@loopylin
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ah, that’s still really cool though! He sounds awesome!
Teo can if you want, though I’m not sure how he’ll react quite yet lol.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @loopylin @smiley @esther-c @hybridlore @acancello @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin
@felicity (Are you still alive? XD I’m kidding, I know life probably just got busy. I’d love to chat sometime though if you have time.)
Ignore the tag if you like!
I’m writing out of order, anyone want to read a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Okay, great! It’s such an interesting concept, I wanted to see how it worked and if it could help with some character building!
So, my character’s name is Teo. He’s interesting because for the longest time, every time he had a strong emotion he died and came back in another world (that power came from a mysterious…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@scoutfinch180 (I love your name btw) @rae @loopylin
Thank for the suggestions 😛 I do still like Ransom and I will use it somehow, whether or not it’s for this character. I’ll let all these names simmer some more. Right now he will go by Ben, until something sticks.
Also completely random, but I really like him as a character now XD I named him…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin @rae @otherpeopleI’mstrugglingtonamebecauseIdontwanttobotherpeople (Tags are so useful, eh? XD)
Character name needed!
Okay, so I have a cute side character. He is from Project Chrysanthemum/Baztet, and he is basically Babs and Marcel’s little brother. He is super scrawny and weak, has fluffy white hair with orange speckles und…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @jonas @calyhuge @beth-torres @grcr @smiley @whalekeeper @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @acancello @keilah-h @princesachronicle22 @idk
I just got a great idea, but I’m not sure if it is so great.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Accidentally scared any possible friends away with my thinking face. XD
XD You get ‘em, girl.
Just checking you do have friends, right? Just checking. Because I would be surprised if you didn’t, and very sad.
Also you went to, like, real school? I’ve only been in a homeschool group.
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Enid replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
XD No. It’s a Disney cartoon that has just two seasons. It has fun characters and a really well planned out story with a good ending.
Good to know.
It also has a really weird sense of humor which I really enjoy, but I’m a bit strange so…
That’s the best kind of humor XD
No 🙁 I only saw the first before we got rid of Netflix
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay, yeah, Alpha is handsome, and strong. Magical, with a lot of sway and power. Skilled, fearless. On the outside he’s just a great warrior, on the inside…idk. He doesn’t know either.
But then, I don’t think seeing your fiancé covered in blood would be that nice.
Alpha does have a girlfriend later on named Emerald…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin lol that’s too funny
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I remember being confused when my old school friends had crushes on very annoying, trouble making boys in our class.
XD And people tease you about looking at boys or talking about them, and you are genuinely confused because you obviously don’t feel that way.
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Enid replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
I think people tend to forget that humans are irrational. We don’t always do things that make sense. So writers try to rationalize their characters’ bad behavior by giving them tragic backstories.
(Maybe? Idk, just a theory)
Right. Someone I was talking to was like, “there always has to be a reason!” And I’m like, “uh, sinful natu…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
Yes, that’s what I was saying.
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Enid replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
Like Gravity Falls! (Have you seen it? It’s the best) You never even see the parents’ faces.
Oh, like with the Peanuts? I haven’t watched it, but I might now that you’ve recommended it. Hilda became a hit in our household, and I was watching it a couple nights back when I first got sick, trying to catch up XD Off topic, but did you see…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
I also like emphasizing in my stories the fact that people don’t need trauma or terrible tragedy in their lives in order to struggle with sin. Everyone has problems to overcome, even Average Joe with his calm, happy, suburban childhood.
YES, this. I’ve tried to explain this to some people and they don’t get it for some reason.
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I think that is awesome! I don’t have any theological problems with that. I tend to avoid doing robots and stuff, because I don’t believe that such a creation would have a soul, and I would usually rather avoid writing about those topics. I haven’t thought about how that would extend to a human created in a lab. There’s nothing biological about a…[Read more]
*either not dither
I don’t like to play with sentient and rational robots, honestly those creep me out. The idea of Alpha being originally a a robot made out of flesh came from me just thinking about him. It was really weird, I was talking as Alpha to his best friend Terry and it just spilled out. I was making it up as I went, but it sounded like it was a set piece…[Read more]
That makes sense to me. I think we’re pretty much on the same page.
I haven’t thought about it in depth, but from first glance, I don’t have a problem with it either. I guess it would depend also on how he was created. Did they take human DNA to create him? If that’s the case, then I think he would have a soul just like any other person, because the rest of us are created with human DNA, even though the process of…[Read more]
He was made from mixed DNA, to give him the traits Grathmere wanted. I believe most likely, he was made the weird 3D printer way at first, and developed from there.
He was actually interestingly enough, not made to have any moral compass. He was supposed to be a heartless assassin that did what Grathmere wished. He’d have limited free will, but…[Read more]
I think that’s a really good idea. I don’t find any theological issues with it. Er, I don’t really have any other comments ATM 😅
@rae
I like the idea! I think it makes sense that he would be without breath at first, and I think that God could definitely give him a soul if He chose
Ooh, ok. So I see where your doubts are coming from. Here’s my opinion…
I believe that as soon as a baby is conceived in the womb, he (referring to either gender in this case) is a human being with a soul that is loved by God. Obviously he cannot physically breathe yet because he’s only a few cells. But when he is born, God is ultimately the O…[Read more]
@rae
I really like this idea!!!
I think this is a fun idea. I don’t think there’s any theological problems. Is this your fantasy, or something else? If the first, then I wouldn’t think theological and scientific problems should be your primary concern, because what you say goes. Even if your more into hard worldbuilding, you can build up a distinct theological system that is…[Read more]
@thearcaneaxiom Yeah, this is in my sci-fi/fantasy Galaxy. Alpha is one of my main charries.
I don’t think this is too weird an idea for a sci-fi universe. It’s basically like God put literal, actual life in a body which was built, not born. Like a machine built out of flesh and bone, it was working, but it wasn’t alive quite yet. I think the way he explains it is a little strange, but that’s an explanation and can be modified a bit.
My only issue is that if his heart was going but not his breathing, he would die pretty quickly, so maybe he was effectively “dead” with neither organ working, and when they tried to “jump-start” him, his heart started but not his lungs, and then when they were confusedly trying to figure it out he started breathing.
That was a weird explanation, sorry….
It makes sense…in fact that was the way I pictured it in my mind, just Alpha sometimes says things weirdly, and leaves out parts.
I believe the term for during but still coming back to life by revival is called “clinically dead”. Not sure if Alpha falls under this or not, though…
Ok, good, it made sense…lol