@lrose5
Active 2 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Katherine replied to the topic Magic systems!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom Cool forum topic!
Your magic system sounds so cool!!! 😀 I love that it has a chemistry base//chemistry inspiration!
For my current fantasy novel, the magic system is kind of like “powers.” I guess a better way of putting that is that the characters have magical abilities. Depending on what country they’re from determines what…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 It makes me so happy that you like him so much.
I would like to.
Yosí
They called the boy their Snowflake. It did fit his white hair and blueishly pale complexion, although it might have been given him for more reasons. Snowflakes were beautiful and precious, and they were never the same.
His large blue eyes…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Sorry y’all, I’ve been really busy lately. (There was a Quiz Tournament this weekend.) Things are also going to continue busy for… A long time. XD I should still be able to do one RP a day, but… We’ll see. As of right now, if I don’t RP just put Yosí wherever it’s convenient. 🙂
Also!! I think I might have…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Drawing Your Sweet, Apparently Traumatized Little Charries ❤ in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
@Whalekeeper no worries! I gotcha 🙂 You don’t have to do mine, I know what it’s like to have too much art to do and not enough time or energy XD
I hope your break is restful and fruitful!
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Kathleen replied to the topic Writing Clubs? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ooo, I’ll have to look into that! I love seeing different creative ways of doing writing challenges and contests.
Nice nice. I look forward to seeing your thoughts!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 THANK YOU. I feel that way about your writing, actually. You write a character’s mind SO WELL. 🙂
It was thrilling to write! XD
But NOVEMBER…. *gasps in worry*
Yep, Yosí is definitely going into “please let me help” mode now.
Fun fact, because of the way he watches out for the other captives, he has a little stash of m…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
These characters…. *Weeps*
… they’re awesome and they don’t even know it.
Yosí
The strategy was set; the battle growing near. Little pricks of madness were sparking in the back of Yosí’s mind as all else fell into focus.
This man, Yosí knew these men.
“November!” Grimm’s voice echoed through the passag…[Read more]
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KattheWriter and Kathleen are now friends 1 year, 9 months ago
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Kathleen replied to the topic I'm writing a book in a different time period…… in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Interesting question! While I don’t know too much about New York during that time period, I do know that around that time electric power was still in early development and telephones were becoming more common, but were still considered a luxury item.
I did little research about New York (Specifically New York City) in the year 1899 and here’s…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
So I was close on Naja! (I thought she was around elevenish.[I just wasn’t sure, so I went with actions that were young, yet I sometimes do at my great and notable age. 😉 Which just goes to show how well I write ages.. [and why I love Children’s Ministries.].) I was wondering how old Jonathan was, though.
But…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 I like your playlists! Dan Bremnes used to be one of my favorite artists 😄
I’ve been working on Bronwen’s playlist! Not all of these are clean, so I’ll include a disclaimer next to the ones that I know have language.
The Chain – Fleetwood Mac (mild language)
Rounds – The Oh Hellos
Lipstick – WILLOW
Everlong (a…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
NOOOOOOOOOOOO! (screams a garbled mix of Bible verses, Hebrew, and elvish, because that’s what my day’s been like. XD)
But still. I AM FURIOUS.
HITCHENS us about to be tackled by several whirlwinds of characters. XD
Yosí
Safe? He gave a short laugh.
“Who knows, maybe I’ll die!” He grinned until he realized…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
@artsy-dragon yes!! One of my favorite things about designing mythical creatures is getting all sciencey with them XD
Like, designing them in a way that makes sense for their environment. I actually had a field-guide of mythical creatures I started drawing when I was 11, I could show you some time! It would be fun to redo it now that my art is…[Read more] -
Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Three things.
Grimm is amazing! He has earned himself a very loyal friend just now.
And – WHO DOES HITCHENS THINK HE IS, A MADMAN? If so, then he’s right.
Second, IT’S LEON!!! I love that guy.
Also, if the others come right smack into this…. O.O
Anyway…
Yosí
“What’s he look like?”
He stumbled, the li…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic Help Needed Concerning Writing an Article for KP! in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year, 9 months ago
Cool! Here’s some tips that have helped me with article writing:
1. Write about something that is meaningful or has personal significance to you.
2. Before writing ask yourself: “What problem am I trying to solve?” this will help guide your research and writing.
3. Brain dump every and all thoughts and ideas you have on the subject…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Yosí
His mind stumbled a bit before gathering all the names. The little girl named Naja watched him with large eyes, innocence glowing in her face. Even the grave man, aptly named Grimm, seemed kind in his way. Yosí slowly let out a breath.
Right.
“We were just searching for some food for the rest of our gro…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
THANK YOU AND YESSSSS! They really do need to.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
I’m so excited I’m struggling to get my fingers to write this.
Also, he kinda thinks about what he’s gone through, I don’t know if it would be icky or not, but just thought I’d mention it.
Yosí
Oh, he was a fool. Yosí let out a short laugh as he watched the latch swing… The broken patch swing…. In the wi…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Do they have to have a spark of goodness??? in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Interesting question, and I can definitely see where you’re coming from. I think we want to teach our readers something through all our characters, not the least being the villains. Because of this we often want our reader to sympathize with the villain a little, but this isn’t always what’s needed. It depends on what role your…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
So it seems to go, starting from the conversation on whether and how to add Yosí, like this:
Pg. 324
- My intro RP for Yosí
- Freedom’s RP for Leo (which was super cute!)
Pg. 325
- Godly’s RP for Paxton (also adorable; I love Paxton.)
- my 2nd RP for Yosí
And that may or may not be right, considering RPs lik…[Read more]
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