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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 hours, 17 minutes ago
Ok so first of allllll, sorry for replying an entire month late 😭
Second, I think Jonas made some really great points! I totally agree with him.
I’d also add that there’s a reason cliches and tropes exist–and that’s because they work. Oftentimes they can be overdone and end up boring and predictable, but they can also be…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 hours, 31 minutes ago
Aaaaah, I can’t believe how long I disappeared for! I got distracted with blender, and ignored this, but I want to come back! I’m posting this so now I have to do it or I’ll embarrass myself :p
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
Ari
Remember the dance. Steel met steel. Blades in parley. Feet flit over sand. Sweat began to bead and trickle in the morning sun.
The dance of a swordsman.
Every step reflected years of focus. Each attack and defense discipline and training. Years upon years of his life had been–and were yet to be–dedicated to the mastery of this…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 20 hours ago
You did fine! It was fun to read. I really like the spy concept. We just need to predict how the boys are going to be shuffled around, since most of them are in convos or predicaments right now. We’ll figure something out!
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 20 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon
I’d say the rp is sleeping, not dead ;-p
Jasper
“I elected to come here. My dear mother said it wasn’t necessary, and my dear sisters wanted me to stay behind. But although I appreciated their concerns, I dearly wanted to get out of the nursery. I had to kill two of three darlings,” the Firstborn joked.…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
He frowned, then took a small, black earpiece out of his pocket. Bryce shoved it in his ear, listening as the robot-assistant greeted him with artificial happiness.
Since everyone is from the same world, and everyone else is accustomed to a less than modern tech level, we must assume Bryce is from a superdeveloped country or something…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
Here is the intro, with just a few small edits!
~.~.~ Royal Academy RP: New Intro ~.~.~
With the many glowing windows of a bustling manor, and the softly veined pillars and floors of a palace, the Royal Boys Academy seems to want nothing. Its double doors are carved with fantastic creatures, sometimes touched by the vines that grow…
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
Moth can take his time making friends who are actually…friendly…
*Squints at my character*
Moth: *Frowns* “Begging your pardon, but Ari is perfectly friendly. I don’t understand what you mean.”
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
*Nods* Sounds good.
Right now Ari is working out much needed irritation in the form of violent therapy. Moth can take his time making friends who are actually…friendly…
*Squints at my character*
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
My author doesn’t usually trust me with stuff like this. But it’s obvious she thinks I’m inordinately fire. She’s prob making a mistake.
I’m not in school rn. I play the guitar, usually electric if something hasn’t destroyed the cables or whatever. That happens a lot. I’m Baztian. I also like energy bars and bacon cheeseburgers…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
By the way, Moth will find Ari after dueling with Ellis. He made a promise last night to spend time with Ari and fully intends to keep it.
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
His name is Bryce Callan Sullivan. He works as a student/agent in a society and he works to recover lost legal files, information about certain institutions and other stuff like that. He can attend the academy (disguised as a prince) to determine whether or not the school is a threat to his society.
That sounds really interesting,…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
Moth
Ellis and Moth tested each other for a minute or so. Neither boy knew the other’s style yet, so while they both attempted to attack, it was more of an effort to understand each other than win the bout.
Ellis had a confident, yet thoughtful way of wielding his sword. He had clearly practiced the same movements many times, but k…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
This Bryce fellow sounds interesting. Go ahead and throw him in somewhere and we’ll see who’s available/in his way to interact with. Most everyone is at the school gymnasium for morning exercise (or croquet [or conniving]) so that’s where I’d head.
My character, Ari, is currently training with a fighting instructor inside the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
You know, looking at their chart, Lucian and Ari might actually get along pretty well if standing at the edge of the same room and watching people can be termed getting along. That or they’d quietly distrust each other. XD
Also, your drawings of Lucian and Ellis are adorable.
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Wow, I step off to read a book and people start talking. XD
Sorryyy
@ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon
Jasper
“If that is how you address people, of course you may. What exactly does your family do? I have not heard of you before.”
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon
Wow, I step off to read a book and people start talking. XD
Ari
Jasper hadn’t drawn Remington far enough away for an Eldar’s ears to not mark their exchange. Not that he’d understood more than a phrase at a time.
Not that he listened.
Of course, if Remington’s hushed exchange had been…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Lucille
Lucy stared at everything. Mel’s home didn’t look anything like hers, but most of the objects had some familiarity to them. They looked almost normal but made with weird shapes, colors, or with parts Lucy didn’t recognize. The television didn’t even look like a television – it was just a black square. State-of-the…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Why does whatever this is feel like a cult
That or a writing community. XD
Corporate wants you to find the difference…..
Pfffffff…
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Hey Jaybird. :-] Can u pls tell me y we haven’t been allowed to do this sooner. My author never lets me access anything. Who even are u?
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