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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Inglor
“Whoop-de-doo? That’s a phrase I’ve never heard before.” Mirth danced in his leaf green eyes. “But then, I’ve never been around many other peoples before.”
Almarrin
Psychology was such an interesting thing, especially when it could be studied through observation. From his vantage point behind a door he could hear one…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Okay y’all!
Zlatan
The little fox whimpered in a fitful sleep, his head jerking slightly as if he was still fighting. Zlatan frowned.
Nyx needed help, yet how could he get him it, here in a forsaken castle.
There was always…but what if…he shook his head and dug out the little green…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Inglor
What did elves smell like?
He shook his head and turned back to Luna.
“I look young because I am young. Fifty years of my life are like fifteen of others. You see,” he sighed, wondering how to explain. “I am an Alve, one of the fair folk, child of the morning star.”
She still looked a bit confused, but he hoped un…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Oh! I love it. The characters are intriguing, the setting/world is interesting, and the concept is really fun. I want to read the rest!
I especially liked the way you describe the characters bit by bit. The piece where the candlelight is illuminating Aedan’s face was an especially fine part to read. I love the way it formed his features…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Eira
At last, class in over. I gather my things and brush my hair back over one shoulder. It slips through my fingers like limp silk, slight waves all that is left of my curls. With a sigh I heave my backpack into place and shuffle from the room into another empty hall. Why the schedule here makes no sense, I don’t know nor do I care.
My feet…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I hope you don’t mind me putting them in the same class, but I had another scene idea…
Inglor
Nyx wanted to skip class, that much was clear. He frowned slightly and traced the leaf on his shirt collar. “Geometry? I have that also.” He glanced at Almarrin.
“Psychology of aggression.” The grey eyes were smiling.
“Ai! Well…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Viktor
“Ah, thanks anyway! I’ll find him after class.”
Concern flooded through him, filling his eyes and face. He leaned forward and touched the back of her seat.
“Is this a… brother?”
She sighed. “My little brother.”
“When did he disappear? Is this like him?”
Grimm gave a low, sympathetic laugh and Jocelyn huffed. “He s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 1 month ago
Oooo, I want more of these characters, even if I’m not exactly a romance reader. That does help with the background. =)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
Ok!
Reúven & others
Well, here they were. Literature right off the top. Reúven pulled a chair out for Liora and he and Viktor sat down on either side.
The teacher had stepped out to talk with another teacher in the hall, letting the students settle in before class started. She wa…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Almarrin
The elf smiled. “Êl síla erin lû e-govaned vîn, Dolunay, Nyx. I am Inglor Avelorion, and this is my friend Almarrin Woden.”
Almarrin bowed, but his attention was moving on. “Classes, Inglor.”
“Brother,” Inglor clamped a hand on his arm. “Are these your manners?”
“I bowe…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Go pound em, Ezra!!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Yes, the Alven have pointed ears, but they’re regular size. (Luna is adorable)
Inglor
Most of the students here walked in shadow as if fear itself lurked in the corners. They also gave Almarrin and him a wide berth. He frowned, the dance in his step diminishing.
Then a smile, one bright,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Actually, I don’t know. XD
Lyn and Grimm might be fun, since they haven’t really run into each other very much in the other RP.
And Lynn may have some fun.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
The poor baby!
Also, I have an idea for a scene for later after Alwin has met some more charries in which he gets knocked over and… his backpack falls open.
But for now…
Alwin
An annoying buzz sounded overhead, calling Alwin’s attention to his slow feet. He sped up, his worn t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
My phone is about to die though, so It would be better if you introduce them, while I hunt for my charger.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Sure! (Nyx and Almarrin…that would be hilarious)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@wilder-w @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 (November!!!) @koshka @freedomwriter76
Reúven
Golden sunlight splashed across the crowd of students, staining everything in light. Reúven squinted at the brightness and shifted his eyes away.
Better to not burn spots into his vision.
Viktor walked beside him like a young soldier going to court martial. The b…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Go ahead!
I just had this scene pop into my head where Luna and Inglor meet!
“Well, hello, little sister.” Blinks at her purple hair and eyes with a slightly bewildered ‘where are you from?’ expression.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I’m just going through the forum, and what should meet my eyes?
THAT SCENE WAS AWESOME! And hilarious, and sooo sweet! I love the way Riker swaps from understanding friend to protective brother. It’s perfect!
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