Milena

@joy-caroline

Hello again!

haha thank you! it’s a line from my first fantasy novel that the beloved Tyroll Rouronon says. He’s my readers’ favorite character, (is it pride to say he’s mine as well? XD)

I like the signature you have as well, it’s a powerful one that makes one stop and think… at least it does me. and thank you for the tips!…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Not sure if you’re still doing these, but I’d love one of these, if you are! 😀

My MC is Clarissa Fernwillow, she’s a 15 year old princess with long wavy brown hair and emerald green eyes. She loves reading and journaling, and often gets lost in her thoughts. Her kingdom’s colors are green and brown, and her most common themes are…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

ok cool! thanks!

Hi! I have a fantasy WIP and I wanted some feedback on some of it if that’s okay…

Warning: I’m like how Gandalf described hobbits discussing family trees, when it comes to my world; “They can sit upon the edge of ruin and discuss family connections to the ninth degree…” something like that XD

What kind of Wip stuff can I post on this?…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Yeah my friends call me a tragedy writer but they also say the reason they like my writing is because some of the good guys die and not just the bad guys, so I stick to my plot mwahahaha I is evil

Ohhhhh thanks!!! I haven’t tried thesaurus before, not sure why, I’ll totally try that! thanks!

I also use sob/sobbing a lot XD and whimper,…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms

Hello Kadotake!

ooo I like saying that out loud, I’m grinning like a Cheshire cat, that’s such a cool alias!!

Yay!! someone else who loves ducks! that’s so cool you have ducks!

I have been attempting writing fantasy and getting stuck on chapter one since I was… oh, grief, eight? I started getting somewhere about a year…[Read more]

@anika123

Alright. If you like you can copy/paste these right into the Doc.

@anika123

I would, but I noticed that when I try to comment it includes my email address, once I’m able to sign out of my Google account I’ll comment it in the Doc.

@anika123

I’m on page 4 so far and I love the story! I do, however, have a couple of concerns. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes that need to be fixed, I suggest those first. And I also suggest giving the characters’ individual voices. I can’t tell the difference between who’s speaking, thankfully this is an easy fix by developing tone…[Read more]

@iluvhim18

HAHA apples are grown up cherries, that is awesome!!! oh man, I remember someone telling me I’d have sprouts grow out of my ears if I ate apples seeds, my sister avoided them like the plague and I ate all the ones I could get, just to be a rebel XD

yeah he’s not the most popular person, but he has some good stuff.

@iluvhim18

haha yeah!

Thanks! glad you like it!

@elfwing

That’s great! And little kids are very impressionable, one time I convinced my little brother one time that apples were just cherries all grown up. (Don’t worry, I fixed my mistake later, I’m not that mean!)

I’ve never heard of him, but then again, I live under a rock when it comes to popular media. xD

@iluvhim18

HAHA oh man, I feel sorry for them… (almost)

oh and a line I just came up with yesterday for a sarcastic book character, “oh, my heartbreak.” *pauses while they whine some more, sighs, “suck it up, you’re fine, I don’t see blood or broken bones.”

Homo sapiens XDD

my siblings would just ask me what it means until I tell them.…[Read more]

@elfwing

Wow, you just seem to be popping up everywhere for me, aren’t you? xD

I skimmed through it and it looks great so far. Keep up the amazing work, Iris!

@anika123

I’d love to be a beta reader and provide feedback for you! I’m not sure if I’d be the best person because I don’t have anything published myself yet, but I’m getting closer and closer every day and have been writing for years.

I don’t share my email because it not only includes my full name but also my town/school name, and I’m not…[Read more]

@elfwing

I’ve got to try that sometime, they already get soooo mad at me when I ask if they died. Time to make them even more mad at me hahhaha.

They got so upset when I called them ‘homosapiens’ until they told on me to our parents and my parents explained that it just means human….

@iluvhim18

haha cool! when my siblings whine, I say something similar; “you gonna live?”

if it’s like, bump their to into a corner or step on lego, i’m like “Be it a mortalizing wound?”

them: …..*silence