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MineralizedWritings posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
What would ya’ll think of the title, “Afterthoughts of a broken heart”? for my second book? It’s almost a little bit cringe but it sounds much better than afterthoughts of a releaseor.
@freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 (If you’re not back yet that’s fine! 🙂 take your time!)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@princessachronicle22
Is that the group with Corvina? If so either Lyn and Nyx will need to leave or Corvina. Which isn’t a problem 😊 I can make that happen
also I don’t think @lightoverdarkness6 is on KP rn
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6
So not sure who went last for our group with Lyn, Dylan, and Zyrin. And I was thinking about things we could do and since I wanted Phervin to meet Dylan, I was wondering if we could join up with the group with @therarcaneaxiom?
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Allison posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
@esther-c @euodia-vision @felicity @freedomwriter76 @janellebelovedpig @booksbyjayna @landric @lightoverdarkness6 @sarahsmile
Hi everyone! Im officially back on Kingdom Pen! We now have internet and I can be on here more often! I missed you all and cant wait to see what you all have written! Our family move went amazing and im so thankful to be…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @keilah-h @freedomwriter @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Ooh those were such fun RPs to read y’all! I’ll write one for Serin and Kun’en when I have the time, not sure who they’ll end up with but we’ll see I guess!
Also Loopy, love these villains but if they hurt Dante… 😡😤
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
Allen
Smoke bomb!
He knew this tactic well….
His eyes stung as he staggered through the clouds, temporarily blinded.
He had his blaster out, but was afraid to shoot while he couldn’t see, not wanting to hit any of his companions.
As he…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings
You guys can group the charries however you want, but I plan on having my three stay together. Other than that I don’t care.
Dante
For once, things were going well in the castle for Dante. There were no sea monsters, no deep fountains he h…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 ok!
(Lol Serin Stabby Stick 😂)
@keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Here’s their descriptions.
Callin Maddox: about 5’11”, bulky, strong, dark skin, intelligent, doesn’t like getting his hands dirty, his species has natural armor plates on their back and arms (kinda like an…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 ok! Imma do it now.
(Lol Serin Stabby Stick 😂)
@keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings
Can I break this giant group up now by adding my villains in?
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings
Dante
Ara smiled sweetly back, but Steve asked a question before Dante could react.
“What do you mean Serin has murder in her eyes?”
Dante glanced at Serin. Currently, the only thing in her eyes was a mix of surprise and joy from disc…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @loopylin @princessachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Arabella
Ara smiled as Steve introduced her, and felt Asher tighten his grip, flushing a bit as Steve introduced him.
One of those in the other group, a young boy-or man? She couldn’t tell- a different race from her own, flashed a smirk her w…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My new WIP idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
Imma tag a few other peeps who might find this interesting. 😀
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings (another dystopian writer! 🙂 ) @lightoverdarkness6 (for when you come back 😊)
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Allison posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @ esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision
I am soooooo sorry about not being on KP! Our new house has no internet and it is really hard to find someone who will service where we are. My trip went amazing and so did the move! I love my new house! Already some friends are planing to visit! I miss you all so much on…[Read more] -
Loopy replied to the topic Loopy’s Space Comic in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 Y’all asked for this
@power I used your alien with bushy pink eyebrows idea XD
@ava-blue @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @kyronthearcanin @awsumfaith
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Having Dante introduce people is one of my favorite things to write I don’t know why XD @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h
Dante
“Who are all of these people, Dante…???” Steve whispered.
Dante looked around warily. There were a lot of people he didn’t know, but he did his…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76
Allen (I honestly don’t remember when I RP’ed last for him, so here we go….)
“Serin, do you know them?”
“Not all of them…” Serin looked around. There were several new people.
Dante seemed to recognize one of the human men,…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h
Dante
“Dante!? Hey, it has been a while…how are you doing? Is…something wrong?” Steve’s kind blue eyes stared at him, waiting for a response.
Dante cleared his throat and glanced down at the ground. A recent memory was playing in his mind.…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic New Book Release! in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @theloonyone @esther-c @hannah-beth @thearcaneaxiom @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian @awesumfaith @janellebelovedpig @booksbyjayna @eudio-vision @princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @sarafini @whale-keeper @keilah-h @80sTrish @solfyre @gwyndalf-the-wise @katherine…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic Fantasy Animals! in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 11 months ago
Calling all mythology geeks + fantasy lovers! What are some of your favorite fantastical animals? This is research for a world of mine, which I just started building. Hopefully I can turn some of these creatures on their heads!
@godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @keilah-h @awsumfaith @folith-feolin @loopylin @theloonyone (I think that’s your tag?) @lightov…[Read more]
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I like it, but it reminds me more of a romance novel than a dystopian, but that’s just my opinion.
Afterthoughts of Regret
Afterthoughts of the Shattered (this one’s kinda vague but could also refer to being broken emotionally)
I do like Afterthoughts of a Broken Heart, though. =)
@freedomwriter76
ok, thanks! <3
@gwyndalf-the-wise
XDXD it is basically a romance. It's dystopian, but most of the entire plot is about Layson trying to find a wife. It follows him on a really long journey as a releasor, but it's established early in the series having a family is his most important goal.
<3
XD Nice! Than I vote definitely keep Afterthoughts of a Broken Heart, it fits!