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@freedomwriter76

Awww Erich!! 😭

So, I know you’re not going to be able to make every reader love Erich. But I think we should have more stories that have an ‘unlikeable’ MC. Like they start out not being the greatest character but then you love them more as they change.

I can think of two examples. Tony Stark and Thorin Oakenshield (I know…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Loved that scene girl! I love your characters!

@smiley

Ooooo good idea!! I’ll hopefully be able to do some!

@loopylin @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 – haha yay!! Erich and Riker! 😂

Hey y’all, sorry I’m late. XD Had a crazy couple of days… bee chaos… *shivers* anyway, here’s an RP!

Tirion

“Anyway, like I was trying to ask earlier, what worlds are you guys from?” Felicity asked, looking intently at her fellow foodies.

Tirion glanced at Marcel who no…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

*Does happy dance*

Whooo!! that is SOO EXCITING!! I’m so happy for you!!!

@jonas

Hmmm, that’s hard, because you can tell it’s a bit derivative from a lot of preexisting ideas. To change that would be to radically change the system as a whole, which is fine, just annoying, but often necessary.

One issue I immediately have is with the name and the first element. If it is called “essence burning” does that not show an…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @freedomwriter76

If nobody does it before me, I’ll write the first RP either tomorrow or Friday. 🙂 (tomorrow’s gonna be busy, so I may not get to it. 😉 )

@freedomwriter76

Woo-hoo!!!! Congratulations!!!!! 💖🥳

@freedomwriter76

WOOOHOOOOOOO FREEDOM!!!!!!! SO EXCITED FOR YOU!!!!!!

🎉🎉🎉🎉🥳🥳🥳🥳❤❤❤❤❤

@savannah_grace2009

Even though she’s beautiful she thinks that she’s ugly because that’s what she’s been told all her life.

If she ever says something self-derogatory in front of Amir, he’s going to be so shocked. 😂 And seeing her sort of red hair is going to surprise him (and @mineralizedwritings Kaine’s hair) since in his country red hair is…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Girl…my brother and I have been watching The Hobbit movie trilogy this week…we’re almost finished with The Battle of The 5 Armies…

Ughhhh it’s sooooo goooodddd but saddddd and goooddd 😍😍✨✨😭😭

I had forgotten how much I love those movies!!! 🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍

ARGHHHHHH! That is like one of my favorite and least favorite movies of all time!…[Read more]

@smiley

Ooooooo! I like it! Hannah sounds wonderful for Pietro too!!!

I’m excited to hear more!

@freedomwriter76

heyyy! so as far as your question about sam sacrificing himself… i think I would say something similar to Min, in that if Thor or Captain Marvel are there and could potentially survive, why make Sam do it? It might leave a reader frustrated over a pointless death.

but also agree that Bucky would so sad!! he’s already gone…[Read more]

savannah_grace2009

The language would be not their main language, but most would grow up bilingual. Most speak only English but some do speak Erstonian (the other universal language), so like I said they would learn both languages. I’m not sure where the magic words come from/what gave them power, but they are only used by the Pythonos when they c…

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@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

XD my brain must be tired because instead of putting Light’s name I put @Ezrian, like who tries to tag their own charrie 😂🤪

EZRIAN

Eyebrows raised, Ezrian blinked down at the youth who had just fallen face forward onto the floor and then promptly introduced himself. Though he did look foreign…maybe falling…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6

Jack 

Just as Tyler spoke, the closet door swung open into the hall again.

Jack stepped out, still talking to Cody over his shoulder. “You can’t just slam the door in someone’s face. Come on out ‘an introduce yerself.”

He turned to the two out in the hall and gave them both a respectful nod. “Sorry for…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Seriously, though, your writing style is my favorite. I can’t wait to read something you publish.

@whalekeeper

This might just be me being a grammar perfectionist, and you haven’t done it in a while, but I have noticed a couple times you have written sentences like this:

“He stopped at the door, listened.”

I’ve seen actual published authors do this too, so it’s probably not a big deal, but when I see it, it distracts me from the story bec…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Dude, I love your writing style so much though! I’m trying to find something in your role plays, but I might be better at critiquing a snippet (sorry you’re busy with school! If you can’t find one, that’s alright.). I’ll keep looking, though.

@whalekeeper

Aww, thanks! 😊

I wonder why I do it though?

Do you have any common tropes like that?