Lydia S.

@landric Most of the historical fiction I’ve read is in third person, so unless you have a strong reason to go with first, I might stick with third? Especially since that’s what your audience is expecting, and they probably like it better. 😋 But ooh, journal entries + third person sound excellent!

Bruh freedom did u throw the stupid klutz line in on purpose, I just caught that!

Bren

Bren scooted between both groups and into the wall, wishing he could fade into it. He scrubbed at his face, pulling his knees to himself.

“Stupid klutz…” The man with the scary rope muttered. Bren shook, squeezing his eyes shut.

“Are you his father?…[Read more]

@acancello Yesssss, they’re all amazing. You’re making me want to go re-read Jo’s Boys. XD

Since Light can’t RP right now imma RP again if that’s ok lol @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76

@freedomwriter76 nevermind just saw it XD!

@freedomwriter76 u can RP next if u like 😊

@lightoverdarkness6 they will be don’t worry. But in the meantime!!! We hurt our charries, of course…. XD XD *why are writers like this? XD*

Thx yall!

@freedomwriter76 hey I don’t wanna bother u but any progress on the one fanfic?

ok…either of the fanfics? (That orphan marvel one of the other one?) XD

@freedomwriter76 figured it would be ok if he met those two villains from earlier with Benji?

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Bren

Bren cried, shrieking as Vance dragged him through yet another room.

He was quite tired of being dragged around at this point, and now it seemed his only chance of being rescued…was long gone.

Why?! Why was this happening to him?!

Was…was he being punished?

The thought made his small heart thump rap…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 since I’m not entirely sure what to do with those girls maybe just say that Viola did something and the girls ran off from her so now they’re off on their own 😂

@lightoverdarkness6 so we’re focusing on the villains rn for a bit and we wanna get them all met up right? Wanna get that started everybody?

my poor bren gonna…[Read more]

@light-warrior-pen XD I feel that so badly.

@loopylin @joy-calle @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @orielle21 @whalekeeper

AHHH I AM SO EXCITED AND AN LOVING THIS!!! THESE COUPLES ARE SO GREAT! I love how Dante knew the answers so those questions and I’m seriously wondering what is running thru Ellie’s head like “HOW DID HE KNOW THAT/WHY DID HE KNOW THAT XD”

there should be a segment…[Read more]

@acancello Yesss, the Little Women trilogy is the best! I actually thought Jo’s Boys was another name for Little Men the first time I saw it and didn’t pick it up because of that. XD I know I’m probably not supposed to ask this question, but I’m going to anyhow. 😇 Do you have a favorite of those three?

Also, have you ever read any of Jennifer…[Read more]

*sneaks in with confetti* I am horrid at titles, but – @light-warrior-pen! Congrats! *throws confetti and offers cake* That’s a huge accomplishment. Fantastic work! 🥳 *slinks back away from title talk*

“Misery, misery! Readers won’t kill us, nice readers-“

Adapted Gollum quotes aside, I think you can outrage your readers without cheating them. Both can happen in a character’s death, and cheated readers very often are outraged. 😛 But you can reasonably outrage a reader without them feeling cheated.

If you truly build up your character (and it…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin That sketch is amazing! 😍 How long have you been drawing?

@thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22

So actually…Corvina isn’t comfortable killing anyone…

She was almost forced to as a child but got around it…

but that actually gives an excuse for her silence after she’s tied up 😉 so it works well for the RP

She would NOT have let them bind her if she wasn’t distracted (by the fact that she’d l…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings gotta go listen to it!