. It didn’t seem like sunlight, but it wasn’t something like lava either. The cave was far too cold for that.
I pointed up…[Read more]
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