Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint

Dude. Ai has been asking me these questions!

*stares in horror*

😂

Of course let me know. I’d love to help with the third book! Just let me know. Maybe while you’re on your online break you can draw a bunch of illustrations! *hint hint* 🙃

@hybridlore

Thank you! I know, I was thinking the same thing when I looked it over again. 😂

Glad it feels realistic. I kept breaking his character here in the other drafts, so I’m really working on taking it more slowly. (Even if it makes me want to shake some sense into him!)

First, how would they get Jonathan back into the…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

 
~FEEDBACK~
The Narrow Path Trilogy Book 2
 
Character:
~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Martha. I just really liked her and could relate as an older sister. Some of her struggles felt similar to my own.

Eric was really interesting and fun. I also really liked James.

Alan…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

You gotta set it up like one of those quizzes someday. You know, the one people always use for scheduling group events that I can never figure out how to make.

@rae

I always name them after book or movie characters. (mostly books)

For instance, this time around we have Mathias and Cornflower (Redwall)

Puss-in-boots and Kitty Softpaws (Puss In Boots)

Matimeo and Iris (Matimeo A Tale Of Redwall)

And Joe Shanks (Green Ember)

Try books and see who works. I did Jane Austen once, Lord of the Rings,…[Read more]

I’m kind of behind (and a little stuck at the moment :/) but I’ll hopefully have my fist chunk soon.

@rae

Hmm… maybe Winter? I can’t think of anything else atm.

I like Hybridlore’s suggestion.

@linus-smallprint

ALAN BECKER DOODLES YES I AM NOT ALONE

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NEW CHAPTERS

30-31!!!!!

@keilah-h

I haven’t seen it yet, but I’m hoping to.

I’m glad they didn’t completely ruin it. (though I still can’t make myself call that girl Astrid. Astrid will always be blond and blue-eyed in my mind)

Did they try to push any political stuff or hint at weird relationships?

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NEW CHAPTER 28

See if that fixes things. I bookmarked it, but I’m not sure if people will see it.

(I also sent this KP post 5 hours ago and it didn’t load.)

@hybridlore

Thanks.

That’s it? lololol.

What do you think of his new situation?

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

28-29!!!

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Thank you! Our plans have been rescheduled, unfortunately, but no one else has gotten sick. Hopefully the four who have escaped stay well.

@jonas

I’d love to, I just don’t see myself having the time. I’m leaving in July for a big trip across country, plus I’m doing a tone of my own writing and editing, and running a business. I think I might be swamped. 😑

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

26-27!!!

Ending at :55, having written about a page and a half.

My family is finally in bed. Sprinting at :25

Actually I’m writing once my family is in bed because I keep getting interrupted.