Mary G

@abimail-m Of course! We’d love to have you!!

@nova21 Absolutely! Thank youu <3

Ooooh that last line almost sounds like poetry!! Love itt. Awesome word-count right back at you!

@godlyfantasy12

Yes, I totally feel this!!  Everything people already said was great, but the thing I’d consider the most is to try writing something new.  That doesn’t mean you’re giving up on your book, you just need a break from your particular WIP.  And, hey, you might even get some ideas for your 2nd draft from another project… that’s ha…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Ooo, awesome question!  Well, my answer would be that I hate the passive heroes.  The ones that let everyone tell them what to do, or the ones that just “go with the flow.”  There’s a time and a place for that, but definitely not in the MC, imo! 😄

Oh, and melodramatic/overly-emotional heroes are the worst!!  Like when they just sit…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

From :24–:12= 554 words

Last lines:

Am I strong? I can learn to be; only the strong are hopeful.
Am I ready? It’s now or never, and I can’t go back.
Am I hope? Michael believes I am. He sees it in me.  I think I’m learning to believe him.

We’ll have to do it again sometime, Daisy. 😉

@daisy-torres

Of course, thanks for joining!!! 😃  Awesome word count and last line!!!!!  Super intriguing 🙂

Thanks for letting me sprint with you, @nova21!!

143 words

:29–:50

Fav line:

I inhaled a breath that shattered the atmosphere of silence around me. Putting the led to the dimpled surface of paper, I began to draw the mask.

Ok! :29

@daisy-torres

Cool, starting at :24

@nova21 sure! It’ll be short tho because I’m about to leave haha

@daisy-torres

i loooove the leaderboard idea!!!!  awesome job!

@issawriter7

girk, you did soooo good!!!! 😃💛

@daisy-and/or-issa, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @nanisnook, @abigail-m, @writerlexi1216, @mkfairygirl, @devastate-lasting

Want to write with me rn?  or soon?

@issawriter7 You’re welcome!!!!

@sparksaraabbott11

Hey!  Sorry I’m late… but welcome to KP!!!  I’m Ella, and as I was reading over past posts, I see we have a lot in common!  KotLC is like my favorite series ever!!!  And all the music you mentioned I love!  And Song of the Sea…  I have literally watched that five times–it is sooo good!!

A little more about me:  I play bb…[Read more]

@gracie-j

OOO, I am loving this topic!! 😉  (You are such a good writer btw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)  And you’re totally not the only romance guru out there–I adore sweet/well-written romances sooo much!!!!!!!!!

My favorite kiss scenes are the ones where you’ve been waiting for it for so long, and then when it happens, everything seems r…[Read more]

@joy-caroline You’re absolutely welcome!!!

@mkfairygirl She can!! I won’t go into a looot of detail because it’s kind of a plot twist, buut basically she’s a cyborg ;D So she’s super strong and has unlimited computer access XD

Awww your memoir sounds super sweet!! That’s awesome that you were able to overcome your stage-fright! Is it still fun to you?

Eeek!!! I’m soo happy it’s…[Read more]

@issawriter7 Aww absolutely!! I’m so glad it helped you out!!! You did fantastic this week!!! CONGRATS!!!! <3

@kayleigh-idea

Hey!  Can I finish the last one tomorrow?  So sorry for taking awhile–I’ve super, super busy!!!

But thank you so much for letting me read and critique your story!!  I wish you the best with editing, publishing, and your whole Project Gorgon journey!!!!  You’ve got talent, and I’m so glad you’re using it to glorify God!

Best,

Ella

@devastate-lasting Oh absolutely!! I hope it does! I know it’s helped me out this week haha. It can be hard to find motivation sometimes.