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@freedomwriter76

Aww, well, you like it, and that’s the most important thing!!!! 😃😁❤️😊

Definitely! 😊

@karissa-chmil

Ahhh, yessss. Rilla of Ingleside is honestly one of my favorite books. <3 Walter is amazing.

Same!!!!!!

Did you ever see the poem someone wrote for him (the one that they allude to in the book many times)?

Um… I can’t remember… which poem was it?

If the pen is mightier than the sword, why do actions speak louder than words?

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizdwritings

Matthew

Jared’s brow furrowed and a forlorn expression covered his face.

He looked…lonely.

So lonely.

And I knew exactly how that felt.

Jared wrapped his arms around himself, trying to protect his body against the chill. “I-I don’t have any friends.”

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@euodia-vision

I am SO, SOO sorry it took me so long to respond!! My responce got deleted idk how many times and I ended up yelling at the computer “Wait…Error?! Of COURSE I wanted to do that! Why would I have pressed submit if I didn’t?!” XD

But, again, I’m so sorry! 😭😭 I hope you’ve been doing well!

HIIIII! *jumps up and down with…

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@freedomwriter76

I’m so glad he gets redeemed, but…but…

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

AHHH I know right!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

(i understand though. XD i have to do it a lot to charries, and everyone knows it 😂😂😂)

XDXD Haha, yeah. Sometimes it just has to happen, for the other characters to benefit from it (or not benefit, depends on the story 😂😭😭)

Aww, girl,…

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@kyronthearcanin

Thanks! 🙂

@kyronthearcanin

Of course, sorry if I come off as a know it all when I point anything out. My own worldbuilding is also very incomplete, and I agree on the list thing. Maybe I should start posting some chapters of my WIP sometime, though it gets a little creepy at parts, but it would be nice to have a nice set of critiques as well.

@kyronthearcanin

That’s true, but side would be very hard for them to keep balanced, unless they were double sided, or just super small. Then once again, there’s the neck issue. If they never developed much for military, living in peace with one another as well as with the other races, then it would make sense that they don’t really develop their…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, I suppose that makes a little more sense for the Felisaro, though even with that, this is going to be a major hindrance to their development as a race in comparison to the others as @keilah-h mentioned, but there is a lot of interesting dynamics you could get into with that if you wanted. Using short range weapons still seems…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, that would make for some interesting history! Btw, @kyronthearcanin , do the Arcanin also use their mouths, or do they use some other method, like their magic?

@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just brainstorming, I guess.

Yep XD

@freedomwriter76

And you’re so welcome!! They are so entertaining and I love reading them!! 😀

Would anyone like some fresh questions to ponder?

Who has tasted protons before?

What do protons taste like?

When did you taste said protons?

Where did you taste said protons?

Why did you taste said protons?

How did you taste said protons?

@freedomwriter76

Yes…

You heard me right. (Unfortunately 🙁)

I’ve been mapping out his character arc…and, well…

That’s the end of it. 

BUT!! He is redeemed before he dies. But yea…when I said before I don’t feel bad for him much…I do feel bad for him here. But Dylan…I feel SO bad for Dylan…

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@keilah-h

Right, yeah that would make sense, but don’t the Arcanin also walk on all fours? As their known as the kind you don’t want to recon with, being seen as by far the most powerful of all of them?

@freedomwriter76

❤️❤️❤️ Thank you!! 🙂

@godlyfantasy12 AW BREN 😭😭😭😭 And @freedomwriter76 I RARELY feel bad for him, honestly 😂. Even when speculating his death

Godly, you write Vance so well!! Like, that’s exactly what he would do, (unfortunately 😬). I really love reading y’all’s RPs!! They’re always so good 😀

@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin

Thanks! The issue with that though is it seems already pretty well established that the Felisaro somehow get around this, and are quite advanced. Unless they did take longer to advance, or maybe even piggy backed of from some of the others, but even that would come with a wide set of difficulties, going back again to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I can’t yet, about to wash some dishes 😅, but I’ll try to later! 😊

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, I’m so sorry for not responding to this after so long, I just now was able to get around to reading it. It’s really good! I like the cast of characters you got going, and you really seem to be building up on the idea of whether or not Quelin is friend or foe, is that going to turn into a major theme or arc?

A few…[Read more]