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@freedomwriter76

Ooh, cool! Glad to hear you had a great Christmas!!! I got clothes, mostly, which are always appreciated, and notebooks and pencils and the black combat boots I wanted!!! 😀 😉

Awesome!! Ooh, combat boots are cool! I got my first phone!! And a character workbook!

They do look pretty good…especially the guys…XD

XDXD

I’m glad they…

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@arien

LOL yes, that was a sad day. Actually I wasn’t supposed to put even ONE chipotle pepper in there . . . it was supposed to be one can of seedless mild green chiles, and I used a can of definitely NOT mild and also very seed-ful green jalapenos. As I said, sad day.

Lol!! Was the soup good? (If it wasn’t too spicy) 😀

That’s what sisters are…

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@power

Hello! I don’t think I’ve officially met you yet. Nice to meet you, Power (or Black Mongoose 😉 !

Congratulations on writing 1000 words! 🎉

Thank you!!

Interesting story, though I will admit that I don’t read many books with abusive situations in them though (Unless you qualify knights/cowboys/spacemen attempting to kill/steal each o…

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@freedomwriter76

*hugs you, tight, back* I missed you too!!!! I did! Had a great time with family and got some gifts that I will be sure to enjoy!!! 😀 I hope you had an amazing Christmas too! <3333

*Hugs you even tighter* *hears you gasping for breath* *releases you* Oh, I’m so sorry!! XD

Awesome!! That’s great!! Yes, me and my family had a great…[Read more]

@starofthenorth @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @arien @theloonyone @keilah-h @esther-c @sarafini @Any-one-else-i-may-have-forgotten-

Heres Matthew and Lyla’s moodboards!!

@freedomwriter76

Girl!!!! *Gives you huge hug* I missed you so much!!! I hope you had a amazing Christmas!!

Oooh…Jezyk! That’s all I’m gonna say…XDXD

Aww, yay!! I love Fin!! But *sobs* well, you know. He’s so sweet! Him and Riker’s relationship is so sweet!

YAY!!! I can’t wait for my charries to meet yours!!

@arien @esther-c @lewilliams @keilah-h @felicity @mineralizedwritings @sarafini

Wow, all of y’all’s stories are so inspiring 😊😍!!
So, I’ve always loved reading. Even when I was little enough to not know how to read, I would sit in the floor with a picture book and try to read to myself and my mama.
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@felicity

It was rather cheesy, but…we laughed. That’s all that matters, right? 😀 😀 Sweet!

Lol, yes, that’s all that matters! Speaking of sibling laughs, my little brother is always talking about how many books I read, and he was singing the song from Tangled, the part where Repunzel’s singing “And then I’ll read a book, or maybe two or three.” B…[Read more]

@felicity

Wait, are you sure he wasn’t teasing you? 🤣 It was pretty obvious to me!

Oh, no, I know when he’s teasing, and he wasn’t teasing 🤣. Okay, good!! 😂

@esther-c

Took me a while to reply, but now I am! 😁

Yay! Thank you for taking the time to respond 😊!

First of all, I could really feel the sibling dynamic! Great job on that! Sibling dynam…

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@felicity

*clears throat* Yeah it’s true.

Um, we were having a bit of a joke. We were in the same room, both on KP, and when she said in her intro, “I’m a baby barista”, I put, “hey, my sister works at a coffee shop too!” and…well, we lost it.

Omg, that’s hilarious!!! I love it!! That sounds like something me and my cousin would do (We’re like s…[Read more]

@arien

One thing about writing style: sometimes using more descriptive words for “said” can be distracting and sound contrived.

Yeah, I use said too much. I’ve actually started having my grandma’s I-Pad next to me while I write, and the I-Pad has a list of words to use other than “Said.”

I know, it can be hard not to use “said” all the time, b…

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@mineralizedwritings

Oh, I have heard that one on the radio before!! I didn’t know his name though. Yes, that’s a great song. He’s got a beautiful voice 😍! Thank you for sharing!

@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings

I’m not gonna be able to RP much for the next few days, (I’m helping my mom get ready for Christmas!!) so, y’all can make Matthew and Lyla just do whatever. I trust y’all. Or you could pretend that they disappeared, or maybe you could have your charries  get separated from Matt and Lyla. Whatever…[Read more]

@orielle21

Hello! Nice to meet you and I appreciate the welcome. You would love my yard…there’s a creek running through it and I have to cross a bridge to get to my garden.😍 Now for the questions

Whoa!! 😍 That sounds Heavenly!

Ooo…favorite song changes a lot for me but right now it is Stand by Newsboys. Besides them, I like listening to For King…

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@arien

XD

I’m fine, I’m wrapped up in my blanket and sitting by a fire, so now I’m warm! Thanks all the same! *shoves coat under chair to wait until next time shivers strike*

Okay, good!! 🙂 We’ve got a nice toasty fire going too! Me and my brother just went outside, and we have a kiddie pool that was filled with water, and it’s frozen solid…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

ahh now I can give advice!!!

Yay 😊😂!!

so for the chili/hot sauce scenes and the difference of opinion between ppls, no view is wrong!

This actually is dependent on Light and the tone of her book!

Oh, okay!

So, before you go and change anything Light, you first just need to ask what the tone of your book is.

Is it light, happy, a b…

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@felicity

Congrats on 1000 words! Every bit counts! Right now it’s been taking me about two weeks to write that much… 🙁

Thank you!! Oh, man! Yeah, this is the first I’ve written any other than in the Character Castle, since like April 😬😶. So I guess I have some writing inspiration that’s been bundled up inside me for these last 8 months! I’ve got…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

oooof…I usually don’t give critiques much just cuz I don’t really care too except for when they ask for like a CERTAIN thing, or if I just see something story wise if that makes sense XD….

I just don’t really like critiquing ppl unless they ask for a certain thing and then Ik what to critique, or if I see a certain story eleme…

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@godlyfantasy12

Oh my goodness!! Sweet PAXTON!!! Awww, he opened up to Matthew!! That is SOOO SWEET!!!! Oh, yes, I know they will bond over their shared stutters ❤️😭. I love their little dynamic so much already ❤️❤️!

@godlyfantasy12

aww poor kids! I like it!

I know!! We put our charries through so much 😭😅.

Luv Asher obviously 😂 their sibling relationship is so sweet!

Haha, yeah, I knew you would!! Aww, thank you!! Yeah, I love writing sibling dynamics❤️😊.

Thank you so much for reading ❤️😊!! Do you have any suggestions for the writings style, dialogue,…[Read more]