Lydibug

@loopylin

She’s so cuuuute XD Hey, and she has my hair style too!

Wyoh, may your floors be always covered in lego and d4s

@whalekeeper XD oh, no, the goats live in the yard

@rae Cool! I miss living with animals

NEVER STICK YOUR HAND IN A ADULT GOAT’S MOUTH THOUGH. THEY’RE TEETH ARE NASTY!

👍 wasn’t planning on it

@loopylin

*Snorts* Just imagining someone with a pet goat around the house –

@rae You got that right @loopylin

Sebzter

The best part about the whole thing was how, in utter confusion in the darkness, those in the halls joined the bullies in a tidal wave of people. They had no idea what the rush was about, but followed quickly.

The leaders, however, were perfectly aware of what was happening, insomuch as revenge was…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium Thank you!

@keilah-h Yeah, they make the character more fun to write and add more options for expressing body language

Alas, we have been cursed to be faceless nobodies, for they have indeed vanished.

Aw, but I liked my smug crow face 🙁

@whalekeeper

A ram began to chew on his pants.

Oddly relatable. The people I’m house sitting for have goats and one of them kept nibbling at my jeans today because apparently I wasn’t feeding her fast enough.

@keilah-h

Jaylen’s character design sounds really cool! I love the four wings

@rae

Okay 😂 Um, I took the prompt “fairy tale” and went for exactly what Winston would picture as a fairy tale.

Winston

When Winston woke, he found real life to be all the more unrealistic.

The young demon-born rolled onto his back, and rubbed grass clippings out of his hair. Around him green hills rustled in the breeze, and a blinding blu…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I’ve read some more of your book! I think I stopped at chapter 16.

The only big thing I’ve noticed so far is that Sef’s expression of her grief feels a little unrealistic. Of course anyone would be devastated if their only family they had left was taken away, that part makes sense. I just felt that her hurting herself reall…[Read more]

Or at least stop bugging us or we will report you to the authorities…

die wyoh

@freed_and_redeemed

Praying for y’all!! <3 We have similar warnings in our area.

Help… please… *gasps for breath* I have been in their clutches for so long… *death rattle*

Holy cow, Wyoh had me in a vice-like grip for a couple days…

anyway.

@keilah-h

All I can say is, it’s coming along 🙂

@rae

Do you want to roleplay first, or can anyone start?

YEEESSS, I ESCAPED

…Wyoh? *check check*

@freed_and_redeemed

Ooh, I’m kinda struggling with something similar with a new WIP idea.

What I’ve been starting to notice is that you have to weigh the importance of each scene. Is each scene impacting the MCs arc in some way? How does it move along the plot? And sometimes some scenes will feel slow, but that’s not always a bad thing. Brain…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad I could offer some helpful input!

Ooh, can’t wait to read this next chapter later today!!