@lrose5
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Idea Poll in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
They both sound intriguing, but I think I…
Have a problem with indecision.
But why not cast my vote along with the overwhelming tide? Shall I be contrary enough to build it up against the current?
No, no. I think I genuinely agree. I prefer the possible struggles in the first; the family quality of a father and a daughter, and a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m called Elishavet around here, (also known by my Middle Earthian friends as the Rangeress Aenwest of the Morningstar. By those who know the Shining Isle, I’m a little historian living in Kigor, a town about two day’s travel from Rysen. Narnians know me as that nosy cloaked lass that…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
thanksss
Thank you!! And yes I did make it. I make all my graphics on Canva, the app on my phone or laptop. Free version. 🙂 I’ve been using it since i’ve been writing and really love it. So now I make the graphics for the pins for KP’s pinterest 😀
Ok, awesome! Thanks so much!!!!
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
(Is it way too late to throw one of mine in??)
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KattheWriter and Light are now friends 2 years ago
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
(Tw- (this is probably my favorite show don’t tell, but my most gruesome chapter) shows a physical attack (beating her up) and cruel words. BUT DON”T WORRY it’ll all be better soon.)
Chapter 4
X392
I sat there for a long time, gritting my teeth, and trying to not scream my lungs out as I laid in the grass. My cut felt like there were hot…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
(Tw- None)
Chapter 3
Nathaniel
I started sweeping the front porch of the store, using hard big strokes to try to get the layer of dusty dirt off of it quickly.
I was about halfway done when I saw a woman and girl walking up the pathway. I stopped, to let the dust settle so it wouldn’t get in their eyes.
The woman was tall, and nice…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
(TW- mentions murder. Aka my Morally grey character’s past that makes him now morally grey 🙁
Chapter 2
Roger
After staring at the ceiling for a long time, I finally got up. There’s no way I could get to sleep. Not on a night like this… not this one. I got up and walked towards the window, the full moon sending light through it, but sto…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
I gripped the bars of the cell so hard my knuckles turned white.
I thought he had changed.
I thought he cared.
He did it.
The thing I never thought he would do.
I felt like I was in a haze.
The noise of chains met my ears.
He said he understood.
He helped me.
How could he?
I staggered and gripped the bars harder.
He said he…[Read more]
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KattheWriter started the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Hey Guys,
I’m going to be sharing my Novel, Finding You, chapter by chapter on here. I shared the beginning snippet (and some character collages, so jump over there if you’d like to see!) and quite a few of you liked it and thought I should put it on here. I will be adding it chapter by chapter, and will probably start with the first 4, as the…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Lol, to be fair he emailed it instead of saying it on here XD. But he also gave me an essay of eveything wrong with it. BUT i’m not against critique, i’m definitely for it. But when your critique is against even proper writing… (like he thinks i should info dump at the beginning and not start in the middle of the scene???…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
@orielle21 Thank you! So if I go start posting my story on here would you like me to tag you? 🙂
@freedomwriter76 Thankkkksss ^-^ I’ll tag you when i do soon!
@gwyndalf-the-wise That’s totally okay, whatever is chill. Chapter 4 is the one that makes the sensitive ones a little uncomfortable (very detailed of X392 being beat up) but on the…[Read more]
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KattheWriter and Folith-Feolin are now friends 2 years ago
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
That’s totally fine, no worries! Thank you so much for the help and explaining 🙂
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
I mean.. If I could add chapter by Chapter section to put my book on here, I would. But i’m not sure if that’ll count as spam even if I just keep it in one of these whatever they’re called. Posts. Or has anyone else done that? Like updated it as they go?
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
also… I love how grammatically correct these boxes all bc all of why i’m typing it’s like going
“Ahem? Hello, but you are terrible at grammar.” Like yes. Ik. Thank you. XD I can write well if it’s in a book. Kinda. But just typing like this I write like texting.Stop personally attacking me Kingdom Pen xD
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
@godlyfantasy12 Yess my poor girl.
And yess. I do love Roger so much (especially in chapter 27 we show him being SUPER SWEERT and i’m dying of feelsss) our morally grey character that is the fan favorite, BUT Nathaniel aka NATE AKA CINNAMON ROLL BOI will always have a special place in my heart.
Oh yes. I got a message the other day of one of my…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
@godlyfantasy12 loll i’m not gonna say names, but it’s ok. I just think when I publish i’m going to send him a note and say “To the guy who said I could never publish: Thanks for the motivation. :)” bc yes, spite was a great inspirer to never give up.
But thank you!!
And actually I think awhile ago, like a lonnnggg while ago I sent in chapter 4…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
OH and our Villain >:) General Seznick
(This snippet of what will be done in a future chapter 0.O)
“Stop me?” My harsh laugh echoed through the warehouse, “Silly little girl, don’t you know? You won’t be fighting me. You’ll be fighting them.”
My smirk grew as the kids, the other soldiers, she knew and grew up with surrounded her with…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
“I’ll find you, Grace.” I whispered through the tears.
Was it a pledge or a plea? A desperation to be enough or a doubt that I ever could? Would I find her just to loose her again?
No. I couldn’t. I won’t.
Two stone heads burned in the back of my mind, two names scrawled on top.
No. I couldn’t lose her too. I won’t be the only one le…[Read more]
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