@magicalstories0611
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Alright, so for the legal system, there is what they call the Orythian Council (Orythia is most likely going to be their solar system). It is made up of two representatives from each kingdom on every planet. They usually decide the laws, though they have to be approved by at least four planets to go through. I can try to answer…
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
XDXD That’s hilarious!!
Actually, my cousins are sweethearts!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Also, wish me luck! I’ll be gone from one to three playing music for the school I used to go to. 🙂
Good Luck!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 3 years, 6 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
We don’t have a lot of forests where I live. We’re kind of just surrounded by farmers’ fields, so I guess I’ll have to find somewhere that does. Oooh… What about a forest in the mountains? That would be perfect! 😄
Same here. Suburbs, cities, and farmland. XD
Yes!! It would be!! Our family visited Colorado I think 2 summers ago…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 3 years, 6 months ago
That song sounds so fitting!! When I get the chance I’ll listen to it. 😊
Actually for after he loses Jocelyn….
Wait, wait, wait…
hold on…
JOCELYN DIES!?!?!
NOOOOO!! She can’t!! I love her!! 😭
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76
Y’all are here saying you love the name Micah, and I’m over here like: 😐 “My cousin’s name is Micah.” 🤣 And you know how cousin’s are… 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I could add even more charries for them to join if y’all wanted…🤣
There’s a couple I may need some practice writing. 😜💗
If you want to. 🤣
I know @godlyfantasy12, @princesachronicle22 and I were a group that had Des, Fynn, and Sky in it. If they are willing to pick up that group again, then I’m fine with that. I’m okay with you…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
1. Any other country… Good question! I’m going to have to go with Israel, I think? Because I would get to see some of the places where Jesus walked!
That would be so cool!! I used to really want to visit Israel (and I still do), but I really want to visit Ireland/Northern Ireland now because of the scenery and the accents. &#x…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The news is out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Yep! I understand! 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic No Boring Scenes?? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 6 months ago
If you’re bored writing a story, that doesn’t mean it’s a bad chapter. It might mean you’re getting tired of the project and need to work on another one for a little until you get new ideas! Or, if you think a scene is getting boring or useless for your charries/readers, insert some foreshadowing for what’ll come later.
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I think it was from yesterday. Unfortunately I wasn’t on right then though.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Ok, so on my WIP. It always feels kinda hard for me to know where to start, because it is a multiverse. So what would you like to hear about? Some lore, languages, cultures, races, the seven eras of my world, stories, characters the math, ect?
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Light replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh okay! Yeah I thought Zolten was her uncle…
her actual dad sounds so sweet!! And she didn’t know that was her Dad that gave her Nyx…Ahhh that whole dynamic is just 😭😭
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Light replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Hey, Writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Hi @light-warrior-pen !
Nice to meet you! I’m theArcaneAxiom. I love math, and searching for divine fundamental truth. I like to explore these concepts in creating sci fi/fantasy stories and worlds.
Questions:
Do you enjoy worldbuilding? If so, hard or soft? (Hard meaning concrete rules to follow, and soft meaning more open possibility.)
What…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
I hope both of y’all had a great church service, and Godly, I hope you had fun at the concert, and Light, I hope you had an absolutely amazing, wonderful birthday!!! 💗💗💗
Oops just saw this! Thank you!! We didn’t make it to church, we stayed up late for my birthday. I did have a wonderful birthday! My Mom got me a s…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
There is a group that decides what is and isn’t legal. I’ll get back to you later, because I have some schoolwork to get done lol. I agree that it is very optimistic, and I’m probably going to work on a better system, too.
Sounds good! Good luck on your school work!
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
(AWW Bren’s got a stubborn streak XD 😍)
But….oof…that’s not good…😬😬
So Asher is a lot more stubborn than Vance had expected…but that didn’t stop him from getting as much out of him as he could…
But eventually, Asher is so just exhausted that he lets something slip…and then when he realizes what he’s done, he…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
For your first point, that makes a lot of sense, and I’ll look into it.
Sounds good!
Second, yes, there are earth-like creatures in my world, but I think I’m going to add twists to some of them (not quite sure what that means yet lol). Rina, though she can’t remember the name, used to live in a town called Winterknoll, on her h…
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