Rylie Goodwin

Daithí MacLassair: about 18-19 years old, 6′ but lightly built. A red fox in the book, Daithí has Flame red hair that comes down partially over his ears but not in his light hazel eyes that miss nothing and tell less. Foxish features. He’s the nephew of a Lasairin Clansman, and has devoted his life, and death, to the cause as a spy and assassin. H…[Read more]

Wilkins OLaith: about 16 years old. Is a gray fox in the book, a boy here. About 5’6″, and of a slight but strong build. Has tousled grayish-brownish-blonde hair cut a bit raggedly but shorter than Daithí’s. Dark eyebrows and lashes make his misty gray eyes stand out all the more. He’s a resistance fighter, yet with a gentle voice and a courteous…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Bwahaha!!!

Actually, there isn’t much to worry about when it comes to Wilkins… Daithí may be another problem, but the two both need help, er, development.

Awww, no body better hurt those poor darlings!

@godlyfantasy12

I hope I got what November would say right…

The Twins

Run? The very idea! Vulkasin crossed his arms, face solemn.

Zlatan stepped back slightly to think. He ran one hand down the back of his neck, winced. “Then v’at would happen to you?”

“You…you don’t understand.” Novembré frowned and tugged at his curls. “I’m……[Read more]

@sarafini

I last mention I could find of her was on page 231, but then I don’t know where she went or with what group.

I was also skim reading so may have missed her.

@freedomwriter76

AHHHH!!! You’re back!

I can’t wait to read more about Fin, and all those other charies!

And…

I may need to add in a character in desperate need of development. You see, I wasn’t going to worry too much about him because he wasn’t in the first book. But now that’s changed (mad author laugh) and I need to figure him out. So, I…[Read more]

@felicity

I’ve self-published a standalone short story, two short story collections, and a novel. I prefer self-publishing, personally, for the freedom it provides and for the opportunity to work with my own choice of collaborators (editors, artists, etc.), but I would like to try traditional publishing down the road as well for the sake of…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

So, I’m not sure if this happens for your fire elves, but a friend of mine has an elven character that has a fire talent and I’m sort of mixing her’s with what I know of November. Anyway…

The Twins

Novembré’s breath grew heavy and his eyes went wide as the implication of their words seemed to sink in. Sparks flickered in the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yep, I’m on.

I’ll RP as soon as I can.

@whalekeeper

Ah, I see. I’m not sure though, maybe they do. I haven’t come across an explanation yet, but I did see it done, just the last letter in a name.

I may need to come back to this after some study.

@godlyfantasy12

Whatever you like! I would love to hear your ideas. (Or should that be read?)

@keilah-h

Thanks, that sounds cool 🙂

@whalekeeper

Disclaimer: I’m definitely still a student of Russian anything, and names are one of those things that are described as ‘very difficult for RSL’. Please take whatever I say with a grain of salt.

What exactly do you mean by context? Female or male? Tense in a sentence?

@lewilliams

Diminutive forms are like nicknames, only someone…[Read more]

@esther-c

XD Wow. XD

That was so cringey but hilariously cute at the same time.

Santa Claus?! XD

*Wipes tears of laughter from eyes*

I’m really not sure how to critique it. The prose is a little choppy, but the story itself is distracting me. XD

Candy cane fingerprints!? XD A magically appearing mistletoe? (That particular bit was pure…[Read more]

@esther-c

That was like a Hallmark movie, only even better! XD

The candy cane fingerprint was probably the funniest thing for me.

@whalekeeper

*Tip toes in*

That’s happened to me for the past few years of church camp, and I have no idea why! Some random boy I’ve never even seen before walks up to me and asks if I have a boyfriend.

And, uh…I really don’t see why. I’m not the most friendly girl out there ( for instance, my normal resting face is very serious, almost a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

The twins

Zlatan had to force his hand away from his sword hilt, stretch out the fingers in an effort to calm himself down. That man…if he were here now…he pulled in a deep breath and clasped his hands behind his back.

“Yes. Ve need to move on, to look for zem.” He looked over at November. “Zere are many people in zis place…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Screeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee…..

*Loud squeal, obviously*

That would be so much fun! Please do!