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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Inspirational Songs and Music Videos in the forum Music 10 years, 6 months ago
This music video is one of my favorites just because it’s so sweet— Story of my Life.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@Bluejay Unfortunately, late nights don’t work well with my schedule, especially since I’m generally in bed by then. Gotta get that sleep to write well.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Things I'm learning in my self-edit in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
YES. Bingo. Perfect. That is one hundred percent what I’m talking about @Daeus.
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Daeus replied to the topic Things I'm learning in my self-edit in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Very good points @kate-flournoy
I love that term, “The inside joke technique” That should be official terminology. It’s a wonderful trick. I do it sometimes, but I should really do it a lot more. It’s profoundly dickinsonian, but it doesn’t have to be plagiarism. I think it can be done in fewer words then he used but greater power.
Now here’s…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 6 months ago
*screams* @Daeus WHAT!?!?
😉 😉 😉 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Things I'm learning in my self-edit in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Yes @Daeus! Totally! The only thing is, you have to watch out for redundant flow:
He raked his fingers nervously through his hair. “So, this is just like the first one, only more complicated?”
She nodded. “Yup.”
He exhaled loudly. “Right.”
Her lips twisted in a little smile. “You okay?”
He swallowed. “Yeah. Yeah, just great, thanks.”See, it’s…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy Yes, splendid idea.
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Daeus replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 10 years, 6 months ago
@christi-eaton Where did you get the link from?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus aw man, in that case I should have pounded it completely off and then asked you how it felt! 😛 *starts looking around for gavel* Now where did I put that thing? 😉
Love it, @writefury! Love it love it love it! I agree with Daeus— that one line
There. I can’t even see it anymore. I’ll be fine.
is awesome. And you’re right— tha…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 10 years, 6 months ago
Wow, yeah that really is amazing! I guess you both really like animals, huh?
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Daeus replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 10 years, 6 months ago
Success! I need to go celebrate. Where’s a fifty gallon tub of ice cream?
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Daeus replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 10 years, 6 months ago
Oh, wow! It worked. So you can use the link to a Facebook image too. Let me try twitter.

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Daeus replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 10 years, 6 months ago
To post images, I believe need to have a link to the image (at least I know of no other way). click the “img” button and insert the link for the image and then click ok. You now have an image. The only way I know to get a link for an image is to upload it to your media file on a wordpress site. You can then click on the image in…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 6 months ago
There. I can’t even see it anymore. I’ll be fine.
Genius! Histarical
Suddenly, Gilligan barked loudly, standing up from his dog bed and walking over to the door. Jean and Jazz looked over as he barked again.
Can you not say suddenly? Sometimes it’s ok, but here it takes away all the suddenness.
“What?” Jazz turned in his chair so he could s…
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Daeus replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@overcomer I guess that’s fine so long as her hand doesn’t short circuit in the process.
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Daeus replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 6 months ago
Awe, I don’t know Kate. It was just there, ya know? Don’t worry though. This will give me great insight into characters with withered hands. My novels are gonna just go crazy now.
Oh, yeah *goes and reads about Cobalt*
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Daeus replied to the topic Tales Untold in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Or a dragon who has to save the prince from the princess.
Ha, that’s funny cause I’m actually writing something like that right now only the dragon does a terrible job of saving the knight (a frog does it instead) and I’m using and evil Rapunzel instead of a princess.
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Daeus replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@overcomer I don’t think it matters, but I’ve always included it as text in the email and they’ve excepted that
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 6 months ago
*horrified gasp* Oh my goodness @Daeus let me see it! *drops gavel with clatter, springs in terror from her seat* Oh no, why did you have your hand there!?!?
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Daeus replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 6 months ago
You should really write about a character who takes gavel swinging practice
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