Loopy

He’d bled on the floor more times than he cared to tell her. He hoped she wouldn’t notice more faint stains.

Bruh

@godlyfantasy12

So you’re trying to present Ara’s world to the reader before the inciting incident happens, and you don’t know how to translate the inner world to the outer world?
If so, wait a minute. We have the same problem. I’m trying to write the same thing. XD

The best I can say is to come up with a meaningful, but normal situation that re…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @looylin @kielah-h

Just to be clear, the flowers are bushes outside of the house. I don’t think I mentioned that.

Gabriel

“Was that your blood?”

Gabriel looked back at the rug, and nodded. He’d bled on the floor more times than he cared to tell her. He hoped she wouldn’t notice more faint stains.

“So are these the monsters you w…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Wolfgang 

He deposited the heavy weapon on the table with a clatter. “You’d win straight off if I tried with that–– Or I might actually knock your head off. I’m going to get my sword… just don’t hack at it if you please.”

He spead to the door and vanished. Racing down the corridor he leapt in the air with a whoop befo…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @rae @loopylin ok i’m back

Sniper

Gabriel walked around like he knew the place.

Sorta reminded me of, well, me during the war, when I was wanderin’ the old halls of my dad’s lab back on Staten, my earliest memories reactivated.

“Is this where you lived with that old man? Your master?” Lucy asked.

“This is where he found me.…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Wolfgang 

He surveyed the shield before setting it on the table. “I don’t need one of those.” He lifted his left hand in the air and tried an experimental flick of his wrist and shuffle step. The sword point wobbled and struck the floor. Wolfgang frowned. “These are very heavy weapons you have. I don’t see the sense in them…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ooo! I love this!

Also yeah, like @elishavet-pidyon said! Writing calls! I’m not sure how to make it accessible to everyone because not everyone uses Google chat. Which is what I normally use for calls. But we can figure it out.

@godlyfantasy12

You wrote more than 50k words, which is a lot of emotional effort when writing the series of your dreams. So first off, that’s awesome. You’ll have plenty of material to edit. You’re definitely burnt out from that. That sounds normal to me.

I’m currently at an ADORABLE bookshop/cafe and slowly wanting and feeling the nudge to g…

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@whalekeeper @rae remind me to write an rp later today (I have something I have to do but I also wanna do this)

@loopylin

Callum

The Stormwatcher legacy was impressive. Scary, even. Callum could imagine having visions, since he already knew half of the experience. Ellis had something to contribute to his family – something helpful. Maybe it didn’t require much ingenuity, which was something Callum needed because he had no born powers. But it sounded…[Read more]

@rae @keilah-h @loopylin

Lucille

Hydras were from storybooks, and even then, Lucy wasn’t exactly sure what they were. They sounded worse than a copperhead at any rate.

“Was that your blood?” she asked, pointing at the rug.

@whalekeeper Thx @loopylin @keilah-h

Gabriel

“This is where he found me.” Gabriel stood, walking to the window and throwing back the curtain. Outside was a sea of delicate white flowers with pink centers, the origin of that sweet scent. “I had been bitten by a hydra, he stumbled across me looking for the person who was killing the monsters in…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Trevor

Huntress pointed ahead. “There’s an exit this way, although I don’t know what it leads to. Be careful, we could be walking into a trap.”

The group followed her cautiously. The tunnel seemed to narrow round them, causing them to walk in a single file line. Trevor was feeling alright until he felt some sort of stone press down un…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

No worries. I like the response.

who says he’s leading a rebellion…..

Wolfgang 

He nodded eagerly, then eyed the sword with a critical glance. “I like you’d snap my rapier in two with that thing. We don’t use swords like yours nowadays you know. I wish we did,” he added with a longing glance toward the sharp sword…[Read more]

@rae

Let your crew know. You shouldn’t be concerned about how strong or weak you look.  That’s a minor issue. Falling over is a major issue. I’m not trying to wildly speculate, but isn’t there a possibility that you lose balance on a boat and pitch over? If you don’t tell anyone, there’s a risk of hitting your head or worse.

Many, many people…[Read more]

@rae

Works with me :] I will switch them on the doc

@keilah-h @loopylin

Lucille

“Is this where you lived with that old man? Your master?” Lucy asked.

@elishavet-pidyon

Wolfgang is far too scatterbrained. If anything he thinks it’s a costume or interesting traditional clothing. That boy doesn’t stop to breathe, let alone think things out like this.

Wolfgang 

“Wining the Olympics is one of the highest honors! I would love to fence in them, but I’m not sure that I would be skilled…[Read more]

@rae

I’m so sorry that happened.

I have a few thoughts, but I want to shoot you an email because I’d rather say what I have to say off-line.

It’s late/early depending how you look at it and I had the sudden urge to post this here.

I think I told you guys about my presyncope which is basically the fancy term for getting lightheaded and falling over without passing out.

Well, Friday I had a bad day where I felt occasionally dizzy, my head feeling like I had been hanging upside-down.…[Read more]