Loopy

@koshka @loopylin

Moth

Well done. Moth’s chest rose a little.

He tilted his head in a sort of shrug, eying his attempt. It looked like he had some skill – even though that was not true. His initial wish for the shot had been much humbler. “I must make offerings to serendipity in my sleep. How do I know where the arrowhead will fly?”

@liskaboyce

Yeah, the middle part of a story is always the weirdest part. Koshka and Quicksilver made good points. I think a huge part of it is coming up with obstacles, and then connecting them to lead to the midpoint.

Follow-up question. Is it possible that the structure isn’t the issue, but that it’s incredibly difficult to think of actual…[Read more]

@koshka

I’ll see if I can borrow this through my library! I was planning to get into my local library this week anyway. Interlibrary loans should give me access to this.

I haven’t read Adorning the Dark, but I’ve heard of it. I’ve heard good things about it. It has a lovely title.

@grcr

In the space of a couple days, we’ve started making new accounts for people again, and this is the result. Lots of people. 😅

This is awesome! Congrats to Whaley and Koshka for becoming mods (I already congratulated Ellette on being the Queen of KP)

@stellybean

Haha! I love that! Robbin Hoodie!

Ooo yes! I love that you would want a fiction big brother. I have a list….. lol

@stellybean

Robin Hood. The original animated one with the fox. I could (and already do) watch is consistently and love it more every time. ❤️

The best robbin hood movie of all. Fight me. XD

@stellybean

Hello hello! I’m so glad you’ve gotten on KP at last!

I’m Ellette! I’m an author if fantasy, dystopian, and Historical fiction for middle grade, YA, and adults. I am also the owner of a publishing company, a content editor, and an artist/graphic designer.

What are some of your top favorite books?

If you could pick to spend a…[Read more]

@lillian

you are very welcome!

No problem, let me know if you are ever open to it.

@beth-torres

@whalekeeper

@renegade

idk if any of you have time right now to critique,  but Lillian has a story to share. Tag some others if you think they would be good sources for fantasy critiques.

looks like I can’t move this whole post to another category, so that’s fine. If you end up doing a second critique/book post i’d suggest you put it under the critique section so it’s easier to find,

Let me tag a couple people for you.

@lillian

Okay, here’s how to tag people.

If you look at our profile picture along the side of the posts we make, we have our name under the picture and that’s in green. Below that is an “@” with the user name next to it. So you would see “@lillian” under yours. Under mine you would see “@ellette-giselle”

You can type out or copy and paste…[Read more]

Hello hello! I’m so glad you’ve gotten on KP at last!

I’m Ellette! I’m an author if fantasy, dystopian, and Historical fiction for middle grade, YA, and adults. I am also the owner of a publishing company, a content editor, and an artist/graphic designer.

What are some of your top favorite fantasy books?

If you could pick to spend a week wi…[Read more]

@quarterstaffgirl

Yep! Absolutely.

@power actually got me into it.

Steinbauch is from my most recent. I just finished it a few months ago,

@quarterstaffgirl

Same!

I do! I’m going to put it up in the livingroom of my new home soon. Currently it’s in the closet. XD

Ooo, I think Ekhard Stienbauch. He’s pretty self centered. (and I didn’t pick one of the villains because I felt like that was cheating, lol)

@liskaboyce

Wow this is so cool! I love the characters! I especially have interest in Cassion (perhaps because I’m partial to the shared name, lol) and Vincent.

@lillian

Hey! I’m so glad yo0u are sharing your writing! I like the feel of the first chapter, and I LOVED the video! That song is always a favorite, and the aesthetic is peek!

Do you mind if I move this to the story critiquing topic? Also, if you are interested in readers and feedback, tagging a few Keepers and asking if they would read it…[Read more]

@lillian

Love the characters!

Are you open to art swaps?!

@lillian

oh also, I’d love a bread recipe sometime! I’d love to be able to bake bread for my family and so far have only mastered French bread.

@lillian

Ohhh! That art is so pretty! You do people very well!