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@gwyndalf-the-wise

I went this whole time thinking Eddie was a guy… Whoops.

lol, nah, you’re fine. I have a bad habit of naming characters names that are technically for both genders, but are usually used for one or the other. For example, I have a boy character named Lois. He gets teased for it a lot by his friend.

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Oh, yes! More ideas always please!

@power

These are fantastic, thank you. XD  There will definitely be explosions, and I will use those other ideas too (especially the bushy eyebrow alien).

@katthewriter

Hehe, I love these. I want to meet Roger now.

@gwyndalf-the-wise

rofl!!! Those are absolutely hilarious!! …and soo true… XDXDXD

@gwyndalf-the-wise

You can totally add some characters in!

If you want, I can add some of my other charries so they can join up with yours. Does that work?

@gold_hummingbird

0. We met each other a few days ago, during a Crazy Writing Week that is currently going on. It was @godlyfantasy12 who actually told me about Kingdom Pen.

So cool! I briefly considered doing CWW, but then I was like: no, my schedule is already full. Lol. I write in the afternoon, and that is when lots of the extracurricular…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Me too! Lol!

I’m a plantser, so I do have some things plotted, but most of it just plays out itself. For example, after they went to the prison, most of what happened afterwards wasn’t really in my outline. 🙂

@godlyfantasy @princesachronicle22

Sorry it took me so long to reply!

Anyway. Princesa, do you want to RP next. My charries are just kinda standing around waiting for Uvah to do something. XD

And, Godly, I don’t mind your using Aloth. 😉 You wrote him perfectly!

@keilah-h

YOU CATCH LIZARDS TOO!??!?!? (Haha, okay, sorry for yelling.)

That has been literally all I do when I’m outside ever since I was 5. I’m a professional lizard catcher XD. I actually caught a green anole this past summer and named her Lizzie. I tried to catch a male so I could release them at our woodpile, and have a little community of…[Read more]

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Congradulations on 21 chapters!

Thanks!

@mineralizedwritings

Yes! I do want critique! 🙂

You are so good at the subtle romance between Ev and Ami, it’s really cute!!

Thx!! I love writing it!

I kinda get what you are trying to portray here, but that could be taken pretty badly by some. My personal opinion is that Ev would have a responsibility to both forgive and protect himself from f…

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@e-m-trepke

Now that I read over my post and just saw what you said, I guess that what I thought doesn’t really make any sense. 😅 But that’s okay. 😁

yes, the worldbuilding was awesome!

@katthewriter

These are all fantastic 😂

@loopylin

Oh yeah!! That would be fun. Matthew is probably gonna be so freaked out at any of the rooms haha.

@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6

Do you want to put out group with Paxton, Tauren, Matthew, etc. in one of the weird rooms like the portrait hall or the ice room?

@keilah-h

yeah. I just used my Latin knowledge to smoosh together the words for gold and bird.

@theloonyone @keilah-h

Aurivis 

“Do you know how we can leave here?”

The man stumbled to his feet, breathing raggedly. He glared at Milo, but said nothing in response to his question.

“I don’t think the arrogant fool knows any more than we do.” Aurivis said, returning the man’s glare. He huffed and turned toward the others. “We will have to f…[Read more]