Kylie

@loopylin @raxforge

Sprite kid don’t get it. XD

Sypher

He followed the lasses in, settling into the seat be across from them.

“Eddie. Ellie. Ah.” He blinked at her in concentration. Grinned. “I am named Sypher, but everyone who doesn’t call me that, calls me Syph. As for dancing, or rather…I don’t believe I understand. What days are open”

@ellette-giselle

Leo

He grinned. “First off you’re going to sit on that couch in the basement break room and sort a bucket of bolts and screws that I accidentally dumped together last week. Or maybe that was two weeks ago.” He paused to blink up at the ceiling for a moment, then refocused on Rory. “Anyway, you’ll do that while I check the work…[Read more]

@esther-c

It looks a lot better! One thing I noticed is that Antonio does say “fabuloso” twice.

“Then the topic conveniently comes up in a conversation with Easton.”

Also, I feel like this might be better if you just change it to “Then I can ask Easton” or something like that. Otherwise, it looks great! I like the way you made Hallie more rea…[Read more]

Turns out, my brother’s cord was broken in three places. This may have happened because of how much he’s grown. Because of the scar tissue around the cord, the fluid is still able to pass through his body safely, and he doesn’t need surgery!

Done, and officially less stressed about the assignment now.

@loopylin

What do you think? Pretty sure your email is visible on there as well as mine.

I’m good with it. *thumbs up* It might be a good idea to post it on your profile, rather than directly on the forum.

@freed_and_redeemed

Hehe, it definitely is. XD

@savannah_grace2009

Awwww!!!

But in six months he’s moving to Florida for college…..😭😭

At least I have a little brother <333 I love him to DEATH…I literally love him so muchhhh

That is so funny that your MC is named Hallie because (I know I’ve told you this before but Imma say it again hahaha) my little sister’s name is Hallie!!! so it’s just…

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Hey guys! I’m going to work from 2:15 to some undetermined time. I have to jot down the full outline for my senior thesis, and go down some hopefully valuable rabbit trails. You know how research is. I’d love to have company!

@theshadow

Ooh, I’ve also got to add in the part about the gov trying to pass a new law that allows them to persecute Christians, but I haven’t figured out when yet.

@theshadow

Great! 😁

Okay, I see what you mean. Are you thinking like, within their friend groups? Most of the story so far takes place either at school, the church meetings, or their house. Later, though, there will probably be a lot of scenes at their respective job assignments, so you’ll get to see more of the culture then. Do you have any i…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

The pocket thing. XD

Leo

The lorry rolled to a squealing stop. It’s doors swooshed open. Time to move.

Leo braced against the back of the seat in front of him as he helped Rory to his feet. Then they shuffled down the aisle with Silvia and Quincy close behind. The steps squeaked under their feet.

Students filled the sidewalk…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*Gasp of joy*

He’s perfectly amazing. I love the goggles. They may now end up in his character design. And the tools. Yes. XD

Kinda want to change my profile pic now…

*Suddenly realizes I’ve never done an aesthetic for Leo. Or his book*

@liberty

I enjoyed the ending as well…though not at first! 😂

Yeah, I knew that was probably going to be most reader’s reactions. I actually let one of my non-kp friends read it and I think it majorly confused her. XD

I love your descriptions and adjectives! Some examples: smogish, hard nailed, smutted.

Thanks!

I am curious, though. How did Timon a…

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Oh wow, that was a bit of a lore dump

I want to contribute, but this isn’t really advice, because I’m not that experienced. (Disclaimers, disclaimers, you get the drift.)
I enjoy making an environment that challenges the character. That way, even if the villain is average, I can make up an elaborate floor-plan for the fight.

In Baztet, the city is colorful and fun, but it also has a…[Read more]

@rae

I really wish i could draw like that.

Giiirrl, stop roasting yourself. Thank you, though!

@theducktator

Ok! That will be something I’ll add to my notes. 👍

@grcr

Yay! Thank you!!

@savannah_grac2009

Girllll, you’re so sweet!!! 🤪🥰 Seriously, your reaction really means a lot. 😊

That was actually kinda my goal—I wanted this story to be someone’s comfort book, because I loosely based a few aspects of it off of my comfort books. (I’m no…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

What are your thoughts on catholic reconciliation? (For those who don’t know, reconciliation is where catholics go (supposed to be at least every month) to confess their sins. And then they are forgiven for them.) And what questions do you have. (That definition is the most simple version, there is more to it.)

I basically a…[Read more]

@theshadow

Praying as well! <3