Rylie Goodwin

@freed_and_redeemed

*Heart melts*

That was so sweet! I love how you tied it all together, and Isabel is adorable.

Who is this Lina? She sounds so sweet and soo much more than a cripple.

Franz…you ignoramus. I’m about to use my store of archaic insults on you.

*Storms off in a huff*

@loopylin

*Pokes head out from secret vantage point*

Hey, I love long RPs. Please don’t apologize. I’d like to see more.

How else are y’all supposed to practice writing and me spying?

*Disappears into the shadows*

@elishavet-pidyon

The tea…XD That should soooo happen.

What if Isabel makes him tea and it tastes awful, but he drinks it anyway so she doesn’t feel bad?

@freed_and_redeemed

A happy/sweet Leon scene!!!!! I’ve been wanting to see some healthy scenes with him and his kids sooo badly! It’s such a sweet family and he loves them so much it hurts to read the not do happy scenes. XD

Ok, so thoughts….

Maybe forget for a moment the spoiler and write as if everything is normal. You can add implications…[Read more]

What if he puts a flower in her hair? What if one of the boys finds a snail or frog and wants to take it home?

@freed_and_redeemed

Awwww, I’ve been so wanting a sweet scene for poor Leon. He’s been through so much.

A walk would be sweet. What about Leon and his daughter picking flowers? The boys could find an earthworm to tantalize their sister with, which could transition into memories of teasing Aadelheide if you wanted (I don’t know if he did, it just…[Read more]

Are you struggling with the plotting itself? or missing scenes?

If you have a vague idea for a scene, you have the base for that scene. How would you describe the event? What emotions are the characters going through? Where is the setting? How did the characters get there? Who all is there? Which ideas could happen first? Are some of these ideas…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t know exactly how to help, but I’ll try. Do you want scene ideas, or a workable method to create scenes, or something else?

Here’s a list of scenes I would kinda like to see someday. Discard if not helpful or unfitting.

• Aravember chasing a butterfly.
• Ara with a splinter getting helped by November (or some other swap…

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@princesachronicle22

It does seem to be acting strange, but I can’t tell why. What does it look like on your end?

@godlyfantasy12 Oh wow, that’s a pretty big thing to portray. And has gotten my brain on a rabbit trail with Moses and his siblings. Some people don’t realize that when they are critical of God’s minister they are undermining of God’s authority, just like Mirriam and Aaron over Moses’s non-Hebrew wife. As Mirriam learned, that’s not a good place…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Does he know what he will be doing is spying? Or does he think he’s supposed to watch out for Ara to keep her safe or something?

In other words, if he thinks the information being passed to his father will be for Ara’s benefit, why? Does he think that Ara could be unknowingly endangering herself, and that the King wants his…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I was wondering if they had an accent…

Amanda has an east Texas accent/drawl. So how I normally speak. XD

Jayson is from French speaking Canada, but has very little accent due to living to the school and living with the Katz’s since he was 7.

Raphael speaks English with a central American accent, Ashkenazic Yiddish, and…[Read more]

Finally a place to share this thought!

You know you’re a writer when a random sentence in (insert language) class strikes your fancy, so you write a short story instead of finishing your lesson.

For instance:

(.אנחנו הילדים)

Let’s hope I’m not double posting this…

You know others know you’re a writer, when your dad says in front of the whole church “when my girls hear the word ‘character’, they instantly come up with things like backstory and plot.”

And when you added “character arc, weapon choice, world building” under your breath, you know it’s true.

Did Wyoh just…*blinks*

A few George MacDonald quotes:

“Whatever is capable of aspiring, must be troubled that it may wake and aspire–then troubled still, that it may hold fast, be itself, and aspire still.”

(If you love Sir Gibbie…) “Gien I was a Burnie, wadna I rin!”

“For one moment…she fancied she saw the Lord Himself. Another woman might have made a more…[Read more]

Here’s an assortment of quotes from my WIP IFF.

“So, I smiled and waved as any other highly trained operative would do as they pencil dove from the top of a fifty-thousand story river lodge.”

“Who do you think you are, Spiderman?” Master Pinkerton glared at me over his glasses.

I straightened my collar and shrugged. “Actually I prefer James…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed @smiley

Who’s turn is it to RP? I think I went last. =)