Linus Smallprint

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The Narrow Path Trilogy Book 2
 
Character:
~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Martha. I just really liked her and could relate as an older sister. Some of her struggles felt similar to my own.

Eric was really interesting and fun. I also really liked James.

Alan…[Read more]

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You gotta set it up like one of those quizzes someday. You know, the one people always use for scheduling group events that I can never figure out how to make.

@rae

I always name them after book or movie characters. (mostly books)

For instance, this time around we have Mathias and Cornflower (Redwall)

Puss-in-boots and Kitty Softpaws (Puss In Boots)

Matimeo and Iris (Matimeo A Tale Of Redwall)

And Joe Shanks (Green Ember)

Try books and see who works. I did Jane Austen once, Lord of the Rings,…[Read more]

I’m kind of behind (and a little stuck at the moment :/) but I’ll hopefully have my fist chunk soon.

@rae

Hmm… maybe Winter? I can’t think of anything else atm.

I like Hybridlore’s suggestion.

@linus-smallprint

ALAN BECKER DOODLES YES I AM NOT ALONE

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NEW CHAPTERS

30-31!!!!!

@keilah-h

I haven’t seen it yet, but I’m hoping to.

I’m glad they didn’t completely ruin it. (though I still can’t make myself call that girl Astrid. Astrid will always be blond and blue-eyed in my mind)

Did they try to push any political stuff or hint at weird relationships?

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NEW CHAPTER 28

See if that fixes things. I bookmarked it, but I’m not sure if people will see it.

(I also sent this KP post 5 hours ago and it didn’t load.)

@hybridlore

Thanks.

That’s it? lololol.

What do you think of his new situation?

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

28-29!!!

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Thank you! Our plans have been rescheduled, unfortunately, but no one else has gotten sick. Hopefully the four who have escaped stay well.

@jonas

I’d love to, I just don’t see myself having the time. I’m leaving in July for a big trip across country, plus I’m doing a tone of my own writing and editing, and running a business. I think I might be swamped. 😑

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

26-27!!!

Ending at :55, having written about a page and a half.

My family is finally in bed. Sprinting at :25

Actually I’m writing once my family is in bed because I keep getting interrupted.

Joining at :45 until I can no longer resist the pull of the puzzle in front of me.