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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
(TW- PTSD/ memories of… er, bad things? And panicking? Writing these trigger warning without spoiling is hardddd lol xD)
Chapter 7
X392
What happened? I tried to open my eyes, but they felt like they were locked shut. Making it impossible to open them, leaving me in terrifying darkness. Where am I? I tried to move, but came to a stop when…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Chapter 6
Nathaniel
Looking up I saw Mr. Collins putting the closed sign up. I sighed, glad the day was finally over, there had been a large number of customers, and an abundance of them kept making messes, like toppling over supplies, and knocking things off of shelves. I know they didn’t mean to… but still… Someone could for once pick u…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
(i still cringe at the beginning of this, and some of my wording. ik I’ll change stuff in draft 2! lolll)
(tw- mention of wounds?)
Chapter 5
Roger
I pulled out my sword and in a few quick strides was by his side, my sword pointing at his throat. “I SAID ENOUGH!” Anger burned through me, and I wanted to kill him right then and there, for…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Idea Poll in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
They both sound intriguing, but I think I…
Have a problem with indecision.
But why not cast my vote along with the overwhelming tide? Shall I be contrary enough to build it up against the current?
No, no. I think I genuinely agree. I prefer the possible struggles in the first; the family quality of a father and a daughter, and a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 10 months ago
Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m called Elishavet around here, (also known by my Middle Earthian friends as the Rangeress Aenwest of the Morningstar. By those who know the Shining Isle, I’m a little historian living in Kigor, a town about two day’s travel from Rysen. Narnians know me as that nosy cloaked lass that…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
thanksss
Thank you!! And yes I did make it. I make all my graphics on Canva, the app on my phone or laptop. Free version. 🙂 I’ve been using it since i’ve been writing and really love it. So now I make the graphics for the pins for KP’s pinterest 😀
Ok, awesome! Thanks so much!!!!
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
(Is it way too late to throw one of mine in??)
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KattheWriter and Light are now friends 1 year, 10 months ago
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
(Tw- (this is probably my favorite show don’t tell, but my most gruesome chapter) shows a physical attack (beating her up) and cruel words. BUT DON”T WORRY it’ll all be better soon.)
Chapter 4
X392
I sat there for a long time, gritting my teeth, and trying to not scream my lungs out as I laid in the grass. My cut felt like there were hot…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
(Tw- None)
Chapter 3
Nathaniel
I started sweeping the front porch of the store, using hard big strokes to try to get the layer of dusty dirt off of it quickly.
I was about halfway done when I saw a woman and girl walking up the pathway. I stopped, to let the dust settle so it wouldn’t get in their eyes.
The woman was tall, and nice…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
(TW- mentions murder. Aka my Morally grey character’s past that makes him now morally grey 🙁
Chapter 2
Roger
After staring at the ceiling for a long time, I finally got up. There’s no way I could get to sleep. Not on a night like this… not this one. I got up and walked towards the window, the full moon sending light through it, but sto…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I gripped the bars of the cell so hard my knuckles turned white.
I thought he had changed.
I thought he cared.
He did it.
The thing I never thought he would do.
I felt like I was in a haze.
The noise of chains met my ears.
He said he understood.
He helped me.
How could he?
I staggered and gripped the bars harder.
He said he…[Read more]
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KattheWriter started the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Hey Guys,
I’m going to be sharing my Novel, Finding You, chapter by chapter on here. I shared the beginning snippet (and some character collages, so jump over there if you’d like to see!) and quite a few of you liked it and thought I should put it on here. I will be adding it chapter by chapter, and will probably start with the first 4, as the…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Lol, to be fair he emailed it instead of saying it on here XD. But he also gave me an essay of eveything wrong with it. BUT i’m not against critique, i’m definitely for it. But when your critique is against even proper writing… (like he thinks i should info dump at the beginning and not start in the middle of the scene???…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@orielle21 Thank you! So if I go start posting my story on here would you like me to tag you? 🙂
@freedomwriter76 Thankkkksss ^-^ I’ll tag you when i do soon!
@gwyndalf-the-wise That’s totally okay, whatever is chill. Chapter 4 is the one that makes the sensitive ones a little uncomfortable (very detailed of X392 being beat up) but on the…[Read more]
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KattheWriter and Folith-Feolin are now friends 1 year, 10 months ago
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
That’s totally fine, no worries! Thank you so much for the help and explaining 🙂
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I mean.. If I could add chapter by Chapter section to put my book on here, I would. But i’m not sure if that’ll count as spam even if I just keep it in one of these whatever they’re called. Posts. Or has anyone else done that? Like updated it as they go?
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
also… I love how grammatically correct these boxes all bc all of why i’m typing it’s like going
“Ahem? Hello, but you are terrible at grammar.” Like yes. Ik. Thank you. XD I can write well if it’s in a book. Kinda. But just typing like this I write like texting.Stop personally attacking me Kingdom Pen xD
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Yess my poor girl.
And yess. I do love Roger so much (especially in chapter 27 we show him being SUPER SWEERT and i’m dying of feelsss) our morally grey character that is the fan favorite, BUT Nathaniel aka NATE AKA CINNAMON ROLL BOI will always have a special place in my heart.
Oh yes. I got a message the other day of one of my…[Read more]
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