@lrose5
Active 3 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Good. Poor, dear November. 😂🤣😂
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I beg the pardon that I was too shy to beg before.
*Falls to knees*
There were no stairs in my RP. It was a figure of speech in which the pile of garbage made the height of the window less.
But of course, if stairs would make things easier, they can be there. Clearing the rubble might prove rather difficult, but it’s not like…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Uh oh. XD Vulk is the only one (besides their Mother) who has ever gotten away with calling him that.
Correct me if I’m mistaken, but I was thinking that the tower had several windows, this one being the lowest, and that they were trying to get to the chambers inside the tower, not the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
I have arrived!
Mikkel
November was obviously in a lot of pain, one hand clamped to the side of his white face.
Three long scars crossed under that hand, their brilliant red jerking at Mikkel’s breath.
After a moment the torrent seemed to fade. The lad’s teary eyes opened.
Phantom…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
*Screeeeeeeeeeeech*
(Just to be sure.) Did you just say that Abelard is Aadelheide’s older brother? Like, Leon’s wife, Aadelheide?! So Abelard would be Leon’s brother in-law?!
Or am I pretty totally and completely confused? That’s possible too.
Oh, and the scene was fantastic! I loved it and definitely need the rest!!! 😉 (…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Aww, y’all. That was pretty awesome to read through.
And now…
I hope nobody minds where I take this.
Alyona
Nerves were strung, spirits low. She glanced around to see everyone on the ground breathlessly watching those who weren’t.
Eva had the darling little girl. Even though NadÃan was…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Character Templates! in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago
@anatra23 ooh! I may end up using that sometime.
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Pen_for_Christ205 changed their profile picture 4 years, 1 month ago
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Pen_for_Christ205 replied to the topic Please Help Me Steer A Conversion Conversation in the forum Plotting 4 years, 1 month ago
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Pen_for_Christ205 replied to the topic Please Help Me Steer A Conversion Conversation in the forum Plotting 4 years, 1 month ago
Thank you so much!
These really help a lot. Now I know who to contact next time I have a problem. 😉🤍
God bless!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 thanks! She is adorable.
@koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Viktor
It wasn’t such a high climb. Not ideal exercise for that time of night, but no help would come if waiting.
It was the safest place.
Viktor began to speak, but was silenced by the sight of Vulkasin astride the window. In one fluid motion the Voyager had scaled…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Blackened stonework, narrow threshold, tall glorious window. The tower at last.
But everyone seemed concerned on how to enter, all gathered round the refuse pile of a door.
Whatever they were trying to do. He had found the window.
It wasn’t high; stretching he could almost…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I Want To Pummel Someone.
Hard.
Ooohhhh………..be glad I’m on the other side of the internet, buster.
And please, what happens next????
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
And I’m on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Finally)
By the way, Sorren and my villain Ocran would be very interesting together. Mainly because they’re both cold and, well, conceited. Ocran does have rather complicated reasons for what he does. A lot of mental justification. In the end, if course, he’s really j…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 4 years, 1 month ago
You’re making me want to go make collages for all my various MCs, especially Mikkel and Wilkins.
Wait…you haven’t met Wilkins yet…I should definitely do one for him.
Anyway, as Elishavet said, I have marine family too, so Michael already had a special place in my heart. Also, is Asher a submarine captain?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Wowsers y’all. That was a lot more than I expected.
Sorry for not getting on. I try to stay off my phone on weekends.
OH, and @freedomwriter76 ? Michael and Mikkel definitely need to meet, both being marines (although Mikkel would be like ‘Sorry chap, I’m a King’s Mariner’).
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Pen_for_Christ205 started the topic Please Help Me Steer A Conversion Conversation in the forum Plotting 4 years, 1 month ago
Hey, y’all!
I need a character to help another come to Christ. These are always really hard for me, so your help would be very appreciated.
So the character who needs to come to Christ is named Thorald (for now). He’s a villain and he’s done much to hurt Richard (the guy who’s trying to convert him). He hurt both him and his fiance A LOT and…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 4 years, 1 month ago
Oh, those are delicious! (If that’s a proper adjective to use in any such like situation, it is here.)
Jennie’s is beautiful (sooo sweet.), and I think of the last three I especially liked Michael’s and Jayden’s. (Some of our family are Marines, so I might be a little biased. Just a little.) 😉
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Ava Blue started the topic Character Templates! in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago
Hey y’all! Do you guys have any character templates you use? I’m working on making one right now. So far, I’ve got basics down (appearance, backstory, etc.) and I’ll post it here once I’m finished. If you have any ideas as to what I should add, let me know.
Also, you can post filled-out templates for your characters here if you like 😀
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Book Topic Updates in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka thank you! Not even Grammarly caught that. There is more to the story, that snippet isn’t actually supposed to be the first scene. Bronwen is hunting rocky mountain elk in late autumn when she realizes she made a mistake whil navigating and she can’t find her way back; then the rest of the story is just an excuse to write about…[Read more]
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