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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@liberty Okay let’s see…
-Good archer
-Hunter
-Plays one or more instruments
-Very nice green eyes (lol I just think green eyes are so cool)
-Does Psalm 23 imply that he himself is a shepherd or comes from a family who worked with sheep, or is that just his favorite psalm?
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 4 weeks ago
@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint
It has been a very long time since I last posted on this topic (3 months apparently). First, I’d like to thank everyone who read my draft; it was a huge help, and helped me re-evaluate my entire story.
Second, I re-evaluated my story and have chang…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 10 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 10 months ago
@liberty That’s cool. Great job on the board btw.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 10 months ago
He has at least one brother, or brother-in-arms.
He stands up for what’s right, even if it leads to conflict.
He knows falconry and how to battle on horseback.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 months, 1 week ago
Ok, critiques/comments to come later, but I was able to sit down and read through it for now. I love it! I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD
There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those, but…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 months, 1 week ago
Oh, I just saw this and decided to investigate. XD (Now I really wish I checked my notifications more often. Lol) Sorry it took me so long. And I won’t be able to read through it until later today or tomorrow. 😢 Still, so excited!
Liberty’s Rangers story!!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 months, 1 week ago
I read this two weeks ago when you first posted…and then forgot to actually reply. *facepalm* Anyway, I enjoyed this a lot. The POVs seemed different enough to me.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Gotcha.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I definitely got that difference, but having you explain it helped even more.
Is Jace younger than the others? You described him as a boy multiple times.
Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?
The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
@the_lost-journal @keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @grcr @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas and @liberty @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @koshka @power @freed_and_redeemed @stephie @MineralizedWritings
My family went to a museum full of fossils today, which sparked a discussion…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 11 months ago
I’ll participate!! 😄
@keilah-h @rae @loopylin @jonas @liberty @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow (Your guys’ tags didn’t go through, for some reason.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION
Sorry this is so short. Bridal shower and 3 graduation parties……… plus more. It’s a crazy day……..
The next morning, Leon and Julian enjoyed a hearty breakfast with Amarin, Adeline, and Andreas.
“Ho…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION
The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
June 17th
The EmpireWe’ve been traveling for two days now. No sign of soldiers, thank God. The closer I get the stronger I feel that this is indeed what Go…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
It’s my sister’s birthday so I probably won’t post today.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
“They’re back!” yelled a child’s voice.
Leon scrambled to his feet and ran for the entrance to the cave. Roland, Liesl and several others followed. They stepped out into the evening light just in time to see the hunt…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I did send it.
Is it not showing up on kp?
I can try again……….
h ttps://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL9D6aaf1E9RWXbHoxKyieEjvr_oJJE97j
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Yes!!! I have.
That’s why I have all the karaoke cuts.
I was trying to send you the playlist I have because It has all the best versions. You see, they went in and muted the voices, and people had better tech than others to be able to do it. The ones I posted are the best.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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