MineralizedWritings

@orielle21

Yeah! If the stakes are low, that means there’s not much at stake.

High stakes would be if somebody was at risk of dyeing or permanent damage.

Doesn’t seem like anyone going to die here XD

@orielle21

Oh, and I like the pic you chose for Joel XD

@orielle21

Oh! I really liked that. I wouldn’t change a thing! It seems like the kind of story you read when you need a pick me up. Low stakes, but still lots of fun, and the time travel thing makes it extra interesting! I felt like you did a really good job moving between the dialogue and the narrated sections.

Thanks for the great read!

@lightoverdarkness6

He’s got a beautiful voice 😍!

Ikr!

@felicity

Lol! I wright better tired too, but I write slowly.

@lightoverdarkness6

Yeah, I think I just threw the hot sauce part in there, because they are really afraid of their foster parents, especially Iris, And I don’t think they would actually do it. But I’m struggling with just how violent and abusive the parents are. They’re enough for the siblings to be afraid of them, but I don’t feel very comfort…

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@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin

@lightoverdarkness6 (Helping you mom with Christmas is great! Maybe Matthew and Lyla will just quietly follow the group for awhile Xd)

Lesli and Tauren

Lesli listens carefully to the conversation about magic and dragons.

“Woah!” She looks over at the crystal in Lunas hand. “Does that do something?”

Tauren stands…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Ok, you’ve never heard a Tauren Wells song?! 😲

Here’s a great one:

( @orielle21 have you heard hills and valleys?) (And sorry to invade your start here topic, she had to hear one right?) XD

@arien

Thanks! I’ll keep it in mind! I think I need to develop the history of people who have done this before Layson, and maybe I’ll use one of there names in combination with the stuff here.

@arien

Oh! Fun topic, thanks! 😀

I started writing this past July, but had been involved with writing for a bit longer. My sister has been writing for a long time, and I liked to talk stories with her and help her come up with plot ideas. I thought it was super cool, but didn’t have a story of my own. Previous to that, my sister and I would make…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I probably should be going to bed…

it’s 9. I’m trying not to wait until I’m exhausted these days 😂

@godlyfantasy12

Ok lol.

After light or loopy get back I might bring him in XD

I just rp’d so I’m going to wait for someone else

@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin

“M-magic?” Mathew stutters.

Tauren’s eyes grow wide.

“Woah, I’m so sorry! I can’t imagine how…awful that must have been.” He tries to keep pity out of his tone, but it comes out in his facial expression anyways.

The rest of the group remains silent.

(Ok are they going to look for food, or…[Read more]

@felicity

Don’t worry about it! 😁 Different opinions are fine XD

Better to be honest about how you feel!

@felicity

Oh thanks! I like that, I’ll have to let the ideas stew in my brain 🍲

(I hope that wasn’t a ramen emoji. It’s supposed to be stew)

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

Tauren and Lesli

Tauren watches from the side as Lesli converses with Luna. Paxton’s eyes dart nervously next to her.

Paxton shifts nervousley before stuttering out that his bear is named Hope.

“Woah, I’ve never seen anyone like you before! How did you get blue hair?” Lesli says with a fascinated…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh! Sorry I should have explained. In my story, most people live underground in mostly self sufficient communities. It’s not longer necessary, but they fear another war starting if they see people from the other side (there was a civil war like 300 years ago). Being mostly self sufficient, they still need supplies. So sometimes people…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Overall I really liked it! Thanks for sharing it with us!

About the general dynamic, I don’t know what you have planned for the future, I thought the ending scene with the hot sauce didn’t make a lot of sense. It’s only for revenge, and I think pretty much all abused kids (whether emotional or physical) would not react that…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Id love to hear your ideas! But if you want to save them and share the draft later, thats fine too!