Lydia S.

@godlyfantasy12

I’m with Ara on this one; Riven is HORRIBLE!!! I love the way you described him, tho, especially:

The way his tone dipped in the most subtle, cutting ways…

*grinz* Lovely, m’friend. Absolutely lovely!!!

@madelyn

No worries, girl! I usually take a embarrassingly long while to respond, so it’s all good. 😉

Wishing you the best with this! Go get ‘em!

@godlyfantasy12

I love the character collages!!! They’re all wonderful. I think Corvina’s might be my fav… (I love an interesting villain😉)

@emilysf

Ooo… Love it! (Funny, but I actually had to read Thoreau for school this year, so I get that quote.😂)

@elishavet-pidyon

That quote… I love it!!! XD Is it original?

@emilysf

I agree with you! It takes a lot for a scene to impress me, and that scene did. Nicely done! 😉

Nice to meet you, Clare! Can’t wait to get to know you better. 🙂 <333

Here’s a scene I’m fairly happy with. It needs rewritten, but it’s a good start. 🙂 It’s the first scene in my fantasy WIP in which the villain makes an appearance.

The girl was riding it now. The boy had let her have a turn. Her laughter lilted down through the sky to where he crouched in the shadow of the trees. He didn’t dare move. He could not…

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@godlyfantasy12

Thanks for tagging me! This will be fun. 😀

I LOVED your scene!!!! Poor November… *stifled sob* Makes me curious to know what’s up with this journal.😉

@emilysf

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Wow.

Just… wow…

That was PHENOMENAL! BRAVO!!!

As a side note, I don’t believe I’ve met you yet. Welcome to the KP forum! I’m Lydia. 🙂

@denali-christianson

Hi! I don’t believe I’ve met you yet. So nice to see you! I’m Lydia. 🙂 Welcome to the KP forum!

@unsung

*sidles into chat, grinning sheepishly* Well, I’m a bit late to the party… But welcome to the KP forum, Unsung! So good to have you here. 🙂 I’m Lydia.

Another Tolkien fan, woohoo!!! Tolkien is probably the author I admire the most; I’m a big fan! (To be perfectly honest, tho, you’re not the only one who’s never read LOTR.😉My mom read it…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

OoooOoOoOoOooo… Yeah, I’ve been there… Trying to make the choice of whether or not to let a beloved character go (whether by death or by joining the “bad guys”) is SO HARD.

I guess, for me, it came down to reality, predictability, and cliche-ness (pretty sure that’s not a word, but, oh well!😂). The character I had this proble…[Read more]

@madelyn

Ah, well, here’s the issue: I’m a plantser. I do a bit of planning and a LOT of pantsing. All I know when I start thinking up a WIP is the beginning, ending, or a climactic scene near the end. I rarely beginning working on the project right away, so it simmers away on a back burner while I focus on other things (like, geometry… *grim…[Read more]

@faith-q

Lovely story idea! Honestly, aside from the tropes Joy and Daisy mentioned, it sounds unique to me! And, like they also said, even those tropes are common, they are still incredibly enjoyable (Honestly, the more I think about it, almost every story has a “chosen one” of some sort, even in the Bible). So, in my opinion, you’ve got a great…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Take your time! If anyone understands how busy life can get, it’s me. 😉 So, no worries if it takes longer than you expect. I’ll be excited to read it whenever! 😀

@keilah-h

Oh, really??? How cool!!!

@e-k-seaver

AGH, THIS IS SO EXCITING!!!!!!!!!!!! Congrats, Em!!!! I’m so happy for you. XDXDXD <33333

And no worries about not being active. My participation on here isn’t particularly consistent either. 😅

@e-k-seaver

WOOHOO!!!!!!!!! Congrats, girl! So happy for you. XDXDXD <33333 *showers you with confetti and chocolate*

@daisy-torres

Ooo… Thanks so much for the suggestions! It’s always nice to get directed towards good books. 😀 Jennifer Erin Valent’s trilogy is great with sibling-like relationships. The two girls aren’t actually sisters, but they treat each other and grow up like sisters. It’s a Christian series, but it does get pretty dark/sad by book three…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Agh, thank you so much for reminding me!!! Submitted a few questions earlier today. Excited to read the post when it comes out! XD <333

@madelyn

I’m doing The Writer’s Conservatory! (It’s a three-year college alternative program that teaches students how to write well and on a deadline, how to publish independently and traditionally, and helps you start a small business) They count the program as a credit in English and a credit in business. 🙂

You’d think with how smart technol…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

Oh, thanks for the recommendation! It’s so nice to see good relationships in novels.
I’ve never watched LOTR, but I’m a huge fan of it! Sam is just… *chef’s kiss* XD