@magicalstories0611
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Esther replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
I never understood how authors wrote actual long books. Now I understand how… but it’s still hard to do! XD My WIP will probably be about 50,00-60,000 words. Which I feel is not a lot compared to what some other authors write, but its progress and I’ll take it!
Short stories can be much easier! I find short stories hard somet…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @princesa-chronicle22 @keilah-h
I know!! My poor Tyrone!!!
I would share my book on here except… it’s really bad. Like I know what I need to fix, but it’s a lot… and I haven’t been wanting to dive into that quite yet. XD
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Loopy replied to the topic The Gentleman in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
I love that! It was super sweet and it flowed really well. I think Min is right with the stanza thing, but it was still fun to read. Also, you could maybe put a period after “rude to me” and make “He was a gentleman” it’s own sentence to make the ending more powerful.
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Loopy replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
The premise of your story sounds a lot like Bendy and the Ink Machine,
Yeah… I’ve been struggling to keep my story from being too much like that. They are frustratingly similar sometimes.
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Loopy replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Hello, I’m Loopy. I like writing a lot of genres, but mostly fantasy. I love poetry, but I’ve only done a little bit myself, and they were made to be songs or prophecies in my stories.
I like your name. Is it at all based off of Anne of Green Gabels?
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Loopy replied to the topic Hello there. Greetings and salutations. Other forms of 'hi.' in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Hello and welcome to kingdom pen!
I’m thinking about maybe doing a serial style (like Hardy Boys, Nancy Drew) mystery series for younger kids with snakes as the characters. Main character’s name would be Ramen, only for the fact that I could then call him “Agent Noodle…” This would be in the far future.
This is adorable…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
I’m not actually sure what the difference between horror and thriller is, but yes I have started some. I have one main scary story about old Mickey Mouse/ Felix the Cat style black and white cartoons. I also have another unfinished short story that is a murder mystery and there’s one of those kit-kat clocks (the old cat clo…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
:O That looks so cool! I love your world building
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings I know I’ve already said this, but Maylee is so cute 💕
Dante and Ellie
“I agree that we should move from this spot.”
Dante held back a laugh. He had never heard anyone speak as formally as Serin did. He was more used to the crude, common slang used by the people on his planet.
“Let’s go this way. I…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Hehe, yes I love worldbuilding if you couldn’t tell XD And yeah I’ll definatley share them when they’re drawn!
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@keilah
Thank you! I only have one of Serin that I’ve already shared but I can show it again! I wanna do one with their armor soon, and some of Serin’s formal wear that I had imagined for a scene in the book

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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin (anyone else who wants to see!)
Oookay, so this is Pelgar where my race the Pelagrkine’s live (Aka Serin’s home). So originally they lived in the ocean. But then a civil war broke out and they split into two seperate tribes, one half was drivin on land. They found refuge in a strange anomoly of land, a large…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Xd I figured it was something like that, it makes sense and I couldn’t help laughing while I read your last Rp about him
though sad no ones really apologized to him before. He’s an intruiging character and I’m excited to see how he develops!
Yeah I’ll show you!
@keilah
Thanks! Her world Ohven is part of a big project I’m working…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Hello and welcome back!! I never officially met you, but at the beginning of this year, I think in March, there was a short story contest, and I almost created a KP account in time to participate, but I wasn’t able to. Life, I guess. But I did read the short stories, and yours was so good!! I think it was called “Witches Son”…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
All except Dante, anyway. He seemed almost disappointed
Hehe. Yeah, sorry. Dante knows how to deal with people being mad at him because he kinda stirs up chaos wherever he goes. However, he has never had anyone apologize to him really for anything, so he has no idea how to respond.
I mentioned some stuff about Pelgar’s s…
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Light replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin
SERIN
She straightened out of her bend, it looked as though the group had taken the apology and greeting well. All except Dante, anyway. He seemed almost dissapointed. “It’s fine.” The boy muttered before looking up at Layson. “It’s getting cold in here, and you guys are wet. We should probably keep m…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
(imma just slip into the middle of this conversation don’t mind me)
Oh, I love absurd comedy, but I didn’t know there was a name for it until now. Alice in Wonderland is one of my favorite books because of it. I also have a couple (more mild) horror stories, but I haven’t shared them because I didn’t know there were other a…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Hello humans (I hope) in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
@c-j (thank you so much for having an easy tag to type out lol)
Hello! I’m Loopy. I like writing fantasy mostly and also drawing.
I have a couple newbie questions:
1. Do you have a favorite myth or fairytale?
2. If you were an animal, what do you think you would be? (Bases mostly off of your personality)
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Hello humans (I hope) in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Hello hello! Welcome to the kingdom! I am @princesachronicle22 (Last I checked I was still human so I think we’re good) XD
Now, for your questions *rubs hands and grins eagerly*
1. What is your favorite book or series? (You can have multiple favorites)
2. What is your most enjoyable passtime?
3. Would you rather find true love today or…[Read more]
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